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Mini-story: ENERU AND LIFE ON THE MOON
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Dude seriously. (though this has nothing to do with seriousness stick to whats happening please)
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done, onwards and upwards!
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done, onwards and upwards!
I meant delete the image!
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storyline's getting…. quite scattered here. seems like we have different plots advancing different ways, so please let me narrate/moderate this a bit. randomness is fine, but please be random in a way that will advance the storyline. and let's not deal with samus, as that will add more character into this story. read the quote in the post at the very top of the previous page.
ok, let's recap a bit:
so we have four things going on:
1. eneru is depressed after taco shop fails miserably and is now with boss rabbit and carrot, arguing about how to get out of here. carrot said to find shruberry.
2. bon-chan who is now equipped with a pink lightsaber is looking for eneru
3. vader is alone after running away from bon-chan.
4. 1st rabbit is nowhere to be found.let's take that to be a set point from where we will continue our story. here are a few plotlines that you can advance:
1. WHAT is shruberry? WHERE can they find it? let's not get into HOW shruberry can bring them back to earth. we'll leave this for later. if you want to advance this, think about WHO (carrot or boss rabbit, since eneru is definitely clueless) should announce the answer to these questions. or if you decide that none of them knows the answer, WHERE they can go to find out the answer to these questions.
2. WHY is bon-chan looking for eneru? this bit is a bit confusing to me since he didn't seem to have a good reason as to why he would need to find eneru.
3. 1st rabbit! do something with the 1st rabbit. my suggestion is to bring him to vader, since the 1st rabbit is the symphatetic rabbit (remember he was the one comforting eneru in the 1st post), so he and vader should have a good understanding.
let me set a vague main goal: we want these 6 characters (eneru, boss rabbit, vader, 1st rabbit, bon-chan, and carrot) to meet up again after awhile (not now) and then we want 6 of them to set out on a quest for something (dunno what, but probably getting off the moon).
so people, there. i have set a little boundaries to prevent storyline from advancing in random directions. so please please please please keep these in mind as you advance the story.
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Okay, here's an idea I have. Though I haven't fully thought it out, which is why I haven't drawn anything for it.
Bon Clay has somehow (haven't worked that out) heared of the Richard Simmons fusion between Eneru and Boss Rabbit (Don't worry, I'm not going to bring back Simmons). Being the Richard Simmons fanatic that he is, he heads off to find Eneru and Boss Rabbit and tries to get them to do the fusion. The two refuse, which causes…........ something. (I did this because I wanted the fusion to have some purpose)
If you're down with it, work it out, kay? If not, I'll just delete this post.
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sounds like an idea, AWB1.
if you're going to do it this way, please have some story BEFORE bon actually meets up with eneru and boss rabbit.
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i'm a little confused with the 1st rabbit's subplot.
the last panel that had him in it also included the evil panda. so, do we see more of this panda or do we just ditch him and get on with the story?
i know i introduced the panda but he was meant to be more of a side character who was not evil >.>
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The conclusion of Vader and Bon Clay's fight. So now, Bon Clay is searching for Eneru and Boss Rabbit.
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…A shruberry is a shrub. Havent you seen Monty Python and the Holy Grail?
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i'm a little confused with the 1st rabbit's subplot.
the last panel that had him in it also included the evil panda. so, do we see more of this panda or do we just ditch him and get on with the story?
i know i introduced the panda but he was meant to be more of a side character who was not evil >.>
let's make this panda an easter egg. sorta like oda's panda man. let him show up here and there, but doesnt affect storyline.
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I added a pic to my previous post so it would take place before Anime Master's pic. (Yes, I know the pic is big. Blame my scolding-hot-coffee-burned hand)
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The search begins
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i'm doodling something to continue taboo's.
kinda long, but i couldn't resist the joke <_<
if you're continuing this, go ahead and pick a direction. if not, then go do something about bon. don't let him meet eneru and boss rabbit yet. and let vader and 1st rabbit alone for now.
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I'm not a mouse artist. XD
If no one wants to keep the wound Enel has on his forehead now they don't gotta, figured, why not screw his face up even more?
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xD. that's messed up, buu. pity the god a bit.
XDDDDDDDDDDD
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Who wasn't thinking of Carrot Molverdolt becoming a dildo? XD
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In the spirit of randomness (and possibly giving the poor god an even break)
Um, that's probably 1st Rabbit driving the tow truck. Or not.
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I thought the 1st rabbit was with Vader doing…things...
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@Anime:
I thought the 1st rabbit was with Vader doing…things...
Ummmm… they finished? Or it could be another rabbit altogether. shrugs Or I could delete my entry from the non-continuity entirely. Hell, it could be a mirage or hallucination. Whatever.
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Give Enel a break? Never!
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Cow, don't host images on tripod, they are unhotlinkable.
But if you take its URL, paste it, delete EnelMoon.jpg taking you to his site, then typing EnelMoon.jpg back in you can see it.
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Gah… Sorry. Didn't realize. I usually use somewhere else, but I'm flighty and I forget the name. Where do most of the people here go to host pictures?
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www.imageshack.us is very useful.
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I can't draw Vader to save my life.
Episode 3 reference there XD. Now he can meet the 1st rabbit.
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Thanks, 1 2 Jango.
Also, who is Tarken? I haven't watched Star Wars in so long I can't remember.
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Aww…bad-beat ignored me. ;_;
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didn't ignore you, couldn't you see the gleeming smile on Enel's face..? he'd used it good and proper :laugh:
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Ah, I'm confussed.
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so a bit of recap:
1. vader has managed to meet up with eneru, carrot, and boss rabbit, and they are heading south to find shruberry. "journey to the south?"
2. 1st rabbit seems to be missing again, since vader was left alone after the two… did things <_<;;
3. bon-chan is on his way to find eneru. let me go make something with bon-chan that might be of interest in developing the storyline, and then we'll take things from there.
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What about Pac Man/Woman? Are they out?
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They're banging in a crater.
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keep in mind that at this point bon-chan doesn't know that eneru is in need of shruberry. and shrub town is (obviously) the place to go to if you're in need of shruberry.
and taboo, last time vader checked pacman was busy humping ms.pacman. we should leave them alone for now. maybe they'll show up again in the future? XD
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I like where this is going.
Question: how did Molverdolt turn back into a regular carrot?
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The boss rabbit touched him again??
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… How did he manage to talk as a carrot in the 1st place?
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@e1n:
http://e1n.kefi.org/images/BLOG/2005-03/enerusa14.jpg
keep in mind that at this point bon-chan doesn't know that eneru is in need of shruberry. and shrub town is (obviously) the place to go to if you're in need of shruberry.
and taboo, last time vader checked pacman was busy humping ms.pacman. we should leave them alone for now. maybe they'll show up again in the future? XD
wasnt bon-chan a jedi?
behold my crapiness:
edit: CRAP! i messed up in the speech bubble. It should be how to get home.
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Thanks, 1 2 Jango.
Also, who is Tarken? I haven't watched Star Wars in so long I can't remember.
Tarkin is the commander of the Death star, slightly outranks Vader, and is also Vader's sex partner.
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… How did he manage to talk as a carrot in the 1st place?
remember, nothing makes sense in the moon. <_<
i guess the healing process after being turned into a carrot is gradual, but before he can heal completely, boss rabbit touched him again.
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Heheheh, I just got a killer idea, I will only use it if everyone gets into a real jam tho.
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…what happened to Bon Chans Lightsaber?
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kept somewhere in pocket for later use.