LOL. those are harsh feedbacks T_T
anyways how about this.
scenario #2
LUFFY: ok, so who wants the fruit?
! ZORO: i dont need a fruit.
NAMI: looks interesting, but i have to say no, im a navigator.
USSOP: yosh! then I! ussop-sama will gladly –--
LUFFY: so no one wants it?
USSOP: ~luffy dont ignore me on my moments of greatness~ T_T
ROBIN: how about you mr. franky?
FRANKY: i already told luffy im SUUUUUPER even without a fruit.
ROBIN: i would have taken it, but i would explode to pieces and spill this ship with blood ^^
CHOPPER: scary!!!! dont get it near me luffy! T_T
BROOK: i see, so devil fruits users will die if they eat another fruit, if i have given another life, i would have taken that wholeheartedly----ah! i already had been given another life and i dont have a heart! yohohohohoho!
LAW: that's true, however, blackbeard was the only person who ever had the ability to hold more than one ability. none of crew want that, we prefer coolness.
LUFFY: i can give this to you kin, youre a good guy!
KINEMON: me, kanjuuro and any other samurai will never need magic to get strong---only those cheapskate ninjas do that, its a shame i had consumed a cursed fruit!
MOMO: i would never eat another fruit of that kind, it shamed my honor and one fruit is giving me problems already.
LUFFY: how about you sanji?
SANJI: im afraid i cant luffy...
LUFFY: why?
SANJI: because of personal reasons MERMAIDO!!! i mean, hammers are pain in the ass and IM ROBIN-CHWAN'S KNIGHT! i mean, the old bastard taught me I STILL WANT THE SUKE SUKE FRUIT! i mean....
LUFFY: shishishi! it doesnt matter, youre strong anyway!!! lets just keep it for now.
! after some chapters/arcs/sagas
! ?????: mugiwara no luffy!!! i order you to halt!!!!
LUFFY: eh?
! mysterious guy attacks luffy with blinding speed, luffy dodges it and he returns fire with a G2 pistol, the mysterious guy dodges it using soru-----fight ensues and luffy manages to beat the guy with little effort.
! ???????: hahahahaha! im still no match for you luffy-san!
LUFFY: shishishi! you got a long way to go----coby!!! ^^
COBY: ahahaha...you see im a captain now, so at least im on my way now ^^
LUFFY: by the way, where's granpa?
COBY: he's at his resort house, i come there from time to time but i got my own crew now...i wanted to test my skills a little since i saw you in my jurisdiction.
LUFFY: ah, granpa is relaxing now huh? im wondering why he left the marines.
COBY: luffy-san, another reason i wanted to meet you is because of a message from garp-san, there are two things he wanted you to know...
LUFFY: what is that?
COBY: first, garp-san told me that akainu-san is making extra efforts to acquire the ancient weapons....
ROBIN: the ancient weapons????!?!?
FRANKY: ........pluton.
COBY: and another things is, you and your father will soon meet face to face, baltigo is near.
LUFFY: im not really interested in meeting him... :
COBY: but luffy-san, its your fate. just like my fate to be your enemy....but...
LUFFY: eh?
COBY: but will we still be friends if we meet as enemies in the future?
LUFFY: what are you talking about? you are always my friend. and coby, i trust you to fulfill your share of bargain.
COBY: share of what????
LUFFY: youre gonna be an admiral right? you got a long way to go before you can even put a scratch on me! shishishi!!!
COBY: i will luffy-san, and ill prevail the next time we meet.
LUFFY: oh, so youre gonna beat me eh? let me give you something.
COBY: wha?
LUFFY: take this. ^^
COBY: that's?...
LUFFY: this is ace's fruit. the mera-mera no mi. take it.
COBY: are you serious luffy-san? why are you giving this to me? im an officer of the marines, we are enemies.
SANJI: oi, oi luffy, dont get reckless. no matter how much you know that brat, he';s still our enemy.
LUFFY: shishishi!!! its fine sanji! he's a good guy! ^^
COBY: luffy-san....
LUFFY: coby, do you know that my granpa always wanted for me and ace to be a marine?
COBY: huh? what's it got to do with this fruit though?
LUFFY: use it to fulfill my granpa's wish for him. and master its abilities, if you want to beat me, you must be as good as ace. you know, i have never beat him in a battle ever. shishishi.
COBY: luffy-san, i dont understand you....
LUFFY: shanks gave me this hat as a challenge and a promise. that ill someday beat him...im giving you this fruit, as a challenge and as a promise. see me when i reach the top and beat me. ^^
COBY: with this fruit, i can get stronger...i will lead the new age. and i will beat you luffy-san.
LUFFY: shishishi. ill be expecting you!!!! ^_^
! NAMI: wait a minute luffy! why....
ZORO: its ok nami, coby is a good kid,...and this is how great battles are made. ive seen it from the start and i know that luffy sees a special challenge from coby.
I loved this one!