@Monkey:
Yes, with really huge characters at really huge moments like the finale of the first half.
Which kind of makes this a problematic argument against me lol.
Hence why I am not being a douche about this - I know my position is about as stable as rice paper and if I were some of our forums more unique characters this conversation would be immensely different.
! 1. THE ORDINARY WORLD. The hero, uneasy, uncomfortable or unaware, is introduced sympathetically so the audience can identify with the situation or dilemma. The hero is shown against a background of environment, heredity, and personal history. Some kind of polarity in the hero’s life is pulling in different directions and causing stress.
2. THE CALL TO ADVENTURE. Something shakes up the situation, either from external pressures or from something rising up from deep within, so the hero must face the beginnings of change.
3. REFUSAL OF THE CALL. The hero feels the fear of the unknown and tries to turn away from the adventure, however briefly. Alternately, another character may express the uncertainty and danger ahead.
4. MEETING WITH THE MENTOR. The hero comes across a seasoned traveler of the worlds who gives him or her training, equipment, or advice that will help on the journey. Or the hero reaches within to a source of courage and wisdom.
5. CROSSING THE THRESHOLD. At the end of Act One, the hero commits to leaving the Ordinary World and entering a new region or condition with unfamiliar rules and values.
6. TESTS, ALLIES AND ENEMIES. The hero is tested and sorts out allegiances in the Special World.
7. APPROACH. The hero and newfound allies prepare for the major challenge in the Special world.
8. THE ORDEAL. Near the middle of the story, the hero enters a central space in the Special World and confronts death or faces his or her greatest fear. Out of the moment of death comes a new life.
9. THE REWARD. The hero takes possession of the treasure won by facing death. There may be celebration, but there is also danger of losing the treasure again.
10. THE ROAD BACK. About three-fourths of the way through the story, the hero is driven to complete the adventure, leaving the Special World to be sure the treasure is brought home. Often a chase scene signals the urgency and danger of the mission.
11. THE RESURRECTION. At the climax, the hero is severely tested once more on the threshold of home. He or she is purified by a last sacrifice, another moment of death and rebirth, but on a higher and more complete level. By the hero’s action, the polarities that were in conflict at the beginning are finally resolved.
12. RETURN WITH THE ELIXIR. The hero returns home or continues the journey, bearing some element of the treasure that has the power to transform the world as the hero has been transformed.
We expect the 11th to be Shanks but nothing says it only has to be 1 person - other then of course the emotional fracturing that Luffy could suffer losing 2 close people in his life one a lifelong mentor the other a crewmate - but this of course doesn't help my argument so should be ignored for now.
sigh I've done this twice now for other people. But it's on you this time.
I see you described the Punk Hazard plot there.
Please do so for the other arcs in the series.
Also having a friggin' Tonsil infection isn't going to make him consider his mortality lol.
Tell you what - I'm on days off after tonights Night Shift I'll re-read as far as I can in and then compare earlier arcs to later ones as best I can in regards to plots or you can just beat me over the head with it now I'm fine with either. - But on the tonsil infection I was positive I read that his Doctor was advising him to slow down in the forums from someone like Greg or Stephen but I can't seem to find it I'm possibly mistaking it for someone else saying his doctor should tell him to.
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@Monkey:
So how is this different from now exactly?
It's not - its just the flow is better and it isn't as noticeable - it's not Zoro decimating the entire Whisky Peak with the look of joy in his eyes being interrupted by Luffy taking a leak.
@RobbyBevard:
There's been darkness in most of the arcs. It's NOT a new thing he just started doing in the last year.
It won't happen till near the end of the series, if at all… and ONLY to escalate the threat of BB past that of by then defeated Kaidou and Big Mom and whatever world threatening power BB gets ahold of. But given that BB already directly led to the death of Ace (who also tried to stop him from messing with Luffy) it's a bit redundant.
Either way. Not happening till after Luffy gives the hat back, and is told to keep it, as he is now a greater pirate than Shanks... and that seems like something that has to wait till he's Pirate King... at which point it should all launch into the great world war.
(Also, Luffy needs some old friends to brag to and be his reward after becoming King. The treasure is unimportant to him, and the title is only important in relation to Shanks. He's going to get Sabo back, but that's not quite the same.)
1)Jinbe's big burden IS that he carries too many burdens and tries to protect everyone. Luffy will free him from that one inescapable thing that's keeping him from being happy, just like EVERY OTHER STRAWHAT.
2)Brook is decades older than Jinbe, and he's only a couple years older than Franky.
3)Jinbe isn't from Roger and Whitebeard's era, he's from Shank's... just like Franky and Robin... (Shanks is only two years older than Franky.) and he wasn't really a hugely active pirate for most of that, nor was he inspired or influenced by Roger.
I know that its not a new thing - I'm just saying the subject matter is being handled differently.
Nami being effectively a slave/beaten child with the threat of her entire village's lives resting on her shoulders is horrific to contemplate - a caretaker who raised a child and looked after them able to show the intention of killing that person shows a darkness if not on par with CC then at least on the path to it.
Brook is from the Age before Roger though - Luffy taking Jinbei's burdens is something that would be great to see - but once he is released from those burdens … maybe I've been reading too much G.R.R Martin and my brain is rejecting the notion that tortured characters can be allowed happiness.