cute ^^ I really loved the ending the best
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Ahhhhh thank ye all, it was a nice emotional one. I do like the ending to this though, sorta keeps Ohara alive somewhat, that was the point I was trying to reach.
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another nice fic from you ^^
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The spirit of Ohara lives on….
Your fics own...and your writing style's pretty loveleh. Even in the cannibal fic....
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Thanks =3 It's always fun to write Robin stuffs. <3
And I do believe I will always be known in the fanfic world as 'THAT Robin fanboy who wrote the cannibal fic.'
Oh well =3
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Do you post yoor stuff on any other sites, such as DA or Fanfiction.net, or not?
has a crappy short (as in 188 words long) fic on DA where the plot was Spandam, serving as a sock puppet for my own evilness, kills Fester from the Addams Family, but it's crap…
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I posted a NamixSanji and a RangikuxHanataro on adultfanfiction….thats about it really, I sometimes post em on my LJ tho.
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Isn't Nami's goal to draw the world map, as it hasn't been done yet? :/
Otherwise, a good story. :)
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Not one of your best, seeing as I couldnt really see Robin expressing her feelings much. Still, pretty good writing.
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oohh…. very nice fic, Local ^^ I really like it. I really like how you picture Robin and Nami interact here. very good ^^
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very nice…awesome
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Pretty freakin' awesome! This one almost cried.
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Heso!
I really loved that Fic. It seems like something that Robin could do now. She can talk about her lost homeland. If Nami where to draw the location of Ohara on her map that she is working on then Ohara would almost seem to live again.
Great work!
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@Masa:
Isn't Nami's goal to draw the world map, as it hasn't been done yet? :/
Otherwise, a good story. :)
The fic is set sometime after Water 7, possibly even after the main story itself, I do believe when Nami is drawing the map, then she'll want to have Ohara on there, no?
Not one of your best, seeing as I couldnt really see Robin expressing her feelings much. Still, pretty good writing.
Ah, well, that is the point of the story, Robin doesn't say anything about her past so everyone thinks that her homeland is still there, of course we, and Robin know better. So this is basically a story where Robin feels bad about lying to people, and ends up enjoying sharing the good memories of her home with Nami.
oohh…. very nice fic, Local ^^ I really like it. I really like how you picture Robin and Nami interact here. very good ^^
Ah thanks, initially it was supposed to be her with Luffy, but I decided nah, as we saw with Nami, Luffy doesn't really care what the backstories are with the crew, he just wants them to be happy. So I thought who else? Nami? Yes!
very nice…awesome
Thanks =3
@Mrs.RoronoaZoro:Pretty freakin' awesome! This one almost cried.
Thanks, although sorry for making you nearly cry.
Heso!
I really loved that Fic. It seems like something that Robin could do now. She can talk about her lost homeland. If Nami where to draw the location of Ohara on her map that she is working on then Ohara would almost seem to live again.
Great work!
Ah thanks, thats pretty much the exact point I wanted to bring across with the fic, so that Ohara would live on in Nami's maps.
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I just thought that your story would work well in a poem format. Either way, it's a beautiful story, and I think it's brevity only adds to its beauty.
you know, I think I may try a poem version sometime soon, I dunno if i'll be able to pull it off tho, well, time will tell.
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oohh… Local... this story is too sad.... ;_; beautifully written though.... really add to the reason of her act at W7 (running from SH, refuse to be saved etc.) a very touching story sniff
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Thanks, I must admit, it is quite a nice relaxing ficlette to have amongst the usual happy go lucky stuff. Next up is the sequal to the Ass-Eating fic, just for Carter.
At very long last. Can't wait can't wait.
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oohh… Local... this story is too sad.... ;_; beautifully written though.... really add to the reason of her act at W7 (running from SH, refuse to be saved etc.) a very touching story sniff
Ah thanks ^^ Its always fun to write stories like this ^^
At very long last. Can't wait can't wait.
Weren't you the one who bashed the initial fic anyways.
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A small thing I did which is pretty much RoLu, although Luffy does seem a lil ooc a couple of times, as does Robin, anywho, it was pretty fun. ^_^
Hello, Nico Robin here. Question time for you. Tell me, do you have someone who’s your best friend? Someone you thought was great from the minute you met? Someone you have such fun with? I mean, I’m not saying they have to be perfect. But they’re pretty much everything you want….in a friend. You laugh a lot when you’re together – good laugher: laughing with, not at. He’s not mean, you see, NEVER mean. And he cares about you, that’s important.
By the way, I’m not saying your friend has to be a he. A she will do, or even an it, the one I’m going to be talking about when I get on to specifics in a minute, he’s a he.
Where was I? Oh yes, do you have someone? Because, as I just revealed (although you’d probably guessed already), I do. I haven’t really known him very long, actually, not that that’s important. But this is the real question: have you ever upset your friend, someone you thought was unupsetable (that’s not really a word, but you know what I mean), not in the middle of a row or anything like that (even the best of friends have rows sometimes) but totally out of the blue? Because I just did that. And I wondered what you did to make it up to your friend, especially if you’re not even sure what you did wrong.
It might help if I told you what happened. Don’t get too excited, it’s not like it’s a huge drama. In fact it’s a tiny, tiny little thing. Maybe that’s the point. Usually it’s the little things that are worse.
He’s a smiley sort of person, my friend (he’s called Monkey D. Luffy by the way – yes, the one on all the posters.) and like I say, we laugh a lot together. And enthusiastic! He loves EVERYTHING. He gets excited at all sorts of things, and what’s brilliant is he makes you see how exciting they are, too.
Oh , I have to tell you something else, or none of the rest will not make sense. Me, Luffy and a few others are all pirates, in which we can go anywhere we like. Anywhere can be such an enormous concept though. Sometimes it can be a bit too much. Try to imagine this: you are asked, would you like an apple or an orange? I’d probably say ‘an apple, please’ (although I do enjoy oranges too), but some days you may want that orange instead?
Now imagine this: You are asked would you like an apple, an orange, or a pear, or a peach, or a plum, or a pomegranate – and then you are asked every sort of fruit in the world. And then you are asked, ‘or what about some Chocolate?’ and then they go on to name every sort of chocolate. And then maybe a piece of cheese, and so on. And then you would have to pick just one and you have to pick it now. Your brain would explode with the choice!
I don’t know what you’d do, but in an effort to stop the explosion I’d probably grasp at the most familiar, easiest option there was – and say ‘an apple, please’. Luffy didn’t really offer a choice between every food in the world. (actually, for some bizarre reason, he keeps trying to get me to eat meat.), well, what he said to me was, ‘Robin? Where would you like to go? I’m the captain, anywhere you like!’ he beamed at me.
I could choose to go anywhere at all, any city, country, island, continent, ocean. Anywhere I want to. As my brain exploded, I found myself seeking solace in the comfort of my childhood. HA. There were numerous places I did think of going to. ‘How about Barcelona? I asked, the small island of dogs without noses, imagine that! You could ask them that joke about how do they smell all day and it’ll NEVER get old!’ I smiled back at him, but no, I chose the one place I wanted to go when I was little.
‘Let’s go to the zoo.’
And then Luffy looked at me as if I’d just kicked his puppy. No, really, his face fell, was the zoo too boring for him? He looked disappointed, but hard at the same time, as if he was angry with me. His expression relaxed and he just said, in his normal voice.
‘Nah, gotta be better than that, I’m offering you anywhere! Somewhere there is adventure! Where we can look at the animals running around in their natural habitat.’I was quite hurt, here this almost childlike boy had turned down somewhere like a zoo because he felt it was too boring. So I said ‘Can I think about it?’ and he nodded but told me to take too long, because he didn’t want to be wasting time when we could be having fun.
Now I’m wondering what to do, because I upset him, but I don’t know why. Now I have to choose between the orange and the chocolate, or the cheese, or the meat and other millions of options (minus apple), I should decide whether to talk to him about it or not. He is such a good friend to me, keeps me laughing.
Robin and Luffy avoided contact with each other for the next few days, an averted gaze here and there. It wasn’t until they approached the island did she realise something was up.
“Where are we going?” Robin asked Luffy as he shot her the usual cheeky grin.
“The Zoo of course!” he beamed at her. “And after that, somewhere that is also fun, what was it called?” he thought for a moment, his face frowning and concentrating. Suddenly he grinned again.“Ah! Barcelona!”
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yes, make more! I got a fan fic I made between SHanks and Buggy a while back…if I knew how to post new threads I'd post it. Would anyone care to see it?
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yes we probably would.
how to create a new thread: see the little box with "reply" in it above the first posters avatar in a page? its also situated below the avatar of the last poster on a page. (when viewing a thread that is)
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Hmmmm I did two AceModa stories last night for a friend, wondering if anyone would like to read em? They are only small drabbles so…
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ah, that's a very nice story. at first I thought Luffy doesn't want to go to the zoo, but then he is such a nice person that he won't hurt his friend's feeling. that's what I like about Luffy ^_^
at the end, yeah, I believe that's what he'll do…..
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Quite lovely.
The first person point of view was rather refreshing, and I loved the analogies you used.
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Ah, thanks. And I'd say that it was because he'd find it too boring, but I prefer to think of it more as: He doesn't want to go because it's wrong. It's wrong to watch Animals in cages for amusement.
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Local, I really like the way you depicted Luffy in this-he seems more in character than out to me. Cages represent having only the choice of the apple or the orange; the prisoner or the visitor. Luffy loves freedom, because it's the adventure of having a million and one options, but the practicality of having only one choice. Going to the zoo may not be Luffy's idea of fun, but being with a friend when their having a good time certainly is.
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This was great! So cute and lovely! The only thing that threw me off was the first sentence–the "Nico Robin here!" one seems a little too forced. Other than that I LOVED this!
By the way, being an animal rights activist, I love your reason for Luffy not wanting to go to the zoo and I totally think he'd feel that way... not really for animal rights (the boy does love his meat after all), but for freedom in general. Great idea!
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well personally I decided that the only reason Robin would want to go, is because it's a kids thing really, and she wouldn't have got to spend time with anyone there when she was little, so…
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Two small Ace/Moda drabbles I did for a friend, I think they came out pretty well, although I can never write Ace stuffs, anyways, you might enjoy it.
'Wanted'
Moda hummed a tune to herself as she remembered the man whom had helped her, by delivering milk. Strange way of helping, but such was the world.She recalled her pulling him out of the river, holding his heavy body in her arms. He was pretty cute she guessed, although she was FAR too young to be interested in boys, it was just….just the way he ate, hunched over the table, scoffing his face with as much food as possible.
Although it wasn’t possible, her parents were in the Marines, and that meant she couldn’t be seen with pirates, even cute ones like him.
And so Moda hung up Ace’s wanted poster on the wall, she’d smile at it and remember him, how he helped her, and how hot he looked in that uniform, although she did suspect that was the case in no matter what he would wear. (quite literally)
And so she continued to hum to herself, thinking about that ‘Hot’ Man, with the freckles.
Made of Straw
Moda shivered as she tendered to the crops. She looked up onto the moors and skipped up to the figure up there.
“Oh Mister Scarecrow, you’re ever so ugly! I should get mother to knit you a nice new jacket.” She spoke cheerily.Her eyes locked in fear as the Straw-hats arm moved, eerily waving at her. It pulled itself free from its restraints, but she was already on the run, the Straw-hat followed, it nimbly shuffling breaking into a run, it’s boneless straw legs flailing as it struggled to move properly.
More Straw-hats ran shuffled across the fields, one pulling string from it’s mouth and threading it through a needle.
“Help?” she whimpered as they closed in, suddenly the creature burst into flames, a hand appeared behind it as Ace, the man she had met once before approached her, with a simple wave of his arms he took out the Straw-hats behind her.He simply picked her up in her arms as the Straw turned to ash, she wondered somehow if she would, herself burn in his arms, instead it was just a lovely luke warm feeling.
Ace just smiled.
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Me: "Awww."
カワイイ。<3Quite the adorable fics; I always thought the ModaxAce pairing was nice.
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Thanks ^_^ My friend requested the drabbles, so thank her for em lol
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ahhhh, bet you'd never thought you'd see the day when I'd write Yaoi eh? You'd be like, no, noooo. NOOO! Local just writes Robin stories, and Yuri ones! NOOOOOOOO! Actually I write it a lot (usually in trade for something that benefits me) although I do take requests for this, anywho, first up is a AcexBlackbeard fic, nothing too special lol, not really used to these two chars in writing yet.
Pie:
Ace smirked as Black Beard approached him.
“Zehahahahaha! Found you whelp.” The man laughed heartily as Ace frowned.
“So you found me, just like you’ve found me many times before.” Ace spoke solemnly, Black Beard just shrugged. “Are you going to let me go as easily as last time?” Ace laughed a little. Blackbeard glared at the younger boy.“Maybe I should teach you a lesson then, yes?” Blackbeard laughed again, his eyes glaring right into Ace’s soul. He then closed his eyes.
“Yami, Yami.” He spoke.Ace jumped out the way as a Black hole began to appear from beneath him, his arm turned to flames as he pounced towards Blackbeard, Beard just dodged out of the way, part of his body becoming a void to absorb any extra heat from the boys’ attack
“We play this game every time, don’t we.” Ace smirked as Blackbeard nodded. They shot each other a quick glance before jumping back again.
“You’re good.” Blackbeard commented, laughing again. “Zehahahahaha!”
Ace and Blackbeard were silent for a moment, a growl eminated from Ace’s stomach regions before Blackbeard pulled out a pie, from seemingly nowhere (of COURSE! This is fanfiction! Anything can happen!)
“Here, take this whelp.” Blackbeard muttered, crushing half of the pie and throwing it over to Ace. Ace hungrily munched on the pie.
“Can’t let you fight on a empty stomach, no?” Blackbeard laughed a little.
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<nit-picking>It's not a drabble. It's long enough to be considered a regular fic, or at least I tihnk so….. Drabbles are more like this:
@Dookotsue:
So lyk ace an blackbeard met up n hav sex on teh flor lyk. Bb says 'ace pass me th ketchup botl' n ace does. t r brilliant.
Which is only 28 words long and's badfic.</nit-picking>
AcexBlackbeard >> ZoroxSanj.
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XD Local, your great!
you know i'm not reading that though. lol
here for moral support
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…you've been hanging around Miss Alina-chwan haven't you XD
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I read it. I'm not a fan of AcexBlackbeard, but I must commend you writing a shonen-ai. And honestly, it's better than most of the stuff I find for pairings I like. Good job Local XD.
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You know you've just dug yourself a hole, right? From now on, I'll be bugging you and forcing you to write yaoi with all my fangirl powarz.
Good job, btw ^^
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<nit-picking>It's not a drabble. It's long enough to be considered a regular fic, or at least I tihnk so….. Drabbles are more like this:
Which is only 28 words long and's badfic.</nit-picking>
AcexBlackbeard >> ZoroxSanj.
no, Drabbles are less than 300 words. a short story is 1-3 pages, and a story is 3+ pages.
@pirateneko:
…you've been hanging around Miss Alina-chwan haven't you XD
avatar looks like her style tooYup Yup XD EVERYONE! Blame her!
XD Local, your great!
you know i'm not reading that though. lol
here for moral support
ahahahaahaha! Thanks
@Bee's:
I read it. I'm not a fan of AcexBlackbeard, but I must commend you writing a shonen-ai. And honestly, it's better than most of the stuff I find for pairings I like. Good job Local XD.
Thanks XD I never thought of the pairing much myself lol
You know you've just dug yourself a hole, right? From now on, I'll be bugging you and forcing you to write yaoi with all my fangirl powarz.
Good job, btw ^^
Hassle away
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What I find funny is I can SO get you to write a dirty fic… boys are all alike, you just have to find their weak spots ;)
BTW- this is more WTF!Crack than ai :/
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Oh everyone knows my weak spot XD It's blatantly obvious lol
anywho, as promised to Jim-bob:
She only wanted a peek:
Nami HAD to take a peek.
“MINE’S BIGGER!” Zoro growled at Sanji, Sanji scowled right back at him.
“Quit it Marimo, MINE’S bigger.” He kicked his legs out at the swordsman.The two were at it again, as usual they’d fight over the most simple of things, who is going to stop Luffy from sleepwalking that night, who would be the one to collect supplies, the list went on.
This time was no other, the two had stepped away from prying eyes, and hands, feet or whatever else Robin decided to conjure up. They stared at each other.
“Ok, let’s compare.” Sanji announced. Zoro just grunted as a reply.
Nami just HAD to watch this, she opened the door a little, the two were bickering, their bodies standing FAR too near to each other.
“I told you I was bigger!” Sanji gloated, Zoro grunted a reply, the green haired swordsman just gave into defeat, although begrudgingly.Nami stood in shock at the image, not because it was hot or nothing, more like disturbing. She thought for a moment before wondering out loud.
“What sort of morons compare head sizes?”
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA XD
YES!!! Only these two idot boys would do that! You, my friend, made my day (though I've just woken up). I'm sniggering like the most evil of fangirls. >:3
Thank you heaps for taking my request! You're quite awesome with crack!drabbles, I'd have to say.
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ahahahaha thanks ^_^ and you're welcome, I just love to write so XD
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Comparing head sizes? Oh lordie, what will you come up with next? a BenxShanks drabble?
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Maybe?
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“Oi! Usopp!” Luffy waved up to the crows nest, where Usopp usually kept a lookout. Usopp just blanked him. A hand gripped at the wood panelling, Usopp turned his head to see Luffy misjudge the calculation of the shot by a long shot, sending him into the clouds above.
Luffy cracked his neck as he sat behind Usopp.
“That hurt.” He complained.
“I’ve felt worse.” Usopp started. “I was once dropped behind enemy lines…..quite a long way behind enemy lines……no parachute…..just….dropped.” he started on a tall tale. Luffy listened and nodded with each passing word.“Usopp, I love you’re made up stories, they make me laugh so much!” Luffy was practically rolling in laughter. Usopp sighed and shook his head.
“It wasn’t a story, it was true.” Usopp started, but Luffy was in a fit of giggles.“You’re annoying, you know that.” Usopp teased Luffy as Luffy shot him a blank look.
“But you love me anyways, right?” Luffy grinned, Usopp lowered his eyelinds.
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That drabble was quite cute to read actuelly. You don't see many LuffyxUsopp stories. Hope to see more of these drabbles.:happy:
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Yay LuSop! I love that pairing name, it's just so cuddly cute. Like that drabble was XD. Keep on writing more Local~!
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Hmmmm, I do gots another LUsop drabble to post, it's….somewhere.
Also halfway through a Captain JackxIanto one too.
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Another LUsop, forgot to post it here lol, sorry.
Brain Freeze:
“What type did you get?” Luffy was bugging Usopp again. Usopp looked at the cone in his hand.
“Mint.” He commented. “And you?”
“Strawberry!” Luffy exclaimed, flailing his arms around like a man on fire. Usopp licked at his cone.
“Mine had a flake in.” Luffy added, with a grin. He pulled the chocolate stick from the ice cream and chewed on it.Usopp and Luffy continued walking along.
“Handy that we found that Ice Cream vendor when we did.” Usopp thought as Luffy quickly scoffed the rest of his cone. He instantly put his hands to his head due to brain freeze.
“Owie! Owie! Owie!” he complained, Usopp just laughed a little.Luffy stopped laughing as he stared at Usopp.
“You’ve got some on your nose.” He grinned, Usopp looked down his nose and tried to wipe it off, but it was too late, Luffy’s mouth was already suckling the creamy substance off him.“Taaaaaasty! I like cream from the tip!” he laughed. Usopp just stood, dumbfounded at the notion.