Woooh ! Finaly my name changed ! (thank you admin or mod or I don't know who answered my prayers).
Now I can say this :
SAY MY NAME, BITCHES ! Nice quotes Gypsy ^^
edit : Woo, top of the page, awesome effect walks on air
Woooh ! Finaly my name changed ! (thank you admin or mod or I don't know who answered my prayers).
Now I can say this :
SAY MY NAME, BITCHES ! Nice quotes Gypsy ^^
edit : Woo, top of the page, awesome effect walks on air
O______O
I come back to so much awesome. I love you guys. I have so many ideas for where I can use all these witty one liners. <3
C-R is still amazing.
And Eli…..did you read my mind? The original quote I had for your character was "....." but I thought that was too boring
why change your name
i dont know you anymore :cwy:
and hi sky , hope the quotes will help you
Skyrius > No, it's not boring ! "…." is fine by me, as long as she isn't ALWAYS like that. Well that's how I feel.
So can I be naughty ? :3
Metteminne > Because Eli is the name of an OC of mine and my 'real' fake (XD) name is Elisabeth.
It felt weird to see you calling me Eli, because she's so not me~
Hi, Stud ^^/ I'm Elisabeth. Love your hat.
You call me Lise if you want, that's my real REAL name.
Or another nickname, but not Eli (please) :D
Sorry everyone.
oh hi elisabeth ^^ you look so cute!
i am going to call you eli… oh wait
lise it is ^^!
These are awesome you guys!! I have no creativity so I can't think of any atm myself. Oh well.
These are awesome you guys!! I have no creativity so I can't think of any atm myself. Oh well.
Google is your friend))))
I've only made one or two for myself, others were "stolen"!
Congrats on the name change, Elisabeth! 8D
Now…how should I call you whn I'm on duty for Fandom Pirates... Lise-sama?
Wow, nice name change, Eli-I mean, Elisabeth. ;)
I made up like…three of mine. The others were just favorite movies of mine. So...I lack creativity as well!
This post would have been easier to write if Young Sister wasn't making snide comments.
@Elisabeth:
Woooh ! Finaly my name changed ! (thank you admin or mod or I don't know who answered my prayers).
congrats! hmmm looks like everyone else has already decided to call you Elisabeth/Lise/Lise-sama/waffles. can i call you Heart? it makes me think of Law, and i like having my own nicknames for people. :D
I made up like…three of mine. The others were just favorite movies of mine. So...I lack creativity as well!
eh, i lack creativity too. that's why i only came up with two and yeah, it's always hard for me to write anything with someone watching…
It's gonna be nigh impossible for me to call you anything other than Eli. Once I get into the habit of doing something it's hard to break. For example, take my own username… I only have this one because when I first tried to make an account on these forums, the activation code never got sent. I am glad I went with "marimo" and not the other one though. Would have been a nightmare. <__<
I don't know if I want to use pre-existing quotes though... hm... maybe I'll think of some later. Still drawing blanks here.
eh, i lack creativity too. that's why i only came up with two and yeah, it's always hard for me to write anything with someone watching…
I think one of mine was actually a Marylin Monroe quote. Go figure.
ARGH. Me either. I was typing out the next part to you and Mia's story and she's swarming over me all: "What cha writing? Who's Shanks? BLAH BLAH."
Gypsy, your roger rabbit quote, omg ilu XD that line always cracks me up XD
@metteminne:
oh hi elisabeth ^^ you look so cute!
i am going to call you eli… oh wait
lise it is ^^!
I was so about to spank you. Good boy ;)
@Masha:
Congrats on the name change, Elisabeth! 8D
Now…how should I call you whn I'm on duty for Fandom Pirates... Lise-sama?
Lise-sama it is my dear Masha <3
@MetaMario:
Wow, nice name change, Eli-I mean, Elisabeth. ;)
Nearly spanked again, but that's alright :)
@trappedolphin:
congrats! hmmm looks like everyone else has already decided to call you Elisabeth/Lise/Lise-sama/waffles. can i call you Heart? it makes me think of Law, and i like having my own nicknames for people. :D
Whatever you want. Heart is fine by me :) I like it.
@piratemarimo:
It's gonna be nigh impossible for me to call you anything other than Eli. Once I get into the habit of doing something it's hard to break. For example, take my own username… I only have this one because when I first tried to make an account on these forums, the activation code never got sent. I am glad I went with "marimo" and not the other one though. Would have been a nightmare. <__<
Okay, one spank for Piratemarimo. But you're cute so I shall forgive you.
What was the other name though ? I'm curious.
I made up my quote (one was inspired from James Bond though), but why don't you go on http://www.imdb.com/ pick a movie you like there are quote there (top right, Quick Link menu).
Scott Pilgrim for example.
Roxy Richter: You punched me in the boob! Prepare to die, obviously!
(not sure it fits my persona, though XD)
Wallace Wells: If you want something bad, you have to fight for it. Step up your game, Scott. Break out the L-word.
Scott Pilgrim: Lesbian?
Wallace Wells: The other L-word.
Scott Pilgrim: …Lesbians?
(wasn't in the comic and is epic)
Oh, found this : http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Main_Page
Hours of fun.
Pirate: Guybrush Threepwood? That's the most ridiculous name I’ve ever heard!
Guybrush: Well, what's your name?
Pirate: [matter-of-factly] My name is Mancomb Seepgood.
Part 2 of the Terribly Written Trapped and Mia story.
! The great, over-dramatic gasp nearly caused Trapped to topple over. It was already maddening enough that she had to stand out here to wait for Shanks, but now he was going to make some enormous deal out of it. She should just turn around and march indoors, but he was in that half tucked white button up under his jacket. And she just had to gaze at it approaching her, with one hand in his pocket and the other over his chest.
! “Are they doing a photo shoot around here?!” He said when he was about a meter away, he feigned looking around the area with wonder. “Seems one of their super models got out to grab a bite to eat.”
! “Shut up, people are going to think you’re on heavy medications.”
! A bleat of laughter burst from his chest as he finished walking over. “Calm down, I’ll stop screaming.” He stooped down slightly and gave her a brief kiss on her forehead. “You’re freezing!”
! Trapped sighed into an eye roll and started back into the building with Shanks on her heels. “I’m not cold. Quit distressing over everything.”
! “I don’t want you sick! Remember when you got food poisoning at Mia’s birthday dinner last year? You were stuck in the bathroom for hours and-”
! A swift punch to the chest silenced the man. They walked the last couple of steps in silence, until the grand cry from Mia broke the peace. “Shanks! There you are! Sit!”
! Shanks pulled Trapped’s seat out for her, waiting for her to sit down comfortably. But, instead, she took the seat from his hand and yanked it out further than she should. After she was nestled in after scooting forward, he sat down. “Well, Mia, I bet you’re just in the best of moods today.” He inquired, picking up Trapped’s water.
! “If you’re talking about that Gypsy’s little blunder, than you’re quite right.” She sipped her water, the glass was sweaty. “Her seeking out Law like that makes it blatantly obvious that he’s got a page.”
! “I still don’t see how you know.” Trapped said, swatting away Shanks’ attempt to hold her hand. “She must have dozens of people depending on her protection.”
! Mia ran the tip of her finger under her lip, checking for running red color. “Of course, but I have my eyes everywhere. They saw her little…dog scoping out the scene only hours before. Meaning this was a huge deal for Gypsy to have that little girl go out for her. In addition, let’s just say I recall a certain history between her and Law.”
! Trapped squished her tongue between her teeth. “Are you sure? They could have just gone in that office and got it on.”
! Shanks choked on the Trapped’s water, and started to cough between words of gripe. Mia ignored him and pressed on. “Please. She’s Tyrant Queen, not a hussy. Also, she had those two cronies with her. Think she’d do the floppy with the surgeon with those two floating over her?”
! “I suppose not.” The rust haired woman sat back in her chair, hands draped over her lap. “Guess we at least know where one page is.”
! Shanks looked from her to Mia. “So, we making a move sometime soon?”
! Mia laughed loudly, putting the back of her hand to her mouth. “Not just yet! Let Gypsy get what she wishes for a period. Make the look on her face when I pull the rug out from under her that much more gratifying.” She flipped her shiny onyx ponytail over her shoulder and looked behind her. “Where is that waiter? Now I feel all lonely since you asked for that one to join us.”
! Strike one from Mia. Before Trapped could say something to block the coming damage, Shanks had whipped around with a grin of appreciation. His enjoyment of being thought of wasn’t what she needed at the moment. Smoothing her skirt, she looked back up over Mia’s head. “Perhaps we should wave him over, I’m starved.”
! “You’re hungry?” Shanks supposed, tone filled to spilling with trepidation. “I’ll pay for whatever you want, just pick anything out on that menu and I will fork over whatever cash you need.”
! “Shanks that really isn’t nec-”
! He held up a tanned hand to shush her. “No, I insist. In fact, I demand you let me pay.”
! Trapped wished Mia would cease examining them converse, her face was starting to fry in discomfiture. Putting a hand over her right temple, she started to rub it to prevent the coming headache. Her Boss and her Boyfriend. One begging to be a gentleman and the other drooling over the server, just waiting to give her some ridiculous mission. “Fine, pay for me! If that makes you happy!”
! Something fluttered behind Shanks’ expression and he dove a hand into his pocket for his wallet. Feigning she was looking at her spoon, Mia looked back up at Trapped. “I got cute waiter’s name.”
! “Riveting.”
! “His name is Sanji. And he’s from France.”
! “How special.” She rolled her eyes. “You know he was wearing a name tag, right?”
! “You can’t say he isn’t good looking.”
! “We went over this. He’s cute, yeah. I get it.”
! Strike two of Mia’s was a curve ball, once again, Trapped could not catch the blunder before it hit. For the second time in ten minutes, Shanks was choking on something. This time his words, as he sputtered out anything he could. Trapped but her teeth together and closed her eyes in provocation. All she could do was say his name over and over, attempting to quiet him.
! “Is it the hair?! Do girls these days like that hidden look?! Or is it the fact he makes you food?! I can cook, you know that! Remember the glazed ham last week?!”
! “Shanks…Shush…Shanks…SHANKS…Stop it….” Trapped was sliding further and further down in her seat, her red slacks bunching up under the motion. How she longed to yank the neck of her black sweater up over her face. The guest around them were starting to look over their glasses and shoulders as Shanks started to grow steadily louder with each plea. Hinder him, that was now her mission or Mia would die from laughter. “Yes! You are better looking than the waiter! No I am not attracted to him! Now, shut up!” She punched him hard in the upper arm, yet he still broke into a toothy grin.
! “Am I interrupting something?” Asked Sanji, who was approaching slowly, battling a laugh with a cringe. Mia put two hands to her chest and pushed upwards. Shanks had become strangely fascinated with his knife while she primped. While, Trapped on the other hand, pounded a fist on the table and hissed for her commander to stop. “Now, you ladies ready to order? And will you be joining them?” Flipping open his pad, he looked down at Shanks.
! “Yes. I will.” He said with ice in his manner.
! “And these checks will be separate?” Sanji asked, looking Trapped and Mia in the eyes.
! “No. Her and I will be sharing a check.” Shanks said, throwing a hand to Trapped, who was sliding further down her seat. “Because we’re dating.”
! Sanji smirked and looked down at his order pad. “So, what will you and your date being sharing?”
! After the trio ordered their meals and Mia giggled a bit at Sanji’s retreating back, Trapped decided to deal with Shanks later. When she could punch him to her hearts content without causing the restaurant to think she was psycho.
! “So, what will be do about Gypsy?” She settled on that as her distraction from Shanks’ thwarting outbursts.
! “Isn’t it obvious? We’re going to catch her at her own game.” She draw a piece of paper from her purse and threw it across the table. “You should get one of these in a matter of hours. It’s an invitation.”
! “I can read.” Trapped sighed and opened the page. “So, this is the party I’ve heard about?”
! “Yup, and that’s when we strike.”
! “How?” Trapped muttered, combing the card over with her hand. “She has so many hounds, that they’ll sniff out something before we’re able to attack.”
! “We can even get her drunk. I know she likes her Royalist.”
XD So Elisabeth or Lise now, you have quite a few fake "fake" names that resemble your "real" fake name or your "real" real name…
...
Wait....what. just managed to confuse herself
Ah screw it, Elisabeth it is now XD. And Piratemarimo, it doesn't have to be anything profound. You can make silly ones like C-R (which cracked me up to no end, which is bad since I'm in the library XP). Movie quotes are always a good place to start. Elisabeth can have a slightly naughty character off of work :P
I like making up random one liners as long as they sound cool, even if, logically thinking, there really is no conceivable situation where they'd actually be used in >_>;;
One of Trapped's and one of C-R's are SO going into my next chapter. And probably one of Nami's too. See? Even random quotes are inspiration XP
Speaking of writing I'm in a really good mood atm. A couple of people liked the beginning of my DoflaCroc story. I don't know why I can't stop grinning like an idiot. Now that gives me the obligation to write more. Oh the pressure! but as soon as I get past describing the freaking setting I am gonna hopefully pick up steam.
Maybe I should get some quotes from personal experiences… there was one that doesn't fit the mafia story at all (so don't use it!) but I felt like sharing it. Was basically along the lines of:
"I used to think that a monument was just a giant rock that was shaped a little differently from all the other rocks. Big deal! But now I know that it's something more. You can't see the worth of something or the impact it has by looking at a picture. You have to travel there in person and let it overwhelm your senses."
Gypsy, the way you write Shanks cracks me the hell up XD AHAHA +1MILLION dollars points XD
It's because he's the cutest thing EVER. He needs to be that "desperately in love with this girl and jealous of even the wind touching her" type.
I like it muchly :3 haha and the last line too XD hee hee hee always fun to read :D
It's fun to read reviews for stories right Piratemarimo XD I think art and writing should be for fun overall, but if you don't show it to people in the long run, it just doesn't feel complete. And the quote is nice and inspiring as well. See? Anything is good for inspiration~
Gypsy, that's bloody hilarious. I can't look at Shanks the same again. I'm not sure if that's for the better or for the worse.
Soo….....a Mafia godfather......that would explain the two people being unable to be killed at night. I would be leaning more towards lynching WG today instead of Havardy, though.
And also: It'd be best to not consider my ability into whatever plan we come up with today. The Mafia may want to kill me tonight, after all.
Wooden Giraffe
kmohyudin
Havardy Alumnus
Felton
Metteminne
SUDK
Trappedolphin
Cecila
There definitely are some similar lists…..suppose that means most of us have similar suspicions. (Aside from themselves, of course. I'm pretty sure we'd all agree that no one would put themselves in anything but green.)
Awww, not you too Cecila. But you are right about you probably getting killed tonight. With trapped being seemingly naive and SUDK getting the town vote you would be the best person to take out. But I think that your action would still go through.
We could take out felton instead and hope for the best.
Now while I am all for lynching someone that isn't me as well as someone I suspect. We can't just be so hasty. If we fail and lynch another townie, it will be followed by two or three more deaths during the night(albeit, chances are that either cecila or the SK would snag the last mafia).
I can investigate him tonight. But if I do that, the Mafia will kill me during the night.
I think the current plan is to put the town vote on you, trapped seems to think that he is naive. and has thus deemed himself expendable.
Nice quotes all round everyone! Kinda sets the standard for me o.0 This post will only have my own quotes though, no movie refs/etc.
! "The edge of a knife is trechorous. It can either peirce your heart or severe the ropes that tie you. Which will it be for you?"
! "I'm deeply sorry, Ms Gypsy is busy right now; I'll be your assassin instead."
! "I do apologise, but my boss would disprove of me bringing vermin such as yourself into her clean office."
! "Ms Gypsy is too important and too busy to be seen by the likes of yourself. Maybe try a shave and come back?" <- Was thinking of Sweeny Todd at the time. I love that movie!
! "Did you know, the first sign of insanity is hairs on the back of your hand?pause The second is looking for them."
Also some thoughts on my character that I came up with in the shower (cause I get all my best ideas there )
! I think Charmed is very aware that she is younger then everyone(well except Mette I think) and tries hard to act mature for her age.
She could do this by the way she talks, perhapes with almost random riddles/word problems that she spouts when she's unnerved?
Or maybe she could have alot of casual relationships to have what is her view on an "adult lifestyle". Gypsy may tease her on this, picking up on the fact that the girl is trying to be like her peers in a way.
Either way she's completly loyal to Gypsy for one reason or another (At her age, she's probably got Gypsy as her legal guardian, though I don't know what laws you want this town to have.) maybe Gypsy is like family to her? More so then the others? Or maybe there is some unspoken history there…....
Sorry, it's long! Being a writer also, I tend to over think ^^'
Nice story, Gypsy! Shanks is adorable to read about ^^ I want one…...XD
OK. I missed a few pages in my sleep.
Also, who are the remaining players?
Wooden_Giraffe, trappedolphin, kmohyudin, Cecila, Harvady, SUDK, felton, ???
you forgot mettemine.
@Elisabeth:
Okay, one spank for Piratemarimo. But you're cute so I shall forgive you.
What was the other name though ? I'm curious.
I always knew being cute had its advantages! XD
If you really must know, for years prior to joining AP Forums, my username had always been pirategaara and I was always too lazy to change it because I had gotten so used to typing it. Fate must have been telling me "Now is the time for change." If I had kept that old name it would have been really horrid because:
1. People would think I'm a Narutard and I stopped liking Naruto eons ago (I started paying a lot more attention to One Piece after I became too disgusted with reading it, so technically it's crappiness was a good thing).
2. There was a person here who I'm sure you've heard of called GaaraoftheDesert and even though he is no longer on the forums, I'm glad my name bears no similarities with that guy.
@ Skyrius- It's not just about getting reviews, it's getting positive reviews that really work wonders for writers. Awhile back I stumbled across THE MOST AMAZING FIC I had ever seen my whole life and wrote two lengthy paragraphs to the person and they thanked me for it later and said they got more inspired because of it. I doubt anyone will ever dedicate that much text to my writings, but two little comments of enthusiasm were enough to make me feel incredibly happy. Love from fans, no matter how small in numbers, is an amazing fuel.
@ Gypsy- I love the second part of the Shanks story. Especially when everyone starts staring in confusion. lol, awkward situations is always comedy to read.
Phweee~ more quotes~ scribbles down
Piratemarimo, I was thinking about what you said (er….wrote XD) and I agree that positive reviews are the most giddy-girl flailing inducing for me, but I think criticism is just as inspiring.
Well, not flaming, per se, but this one time when I was in NaNoWriMo, and I posted my chapter onto the forums for people to read, I got quite a few nice little two liners complimenting it, which was nice. But the one comment I remember and appreciate the most was from this older lady, who broke down every component of my chapter and analytically criticized my use of tenses and double negatives that tended to confuse readers (such as "she hadn't not" and over use of conjunctions, I still do that sometimes XD) as well as lack of fluidity in transitions. I think the whole thing was about 5-6 paragraphs long. And it was wonderful, smarting and a bit painful, but wonderful.
And of course, one of the most hilariously scorching comments I remember to this day was from one guy who took one of my one-shots, broke it down and scathingly listed every single over used cliche and trope from different eras in time and every unoriginal twist the story had in common troll flame form.....and then ended it by subverting all he said and explaining why tropes are not bad and how much he loved my story.
It was hilarious. I don't think I've ever laughed that hard before. The best part is, we're still friends. The guy who wrote that is Bio, one of my RP buddies. Lovely first impression.
Posting habits and lack of content aren't enough to prove that a person is mafia. The fact that the three mafia we've taken out, all posted that way is now mostly irrelevant.
If investigations are the only things people will believe, then SUDK's town vote is the only choice.
There is only one Mafia left, and there are eight of us. The only reason that things seem on edge is that we had four deaths with one plan of action. It gives us the impression that we can't make a mistake. We're allowed at least one.
We've gotten rid of three mafia in two days. They all had similarities to each other and were in contact with each other often. It would explain why they weren't posting in the game, because they were busy talking to each other.
It's possible that the town will win with today's decision. We all want the town to win, right?
Ok, nobody did it yet.. so I will do it!
! "So, you wanny play?"
! "Okay you Cunts… Let's see what you can do now!"
! "Show's over, Motherfuckers!"
you should know from where these quotes are.. or u suck.
aha ha ha… I love that first impressions are everything but you can still form surprising relationships even if it doesn't start swimmingly. I would feel honored to get a serious criticism as long as it's not the person being a troll like at ff.net when someone might be doing copy and paste inflammatory comments. Luckily I've never run into those types or seen it, but it does happen. One comment on my fic that made me laugh was "Doflamingo is such a jackass. I can't wait to read more!" lolol why do I get so happy writing about those types of characters? XD
But at least the people who left comments thus far did more than just say "awesome" or "lol" because then that would piss me off. Dammit, I just noticed a slightly redundant phrase in the fic. As long as I don't get trolls or a less-than-a-sentence-long generic compliment, I'm fine. Now in the future I know I'm gonna feel guilty unless I update regularly on that story. I don't want to be one of those "popular writers who only add new things once or twice a year" types.
Piratemarimo, I need to go check your thread I think. Why do I not remember the last thing you posted?
Also, I have another Mafia part in progress.
And a lighter note, SISTER IS OFFICIALLY INTO ONE PIECE. Her boyfriend came over today and say my copies by her bed and goes: "One Piece is so lame!" And Sister goes: "Heck no. How can you hate it? The main Character's name is Monkey, for God's Sake!" I am so proud.
I wish my sister loved One Piece. :c
Monkey is his surname, but close enough! See all it takes is effort. Phase Two is converting Sai-chan's sister. :<
and Gypsy, I was talking about the DoflaCroc fic. It was on the very first page.
Sai-Chan, I can help you with that. I had to beat it into her.
AH. NOW I REMEMBER! Sorry, I derped for a second, Marimo.
lol. She used to like anime, but she grew out of it. She's now 24 years old and an artist like myself. xD
Grew out of it?! Noooo!!
lol, I bet we're all gonna be 80 years old and still reading One Piece you guys. XD
Gypsy > Once again I love it :D (I'd like to have one too~)
Skyrius > I like my real name (I share it with my mother's best friend who died 28 years old~) and I have a crappy imagination for name >< So yeah
Marimo > Okay XD (I kinda liked Naruto though… Shikamaru <3 Should I be ashamed ?)
And now, I did a little clip for this fic (already posted on the dump but I wasn't sure everyone goes there so~)
Comes with a music.
http://elisabethheart.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d30khaz
The lag fucks the rhythm… I hate when it does that.
I might try to make another one later if I get bigger images.
edit : push the white circle for a replay
Yeah. D:
Totally. I'm gonna be on my deathbed and asking for my children to turn the page so I can read the rest of my OP volume whatever. xD
I will be a 78 year old woman like: "Damn, that Zoro has still got it!" And do my little dance I do when he does something cool. Then suddenly going to Grandma's house won't be fun anymore for my Grandchildren.
@ Elisabeth: Sure, I can try to do one for you! Once we pad out your character, we'll jump in for it. :)
@Cecila:
And also: It'd be best to not consider my ability into whatever plan we come up with today. The Mafia may want to kill me tonight, after all.
your ability would go through even on the night you're killed. that said, I don't really want to use your ability, either. we don't know what the remaining mafia/Third-Party powers are, and i'm afraid that their interference would cause your power to end up hurting a townie.
@Harvady:
There is only one Mafia left, and there are eight of us. The only reason that things seem on edge is that we had four deaths with one plan of action. It gives us the impression that we can't make a mistake. We're allowed at least one.
Remaining players:
Wooden_Giraffe, trappedolphin, kmohyudin, Cecila, Harvady, SUDK, felton, metteminne.
If one is mafia, and one is Third-Party, we have 6 players left. Time to highlight the worst-case scenario.
Let's say we don't manage to lynch the mafia/Third-Party today. Tonight, at least two townies would die - maybe more, if the SK can accumulate. That leaves us with six players altogether, two of them whom are bad and want to kill the four townies remaining. Remember that we lynch and town-vote by the majority. What's worse is that not everyone trusts each other now, and we still have a couple of inactive players who would probably make it to that stage. If we do get to that point, everyone's going to be suspicious of each other. The only two people who seem to trust each other almost unconditionally here are Harvady and myself. This makes it really difficult for remaining townies to come to an honest decision.