Sw33t .
Hiroy Descriminates Art once Again ver2
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Sw33t .
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Haha I wonder what's up with Liu…Could it be a secret crush? Or more sinsiter motives?:ninja:
And I think the "program" will play a role in the future?LOL at the question query! A busty diva that lives in Canada? Could it be!?Is it Celine Dion? NO, not busty enough!
I will search on! And in the mean time, I might try to come up with some question for this segment! It's really fun! :DAlso nice creepy avatar you're sporting there...
I suddenly am afraid to give any kind of backtalk and feel inclined to fulfill your every demand...
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This is sickening.
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This is the reason I'm not camping. Doomed match from the start.
Late but that's a funny and nice drawn pic man :D
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Haha I wonder what's up with Liu…Could it be a secret crush? Or more sinsiter motives?:ninja:
And I think the "program" will play a role in the future?LOL at the question query! A busty diva that lives in Canada? Could it be!?Is it Celine Dion? NO, not busty enough!
I will search on! And in the mean time, I might try to come up with some question for this segment! It's really fun! :DAlso nice creepy avatar you're sporting there...
I suddenly am afraid to give any kind of backtalk and feel inclined to fulfill your every demand...
JUST DON'T FREAKING HURT ME! PLEASE!Nah.. Liu is none of those. You'll see. The Bright Light program is.. eh… important. You'll see... something.
I don't think that answer meant anything as I was trying to say "no one has seen the Creator, so no one knows how he/she looks like". The afro thing is a joke on me "The Creator"... since I'm Syn's description. Maybe next time I'd try to directly break the 4th wall XD
Maybe I should let Sai make me a cute version if it's scaring you so much. I honestly changed it because I was in a crummy mood yesterday... and needed to mask it with a smile.
@metteminne:
Late but that's a funny and nice drawn pic man :D
You are only saying that because Buggy in it. I know how you roll dude.
Speaking of pictures with Buggy. The collab with Sai is done at last. We tried.
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Well ofcourse :<
And that is awesome man , great job to both you and Sai
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Still need an avi sized one?
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Hahaha, those are nice answers.
Also, I now know that the elementary school stuff is in the past and the adult phase is in the prest.
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@metteminne:
I would indeed like that :)
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@Cuddles:
Hahaha, those are nice answers.
Also, I now know that the elementary school stuff is in the past and the adult phase is in the prest.
All according to plan (not really).Consider their generation lucky.
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Consider their generation lucky.
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@metteminne:
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Try it now.
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Ok thanks man .
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Hahaha! Awesome gif, Hiroy. And awesome avvie, Mette. xD
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Neato, auto-save works even when you log out. :D I was worried I'd have to start over again.
Part 14: Should say "Gimme that!!" Now for "Don't speak up at me!!" I'm not sure if you meant "Don't talk down to me!!" or "Don't talk back to me!!" It sounds to me like "Todd" is saying not to talk because he is the law, rather than him getting mad because Richter is condescending. So I think the second phrase fits better. The "Todd… Dude." bubble in the 4th panel looks a little sloppy. I mistook the outline of the bubble for a J and was momentarily confused. "So, I'm calling you Todd!" I believe you can take out the comma here. If you were to remove the exclamation mark, and make it one sentence, it would be: "You look like a redshirt character anyway, so I'm calling you Todd!" Sometimes you can have fragments to imitate natural speech that people use, but I think joining the two clauses into one works better in this case.
In the second strip, you should have "Who names their child Red?" Not sure if you need to, but "Red" could be in quotation marks with the question mark on the outside. Also, I love Richter's expression when he says this. It's one of my fave-expressions up there with wobbly-lipped Leo and scary principal face.I learned something interesting about the difference between "alright" and "all right." I've always taken them to be two different words with different meanings. Apparently "alright" is used informally a lot in writings and in publications, but in actuality, critics insist that this is not a real word/is wrong. Since this is a comic and not "formal writing" as they call it, I think you can keep it as "alright," but I just thought it was something interesting to share.
Lastly, "You heard her**,** grunt**!**" I assume you used an exclamation mark, but make it more distinctive. Right now it looks like a colon. And the "G" in "smug" should look more clear as well.
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Thanks. I'm reviewing over those now and I'll see if I can make a response.
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Wow, you show marked improvement every time I come back and look at this thread. Your four panel stories have a good pace and inspire me to start comicing again. I am curious to see what happens next…
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Wow, you show marked improvement every time I come back and look at this thread. Your four panel stories have a good pace and inspire me to start comicing again. I am curious to see what happens next…
OMG! She's visiting the art forum! Shinpan visted! So cool!!Eh… ingore the fanboy. Thanks for visiting.And thanks for the compliments. I'm getting there. If I inspired to get you into comicing again, then that's another person I've successfully converted. That's a chain reaction of awesome right there!
Excuse me while I get a more fitting avatar for this occasion. You caught me at the wrong time.
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Another person you've converted? Who're the others?
… well, besides me. I guess. lol
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Drawing in general I meant.
Dervish… tigerlilly... you...
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I see~
You're converting people all over the place. Soon you might even have your own religion!
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I prefer cults.
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Of course you would.
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Finished up a late gift.
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Awww, indignant Luffy! How cute! I'm sure Al will love it!
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Yeah, dat dirtmonkey has taste when it comes to her presents.
The beard needs to become canon asap!
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That Luffy beard is so damn manly.
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Yup. She like it. She HAS to like it. It's Luffy. With a beard. Exactly the kind of manhood she wanted :)
@tiger: Yeah.. I took some liberties to help me finish it. Had no idea where the idea for the clothes came from.
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Been a little busy lately, so it's been a bit since I last checked in here. But I love your latest work, Hiroy! Great update on the comic; I'm very curious to see what the "Bright Light" program is about, oho. Has there been any foreshadowing around it in the previous chapters, I wonder? I'm thinking about part 9 in particular, hmm~ And definitely looking forward to getting to know Leo's "new friend." I have to admit, I have a real soft spot for Leo–I find his nervous demeanor to be rather endearing, so I'm eager to learn more about him and his past. ^^
And wow, that Luffy pic is excellent! I agree with Lil, the way you drew the clothes was particularly nice–the way the fabric moves on his jacket and around his pant legs is almost elemental. Really good work.
Also:
@Hiroy:Drawing in general I meant.
Dervish… tigerlilly... you...
(I'm on to you. :ninja:)
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That gif makes me wanna watch my Hunchback of Notre Dame vhs.
… but I'm already watching OP.
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Drat Vee. That means you win a drawing. Brace for it!!
Brace for it!!
Braccceee…
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After I'm done with these current drawings. Still, I have to get you back for the bishie version of me. Women are hard to... wait... I can feel an idea coming! Huhuahahaha!
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And no. I don't think I mentioned the Bright Light program till now actually. Maybe I snuck on on a poster or some vauge thing. Part 9.... Well... Hmmm... I dunno. They are completely seperate things actually, but... hmmm... Maybe by the end of the arc I'll get to that. And yes. Leo's story is interesting. Look forward to it.
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What an anticlimactic thing to brace for. lol I wonder what you're gonna draw~
Oooh, Leo's story is interesting? I'm curious now~
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Something that lives up to that thread's title. Something… discriminating. Muhahahah!
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/insert laughinghiroy.gif here
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Hahaha~ lol
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I'm putting it on the front page. Easy to find.
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Makes sense.
Specially considering how often it gets used…
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Offended? Scared? Trippin?
Duncare.
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I don't even know what is going on but the moustaches rock! lol
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I don't even know what is going on but the moustaches rock! lol
I was a little upset that people felt intimidated to comment when me and Sai are talking within our own topics. So this kinda happened.
We could be sipping tea, wearing silly mustaches, and not saying word.. And even that can annoy people. I just don't give anymore. The art forum was dull for me before all this.
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Why hello there to you too, mustachioed gentleman!
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People complained about you and Sai talking in your own thread?
Anyway I like the moustaches
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Mustaches are classy. That by default makes tea, talking and anything artsy exquisitely classy.
Sips
Why hello there fair gentlemen. The coat hanger is at the door. Make yourselves at comfortable and help yourselves to the delicacies on the dinner table. My home is your home.
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Oh , this tea party is simply fabulous gentlemen .
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puts dirty boots on table
Huh, nice you have it here, Hiroy fella. Everything looks so darn classy n sparkly…
with that classical music playing in the background and shit...
Wait, is that caviar and lobster on the dinner table? And are those diamonds on your chandelier?
And is that a polarbear rug at the fireside!? And is that the real Mona Lisa hanging in the living room!!?That's it! I have enough of your classy richness!
Your 200,000 dollar leather couch is gonna get it!
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Something that lives up to that thread's title. Something… discriminating. Muhahahah!
I'm just gonna say it and maybe make a fool of myself before I regret if forever:
Aliens? Dun-dun DUUUUN! xD -
Moustaches ftw! First thing in the morning, there's nothing I like more than wearing moustaches and sipping tea. Do you have doughnuts to go with that?
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Why yes. We have dougnuts. Made with the world's finest yeast and baked to perfection within the royal oven of Saint Alexandra…. or some Greek god. Not that the name matters to me. It costed me alot of money you see?
Hohoho. That's no rug dear.
It's actually a live polor bear.
His name is Rugby
Ironically smirk
pokes bear
Oh he's dead... no wonder he has lost so much weight. The bulter would fetch me some new cubs as a replacement. My apologies for this mess.And ohh... You want that antique couch? What for? I was planning on getting rid of it to make room for a more expensive one.
I'm just gonna say it and maybe make a fool of myself before I regret if forever:
Aliens? Dun-dun DUUUUN! xDI was thinkin something I don't usually do. We'll see.
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At first I read that as Rigby. Ah, poor Rugby. I was wondering why your fancy rug had flies all over it. I hope those cubs manage to last. :0