@Nex:
In the episode 2: the cut from the marines staring at Rayleigh, to everyone running was really jarring stood out the most. As did one of the ones during the end, when it goes back and forth between the people helping the Straw Hats. I don't remember which, I watched them this morning, but it seemed kind of sudden.
Overall though, like I said, it was a great! I'm about to watch 3 and 4.
Do you mean right after the We Go! song? That's how it was depicted in the manga, they were being chased by marines, who were shocked for a minute over Rayleigh's presence, but then realized they had no time to just stare.
Or maybe you mean after he cut the line in the ground and the music was faded out?
I know there were some awkward cuts in episode 2 and I'm planning on re-doing it.
The one I disliked the most was the one I discovered after I'd released it, which was a cut between two songs, and didn't fit in at all.
Anyway, thanks for your feedback.