Local-chan's Short Stories (Threads merged)
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Well written….
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Nice Work!
CoughWrite More!CoughI wasnt here…
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forgot to post this before, oh well, here it be.
Coming Soon: The TARDIS is seen crash landing on earth. “Where the bloody hell are we?” Micheal asks, the Doctor just grins. “Further away than you’ve been before.” He cheerily pulls a lever on the TARDIS.
“May I introduce to you, the Abominable Snowman!” a cheery old man points, the Doctor and Nami stare at the frozen creature. A large explosion is seen. “They’re using the children!” the Doctor tells Micheal in alarm.
A darkened hand pushes down a button, there is mumbling and flashing lights. “Release the spiders.” The man states as creeping can be heard along the metal flooring.
Cut to an action scene, as a large Yeti tries to attack Nami. “It’s Alive!” the old man excitedly shouts. Elsewhere, a fire starts on the Strawhat’s ship, we see multiple aquatic creatures crawling onto the deck. “The sea belongs to us! We will take back what is ours.” One of the sea devils comments to Robin and Luffy.
We also see scenes as the Doctor takes on what seems to be a living slime, coated onto Nami’s skin. And Micheal uses a baseball bat to smash his way into a department store. We also see scenes where Robin, K-9, Luffy and Chopper assume battle positions against an unknown enemy.
Finally we see the image of the fifth Doctor and Turlough. And the Doctor speaking to Nami. “I can’t do anything about it! I cannot help your world, nor the people who live there, even if it does include the person you love!” he tells her.
We see a few scenes of the Doctor standing in a dank metal room. “Finally, we have waited for this day…..DOCTOR.” the voice talks to him, the scene shifts to a darkened shadow in the room, a light flickers on and off for a moment, and we see illuminated, a single Red Dalek.
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Yea, I know its a wee bit early, but anyways.
Robin looked at the small pile of presents that the Strawhats had left her. She couldn’t remember the last time somebody had bought her something. She unravelled the package that lay closest to her. Sanji smiled, a heart appearing in his eye as she opened it.
“Robin-chwan! This is from me!” he cooed, she smiled a little, it was a finely wrapped bottle of wine. She smiled shyly. “Thank you.” She eyed the small package to her right.
“That one is from me.” Chopper smiled, as she looked at it. “It’s a healthy bottle of water! It will make you feel rejuvenated.” He grinned. Robin smiled a little. “Thanks Doctor-kun.”
A fine aroma wafted around as she opened up Usopp and Luffy’s present, a damp patch spread from underneath it. “It’s meat!” Luffy exclaimed, the juice from the meat starting to drip. “Ew…er. Thanks.” Robin tried to keep a straight face.
Lastly was a neatly wrapped present from Nami, she grinned as Robin started to undo the bow. Robin’s eyes lit up as there lay a small pile of clothes and books. “Happy Birthday Robin.” Nami grinned, Robin smiled. “Thanks Nami, Thanks Everyone.”
Sanji glared at Zoro, who yawned. “What about you Marimo head?” he asked him. Zoro just looked at Sanji. “I don’t do birthdays.” He commented, before going off back to sleep.
Later that night Robin smiled as she nodded off to sleep, a single tear rolled down her cheek. She’d just celebrated her best birthday yet, she couldn’t stop the tears from forming. These people, the ones whom she shared this glorious day with, were her TRUE friends.
Anywho, HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROBIN! Hope you enjoy it <3 luv
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Cool i love to go to robin chan birthday she is cool
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Great, Local. Robin is one of my favorite characters. You truly are the best writer here.
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Luffy's present FTW. Nicely done.
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More than half of the presents were food. o.0
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Wonder if Sanji's miffed that Luffy gave Robin "meat" before he could.
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I dunno, I don't think Usopp would give someone meat. XD
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Oh come on, Zoro would at least tell her 'Happy Birthday' XD (In my mind, he'd do a lot more than that for her ;p)
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nah, I just see Zoro saying that he 'doesn't do birthdays' to anybody on their birthday, it had nothing to do with the fact that I couldn't think of an item he could give her.
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Ah, Zoro's character doesn't seem like the one who would tell someone happy birthday, yet alone celebrate it.
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A short story I done about a month ago for Dinty's birthday, she said it was ok to post it, so here we are:
The Strawhats had docked at a beautiful tranquil looking spot….so they decided to take a picnic.
“Ahhhhhh such a beautiful day.” Nami grinned and stretched her arms out, Luffy simply climbed over the side of the ship and onto the ground, eager to tuck into his food. “I’m hungry.” He complained. Sanji dropped down next to him. “You’re ALWAYS hungry.” He commented, letting out a puff of smoker from his lips.
Robin, Zoro and Franky jumped down off the ship after, followed by Chopper and finally Usopp, who….well fell more than jumped. He rubbed his backside as he lay crumpled on the ground, before jumping up and grinning. “No need to worry, a tough man like me isn’t stopped by gravity.” He boasted, the crew just ignoring him.
“So what’s the name of this place?” Chopper asked Nami who proceeded to pull out a map from seemingly nowhere. “So the island of Telos was there….and Skaro was down here….so that means we are….ah!” she pointed at the map. “Here…at…..errr…” she squinted at the words she had been written down.
“Can’t you read it Navigator-San?” Robin asked, a look of concern on her face. Nami shook her head. “Well, it is an old map.” She made up a quick excuse. Luffy just burst in between the map and her, scaring the daylights out of her.
“Luffy! Stop doing that!” Nami smacked him upside the head. Luffy just grinned. “Robin’s good at words.” He stated before laughing. Robin snatched away the map before Luffy tore it up, and peered at the words.
“Why, the name of the island is easy to read.” She smiled. “It’s quite simply: Raxachoricaphalapatoris.” She read it out loud, rolling it off her tongue. “Raxa-what?” Zoro grunted, not really paying much attention to the conversation. Luffy just picked his nose. “Names…who gives Islands names anyways?” he complained. Nami just smacked him upside the head with the map.
The conversation continued as the crew walked to a small area, it was beautiful; a plain grass field, with one or two lush apple trees plopped right into the middle, a gentle breeze seemed to soothe them all, everyone agreed. Franky was almost in tears, his large arms wiped away the tears. “This place is soooo beautiful!” Chopper stared, wide-eyed. Zoro wasn’t too easily impressed, he just yawned and made his way to the centre of the area. He sat down and rested back, his arms behind his head, he yawned.
“I’m just gonna go sleep.” He told them, and within moments that’s what he was doing. His snores seemed to echo through the silent area. Usopp pushed Luffy. “Tag!” he grinned and dashed off. Luffy just laughed and chased Usopp, trying to Tag him back.
Sanji was the one carrying all the bags, around 10-12 bags were on his person, each over packed with various foods and drinks. He hummed to himself as he eyed Robin and Nami. Robin had sat herself under a tree, idly reading a book. Nami wasn’t too far off, she was busy screaming at Luffy and Usopp for some unknown reason. Sanji grinned to himself, with the food he’ll make, they’ll be sure to love him.
Franky looked at the Love Cook and stood next to him. “You wanted to borrow me?” he peered at Sanji through his sunglasses. “Yea….I need your body.” Sanji told him, keeping his eye on the girls. Franky jumped back a little. “Errrr….I’m not really into THAT.” He told Sanji, who simply kicked the Cyborg.
“Do you see any kitchen utensils here? Any sort of cooking stove?” Sanji spoke, putting out his cigarette and crushing the stub under his feet. “I need your body to help me cook.” Sanji explained. Franky was shocked, but still, Sanji did make some sense. “I’m your guy then.” Franky grinned.
Nami growled at the three young men playing Tag, Luffy stretching in order to make the tag easier, Chopper avoiding by cleverly switching forms at the right time, Usopp firing a barrage of missiles at Luffy to try and stop him. “You should relax more Navigator-san.” Robin smiled calmly at Nami, turning a page in her book. “We hardly get the time to relax anymore.”
Nami smiled and laughed. “Your right, we don’t really…do we…I mean, we’ve had Crocodile, Enel, All that Water 7 Business, not to mention Ghosts, Zombies, Cannibalistic Butchers, Aliens from other planets, blood sucking plasmavores from under the sea…” Nami was listing things off, Robin piped in. “Cybermen, don’t forget about the Cybermen…or the Daleks for that matter” she chuckled her sweet chuckle a little.
Nami shuddered. She’d seen so many horrors over the past few weeks, and none she wished to relive again. “Yeah, I know what you mean.” She agreed, relaxing a bit. Robin just smiled at the younger girl. “Oh and Nami…” a hand sprouted and tapped Nami on the back. “Tag.” Robin smiled.
After a long game of tag, the meal was ready, Luffy was drawn to it. “Meaaatttt…..I need Meaaaatttt.” He complained. The other Strawhats turned their attention to where the smell was coming from, and started to follow the Zombie-like captain.
Sanji grinned at his accomplishment. He’d managed to cook quite a nice meal, the girls would love him forever for it. He grinned as he set the table. He’d sit between Robin and Nami he decided. Placing plates between the two. Franky just took the drinks and placed them into one of his compartments, except for the beer and wine.
Sanji was still placing the plates when the crew sat down. Robin sat down next to Nami, still reading her book, while Luffy sat down next to Robin. “Food!” Luffy exclaimed before tucking in. Sanji was crushed. “But I was supposed to sit…” he gaped. Franky sat down next to Usopp, and Chopper next him and Nami. There was only one person left to sit next to.
“Oi, what are you doing sitting here?” Zoro complained, glaring at the Cook. “I didn’t choose to sit here Marimo.” Sanji scowled back at him. Usopp and Chopper were snatching the apples while Robin used a knife and fork to pick at her food. Nami did the same. Franky’s eyes were leaking tears of joy. “My favourite! It’s Super! How did you know?” he started biting into the meat.
“Luffy….stop that.” Robin complained as Luffy snatched a piece of food from her plate. A hand sprouted up and snatched the food back from him. “But you were taking so long in eating it.” He complained, before stretching over and stealing some from Usopp.
Sanji and Zoro clashed, fighting over the last sausage that was in between the two. “It’s mine!” Zoro told Sanji. Sanji just scowled back. “No way Marimo, that sausage has got my name on.” Sanji shouted back at him, the two went to grab it, but a fork quickly snatched it up.
Nami smiled and stuck the sausage in her mouth. “Tasty.” she grinned. Robin had finished her meal and was sipping away at the wine, engrossed in her book once more.
“Awwwww, is that all the food?” Luffy grimaced, looking at the empty plates. “It was nice…” Robin smiled a little. Usopp and Chopper were still finishing off theirs. While Franky was hading out a chilled drink to Nami.
All in all, it had been a nice day, one that they all needed to use to relax.
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I Know Zoro Would Do At Least A Smile And A Happy Birthday To Her xD
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Yea, I know its a wee bit early, but anyways.
Robin looked at the small pile of presents that the Strawhats had left her. She couldn’t remember the last time somebody had bought her something. She unravelled the package that lay closest to her. Sanji smiled, a heart appearing in his eye as she opened it.
“Robin-chwan! This is from me!” he cooed, she smiled a little, it was a finely wrapped bottle of wine. She smiled shyly. “Thank you.” She eyed the small package to her right.
“That one is from me.” Chopper smiled, as she looked at it. “It’s a healthy bottle of water! It will make you feel rejuvenated.” He grinned. Robin smiled a little. “Thanks Doctor-kun.”
A fine aroma wafted around as she opened up Usopp and Luffy’s present, a damp patch spread from underneath it. “It’s meat!” Luffy exclaimed, the juice from the meat starting to drip. “Ew…er. Thanks.” Robin tried to keep a straight face.
Lastly was a neatly wrapped present from Nami, she grinned as Robin started to undo the bow. Robin’s eyes lit up as there lay a small pile of clothes and books. “Happy Birthday Robin.” Nami grinned, Robin smiled. “Thanks Nami, Thanks Everyone.”
Sanji glared at Zoro, who yawned. “What about you Marimo head?” he asked him. Zoro just looked at Sanji. “I don’t do birthdays.” He commented, before going off back to sleep.
Later that night Robin smiled as she nodded off to sleep, a single tear rolled down her cheek. She’d just celebrated her best birthday yet, she couldn’t stop the tears from forming. These people, the ones whom she shared this glorious day with, were her TRUE friends.
Anywho, HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROBIN! Hope you enjoy it <3 luv
Not to criticise someone who could totally own me in an argument, but Robin wouldn't say 'ew'. She has too much class. Nami's the type who would say that.
And Robin calls Chopper 'Doctor-san', not 'Doctor-kun'.
I know it doesn't have to be perfect, but I just couldn't help it.
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I dunno, I could still see Robin saying 'ew' for somethings, although more of a relaxed murmour.
As for kun, its still ok for her to say it: The use of kun to address male children is similar to the use of san when addressing adults. so since Chopper could still be counted as a child, its ok.
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When is Robin-chan's birthday, anyway?
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February 6th.
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Another random RobinxNami one. Not that great, not feeling too well so can't concentrate. This one was for Tang
“Come on, can’t we go already?” Nami complained as Robin continued to run her fingers over the rocks.
“This rock is old….IMPOSSIBLY old.” Robin murmured to no-one in particular. Nami rolled her eyes, as much as she enjoyed spending time with Robin, she hated being kept in one place.“So is there any treasure around here?” Nami asked as Robin didn’t even look at her, she pouted.
“Do you always think of yourself?” Robin smiled for a moment as Nami grumbled to herself. “I’ll only be a minute.”
“You said that HALF an hour ago! This is just like on a night, one more minute you always say.” Nami complained. Robin frowned.
“Sorry.” She hung her head. Nami was silent for a moment.
“No, I’m sorry.” She started. “You were right, I was just thinking of myself.” She told the older woman, who flashed her a smile.“Well, then, shall we look for some treasure? Allons-y! Let’s get moving.” Robin started to walk briskly, tipping her hat up a little as she held the lantern in front of her.
Nami followed the older woman into the caverns. But she felt somewhat at ease.Robin smiled at the young girl.
“Do you think we’ll find anything?” Robin asked her. Nami shrugged.
“Don’t know.” She smirked. “I tell you what, how bout we split the treasure, 60-40, in my favour. We’ll not tell the guys about it.” Nami winked. Robin shrugged.
“I’ve got every treasure I want, right with me.” She smiled, Nami raised an eyebrow.
“And that is.” She asked, Robin didn’t answer and quickened her pace. Nami felt a hand or two brush against her back, and she swore she felt a tongue give the nimblest of licks to her stomach. -
CalifaxIceburg, aint wrote anything much for these two before, although Califa is quite fun to do
Iceburg groaned under the strains of the paperwork, forms needed filling in, plans needed approving.
He scowled to himself as he started to sign his name away to whatever needed it. He looked up from his desk as he heard footsteps approaching him.Califa swung her hips as she entered the room. Iceburg prepared himself.
“What do YOU want?” he shot daggers at her, she frowned.
“Why the nasty look.” She asked him. “I only came here to ask a favour.” She gave him a dark smirk.
“You betrayed us, why would I give you anything?” he narrowed his eyes.Califa crossed her arms and adjusted her glasses.
“Well, that’s because you can’t get over what we did.” She blushed a little. Iceburg raised an eyebrow.
“But we didn’t do anything!” he exclaimed, she just winked at him.
“Didn’t we?” she chuckled a little. Moving over to sit on his desk.
“I’m sure we could come to some sort of arrangement.” She told him, planting a kiss on his cheek.Califa grumbled as she set about filling out forms, plans and other various paperwork. Iceburg kept a close eye on her, not because he didn’t trust her, but because somewhere along the way, he had found a soft spot for the woman, and much to Paulie’s disgust, Califa got to keep her CP9 clothes.
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It's yuri. Are you expecting me to say that it's bad?
I like how subtile you make the relation between Nami and Robin.
Can I request a Robin/Nami Tashigi/Hina double date drabble? Or a Cindry/Perona drabble?
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Errrrrrrr, well I aint doing double Drabbles so no on the first, and I dun wanna do anything with the newer chars untill I get to know em a bit better.
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Then can I recommend a Konis x Nami drabble?
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sure, dun see why not. I'll do it whenever I get some time.
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Angel Wings
“Ah, Nami.” Konis approached the fiery haired Navigator as she fingered her way through the masses of gold they had accumulated.
“Oh, Konis how are you?” Nami smiled, her eyes blinded by the money that was lying in a pile in front of her.
“Thank you Nami.” The angel smiled and closed her eyes. “You and you’re friends. Thanks to you our country is a better place.” She opened her eyes, Nami never realised how beautiful they were.“Konis….I’ve always wanted to know something.” Nami grinned.
“What is that?” the Angel replied.
“How…..do you take off those clothes? Don’t you’re wings get in the way?” Nami asked. Konis thought for a moment.
“It’s quite simple really. We use scissors.” Konis told her. Nami was quite surprised at the reply.
“Scissors? You mean you cut them up? What a waste.” She frowned. She hated the notion of anyone wasting money for no apparent reason.
“Could you not get different styles of clothes?” Nami asked. Konis just shrugged.“Believe me, it’s easier this way.” She smiled sweetly, and Nami stood there dumbfounded. “One more thing.” She added. Nami, still trying to figure out the concept of clothes and wings, just grunted.
“Kiss.” Konis kissed Nami on the cheek. Nami’s cheeks went beet red as she struggled for something to say. “Thanks again Nami. I wish you all the best in the future.” -
And in less than an hour.
Though my favorite would be 'Better than Gold'.
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Your drabbles need more crack. I want to see Kokoro x Miss Goldenweek.
May I suggest Goldenweek uses Kokoro as a painter's model, then smears herself with "Oblivion Black" :D
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ERRRRRR…........................I'd rather die to be honest XD
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Something I did in about 20 mins last night, not really looking for errors or whatever, just something quick, shouldn't even be called a fic really, more like a baby fic….ficlette if you will.
The Town was bare, smoke plumed out from an open window of a small house, before the roof caved in, there was no sign of life, a once proud church now lay in tatters, its magnificent colourful windows smashed. A small cart had been tipped over; wood splintered and jutted out, its foods now rotting on the ground.
It hadn’t always been like this, this was once a quaint village, children smiling and laughing, travellers from all kinds staying at one of the taverns and inns. On Sundays the fresh smell of meat wafted down from the Butcher’s house, tempting people to buy his wares. It was actually quite nice.
Still. All gone now.
A figure bent over the last remaining living thing in the town, a small flower struggling to maintain life in the now ruined soil. The figure sighed and let a hand run over it.
The last Oharan tipped her hat over her eyes as the tears came, it had happened again, a few weeks of happiness, and then her world was twisted into a dark network of loneliness.
Robin wiped the tears from her eyes as she stood up, taking one last look at the desolate town; she trudged slowly along the pathway, hanging her head. The Lonely Angel.
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Awww, that was very touching. :sad:
It really is sad when you are visiting the place that used to be your home.
Beautiful job, Local-chan!
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It's not Ohara, just a random place that she stayed at that got destroyed while she was there.
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Is this before or after her ass was eaten
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before, it's pre-Baroque.
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It's not Ohara, just a random place that she stayed at that got destroyed while she was there.
Oops! Sorry, my bad!
Still a touching fanfic though.
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Thanks, I must admit, it is quite a nice relaxing ficlette to have amongst the usual happy go lucky stuff. Next up is the sequal to the Ass-Eating fic, just for Carter.
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I dont get the Ass-eating reference…. is that another fanfic or is it canon?
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ahhhhh well you see, many a moon ago I did a fanfic about me eating Robin, as in eating as stab, cut, yum yum.
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Wow. Yet another beatifully written piece of work from you~
I love how that had so much emotion for being so very short.Almost makes me think of what would happen if Robin ever did return to the old Ohara. I know that this wasn't Ohara, but it still made me think of that.
And holy crap I remember that old cannibalistic fic… Nicely written but very disturbing XD
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I was just reading about Japanese aesthetics, and I think you have captured "wabi" or "yuugen" or something like that. I don't really see the distinction. Anyway, maybe you should write it as a poem, even if just as an exercise. It's just a suggestion; do what you will with your art.
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@pirateneko:
Wow. Yet another beatifully written piece of work from you~
I love how that had so much emotion for being so very short.Almost makes me think of what would happen if Robin ever did return to the old Ohara. I know that this wasn't Ohara, but it still made me think of that.
And holy crap I remember that old cannibalistic fic… Nicely written but very disturbing XD
haha thanks, I liked the length of it, any longer and I woulda probably just started rambling about things. I coulda made it Ohara like, I don't even remember why I chose against making it Ohara lol.
I was just reading about Japanese aesthetics, and I think you have captured "wabi" or "yuugen" or something like that. I don't really see the distinction. Anyway, maybe you should write it as a poem, even if just as an exercise. It's just a suggestion; do what you will with your art.
um…...thanks, don't really have any idea what you are trying to say tho.
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I just thought that your story would work well in a poem format. Either way, it's a beautiful story, and I think it's brevity only adds to its beauty.
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hmmmmm, I dunno, I dun think I could pull off a poem one and make it work as well. But thanks anyways ^_^
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poor robin…
great job local-chan :happy:btw, i love your new avatar, where did you get that?
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oh this old thing, oh just around you know.
Anyways, Thanks for all your kind words, I dunno why but my fave bit in this fic is still the 'Still, All gone now.' line, as if she's gave up trying to think otherwise.
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Notes: Robin tells Nami the truth. Thats all there is to it.
Robin looked to her feet as the young Navigator asked that taboo question.
“So who have you got waiting for you? Back home I mean?” she had asked, Robin just pretended she didn’t hear, continuing to flick through her novel.“Where are you from?” Nami asked the Archaeologist.
“Ohara.” Robin stated. Not looking up, Nami thought for a moment, before wandering over to a stack of maps and atlases.
“So who is waiting back home? A Brother? Sister?” Nami asked, shuffling her hand through the various items in the pile, silence.
“Your mother? Father?” was the next question.“No nothing like that, not anymore….” Robin’s spoke, a hint of sadness in her words. There was a pregnant pause; the two girls continued with their daily routine, the silence was broken once more.
“Nami, I’m sorry….I lied to you.” Robin placed her book on the small desk and wandered over to the window, her eyelids closing as she sighed.
“I lied because I liked it, I thought if I lied to you all then I could pretend that they were all still alive.”Nami gave Robin a confused look as the woman continued. “I told you I was from Ohara, the reality is I am the last of the Oharans, my home was destroyed by the Marines, Buster Call if you will.” Robin’s hands clenched as Nami let a hand rest on her shoulder.
“I’d give anything just to see that sun rise over that huge Tree once more.” Tears rolled down Robin’s cheeks.
“Tell me more about your home.” Nami asked Robin, trying to keep the happy memories in her mind. Robin smiled a little.“It could only be described as beautiful, the sunlight glistening over those mighty branches, and when it rained everyone would take shelter from underneath it. Some evenings when the sky was clear you could climb the bark and lay under the stars, practically being able to touch them.”
“On Wednesdays, when Market was on, vendors would give away free succulent fruits to any passers by, trying to get them to buy their wares. On the seaside, the sand would melt beneath your feet, further down a stream wound its way up a small mountainside, you could sit there for days and get lost in the world, or if you’re like me. A book.” Robin trembled as the tears continued to run down her cheeks. “But all that’s gone now.” She grimaced.
Nami couldn’t do anything, she felt so helpless. It was then that she had an idea. She picked up one of her papers and handed it to Robin.
“It’s my map of the world Robin, could you show me where Ohara is?” she told Robin, Robin just smiled and pointed her finger onto the paper.
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Not bad. :)
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Nice emotional touch. I liked the ending.
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Not bad.
Pretty touching actually.