Part 14 was one of my absolute favorites so far! That band just seemed so hilarious + the dance invitation, awww yeah
Baroque Works Disco Bar (Crack Filled.)
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Okay. Imma sort out the fan-fic link. I have no idea why it's being an ass.
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i will try to look you up later , but for now i am gone
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Do you have a previously existing fanfiction.net account from before 2005? Mine is, and you probably have to go through the update procedures before they let you link to it. Alternatively, you can just make a new account. I ended up doing that since fanfiction.net's user interface is a giant stinking pile of-
Anyways, I love your stories XD I would totally jump over to defend Coby.
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Nah. I think I started it at the end of 2009.
DRAT.
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Crocodile, Mihawk, Doflamingo, Shura, Franky and himself have formed a group. They’re singing I Wanna Sex You Up for the room. With lots of air crumps and crotch grabs.
…........................WHAT.
you just broke my brain.They race past Mia, who has caught Crocodile’s belt from the stage and is prancing around with it.
prance prance prance
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…........................WHAT.
you just broke my brain.Dammit. How can I fix that?
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ME AND LAW :o OH HELL YES! glomps you happily
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Someone toss an idea out. I'm stuck.
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PART 15?
Songs:
! tI75YJ-eUEM
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! zGSMh7J66UwThe One Where People Get New Dates
…SADI-CHAN, VIVI AND NAMI GET UP ON STAGE AND DO A DANCE TO PUSH IT. They’ve got chairs and they know how to work them. Cyber-Robin is losing his mind and throwing any dollar the can get his hands on. Including the ones he took from Paulie’s wallet. And he throws the bills on the stage, Nami lurches for them, sending her chair into the audience. Somehow, it lands between Makino and BartArt, who were awkwardly dancing only feet away from the bar they were stationed at. But it only stays on the floor for a moment, since Doflamingo kicks it away for more room to dance with Piratemarimo. But the floor creates a circle around Hancock. She had attempted to catch another squirrel, and it somehow ended up in her pants. Though the room can’t see it her jeans, they think she’s just shaking it around. Whatever she’s doing, half the men think it’s hot, although she looks like a paraplegic belly dancer. Duval sees her rump shake in his direction and takes it as an invitation, so he jumps in ready to get some. Metteminne has given up on getting his revenge on me, since they crowd is too busy with the scene. He goes to collect Buggy and get more booze. As they go on, snickering about their road trip memories, they are stopped by Usopp and Sussi. The two are in a heated tango about the bar, spilling drinks all over. One lands in Kid’s lap, having him jump up in ferocity. Whipping around, he is greeted by the sight of the men on stage singing a now sloppy version of Full Service by New Kids on the Block. The bewilderment of the indiscriminate band makes him dizzy, and he stumbles onto the floor. He lands on top of Law, ruining his flirt-a-thon with Charmedward. The hot doctor stomps on the red-head man’s face, screeching profanity and aggravations of his booty call being interrupted. Charmedward shrugs the drama off and spots me. Dashing up to me, she notices I’m dateless and I the same to her. We nod about the stupidity of our dates and notice that X Drake and Sabo are free for flirts. High-fiving, we go to start it up, but Sabo is drug away by Eli Heart. Laughing at Charmedward’s misfortune, I take X Drake by the hand to get it on. As she starts to sob from seclusion of a partner, Ace spots the sadden girl and leaps to her screaming her name. They run in slow motion to the other, and straight into Mia. She has Crocodile by the collar and they’re both in fedoras. Crocodile is holding his pants up with his hook-hand, because Mia refuses to hand the belt back over. But most pleas of his are drowned out by Trapped screeches of adoration for Shanks air-guitaring on the stage. Garp, who sees her alone, runs to get a dance from her. But he trips over Sengoku’s goat and crashes down on top of the bar. BartArt cries out in despair and runs to fix the splintered wood, leaving Makino in the floor alone…
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I love the second song so much. Croc + fedora = Me bleeding to death from nosebleed.
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Sadi and Nami are a given, but Vivi? Wow. Well, still waters run deep.
Loved the slow motion running, that made for a wonderful mental image XD
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And they're singing New Kids on the Block. HAPPY.
There is a part soon that focus on you, Marimo. Still…I have two I'm debating gets you in the end.
Thanks, Nia!
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OOOooo!! Suspense! and Nia, I will once again state the obvious and say that your avatar is pimping. No matter what, it'll always be so. Hattori never fails to make every outfit look good. 030
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They run in slow motion to the other, and straight into Mia. She has Crocodile by the collar and they’re both in fedoras. Crocodile is holding his pants up with his hook-hand, because Mia refuses to hand the belt back over. But most pleas of his are drowned out by Trapped screeches of adoration for Shanks air-guitaring on the stage
i love you i love you i love you i love you i love you
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dies laughing
There's total chaos and I'm loving it! XDDDDD
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XD MAWAHAHAHAHAAA!! Awesome!! the hole part made my laugh, but wild tango with Usopp??!! XD (Hopefully I won't be let go by Makino!). Btw, I'm stranded in New York cuz of bad flight weather.. I'm sitting in the hotel bar (HA!) reading this and it just made my unwanted night here so much beter.. (Plus the new OP chapter!! <3).
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But most pleas of his are drowned out by Trapped screeches of adoration for Shanks air-guitaring on the stage. Garp, who sees her alone, runs to get a dance from her. But he trips over Sengoku’s goat and crashes down on top of the bar. BartArt cries out in despair and runs to fix the splintered wood, leaving Makino in the floor alone…
oh the lovely chaos. and don't leave Makino alone! is Enel going to swoop in next?
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Eneru must have Makino as a bride and ride off with her into the sunset. I have realized this is the only answer (Kitsune and Sea's influence is really rubbing off on me).
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PFFFFFFFT Duval and hancock, new OTP right here XD AHAHAHAHA
where the hell are these squirrels coming from? BWAHAHAHAH XD
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PFFFFFFFT Duval and hancock, new OTP right here XD AHAHAHAHA
I'm guilty of having fanart for this pair :ninja:
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There's nothing Mia doesn't have is there? XD
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wait i stopped screaming about buggy?
that doesnt seem right:ninja:
but great chapter , keep on writing!
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whooob, Part 15 Luvving it!
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Vivi dancing on stage. Scarrrrrrrrrry.
And how could I give the girls dollars when I live in the UK? XDDDDD Good job I stole from other people.
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Vivi had one to many Wild Silks at the bar.
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My thoughts on it: XD
! @GypsyCarts:
! > But the floor creates a circle around Hancock. She had attempted to catch another squirrel, and it somehow ended up in her pants. Though the room can’t see it her jeans, they think she’s just shaking it around. Whatever she’s doing, half the men think it’s hot, although she looks like a paraplegic belly dancer.
! THERES SQURIELS IN MY PANTS! Epic song
! @GypsyCarts:
! > He lands on top of Law, ruining his flirt-a-thon with Charmedward.
! =D Fun times
! @GypsyCarts:
! > Charmedward shrugs the drama off and spots me. Dashing up to me, she notices I’m dateless and I the same to her. We nod about the stupidity of our dates and notice that X Drake and Sabo are free for flirts. High-fiving, we go to start it up,
! Ahahaha, forget Sexy Doctors; I'VE SEEN Ms GYPSY
@GypsyCarts:
! > As she starts to sob from seclusion of a partner, Ace spots the sadden girl and leaps to her screaming her name.
! It was nice seeing you Gypsy, let's do it again some time…ACCCCE runs off
@GypsyCarts:
! > They run in slow motion to the other, and straight into Mia. She has Crocodile by the collar and they’re both in fedoras. Crocodile is holding his pants up with his hook-hand, because Mia refuses to hand the belt back over. But most pleas of his are drowned out by Trapped screeches of adoration for Shanks air-guitaring on the stage.
! This whole bit was just an ongoing laugh for me XD I've very sorry Cap'n Mia, by the way, allow me to give you a lead for that collar give a green lead to match the Croc-collar ….....Okay now Im rereading and it looks like Gypsy meant the SHIRT collar.....oh well...too lazy to delete words...
! ("Wow she had ACTUAL squirells in her pants")
! Also Gypsy, could I try writing a one-shot crack attempt at OP characters during this party? Not us guys of course, I wouldn't be able to do the personalities. But I wanted to ask to see if you're okay with it…. -
By all means, I'd love to see what you people see going on at this party. :)
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Decided to keep it in Gypsy's style becuase it flows better (and it fun to write)
Part 15.5
Okama Vs MJ…..JANGO HAS HYPONOTISED HIMSELF INTO THINKING HE'S A DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION CHAMPION AND HAS CHALLENGED BON KUREI. The okama is all "can't touch this" though so it calls for a dance battle of epic proportions! The pair gracefully leap into the centre of the dance floor, narrowly avioding the chair thrown at them by Sadi-chan; who is mad that her audience's eyes are elsewhere. She storms over to them with the intention of putting them both in cuffs but a still-high Sanji spots her and Mellorines his way over to the guard. With the only objector silenced, Bon Kurei and Jango take their places on the floor and stike a pose (SUPA). Jango looks up from under his weird-ass-shaped-sunglasses and cries "THIS GOES OUT TO HINA!" He then soars into his personal version of the macarena while everyone on the dance floor is all "WTF?!" Hina faceplams tragically before deciding to interfear (after all, he's dancing for HER) Bon kurei is too busy laughing his ass off at the pathetic sight to even take his moonwalk seriously. Hina jumps up to DJ Brook's table and grabs the first record that comes to hand. In seconds the room is filled with the beat of "Things that go bump in the night" by Allstars. Jango rolls with it however and adds hand jives the likes of which even Chuck Norris could not match. Doflamingo looks up from where-ever-the-heck-he-is at the sound of the familair beat and grins. Screaming something about "his signature song" he prances into the spotlight, shoving a mortified Bon Kurei out the way as he does so. Dofla comences shaking his pimpin' pink thin' as PervyPirateFancier shudders at the petrifying memories this song gives her. He's quickly booed by Luffy though (who was peeved for being ignored for so long) and decided that he should do a solo instead. While Dofla is scarring everyone mentally, Jango ends his routine with a quick burst of Big-fish-little-fish-cardboard-box and herocially bows to a screaming audience's approval. Bon Kurei sulks off to drown his sorrows in a bananacat, avioding a thrusting Duval as he does so.
Elsewhere the dance champion Charmedward rolls her eyes at the amatures and continues her slow motion run towards Ace......Oh heck that was fun :XD: Didn't really focus much on the actual dance to much cause I don't know dance moves. And sorry Pervypirate, but this song came onto my ipod and I ahd to work it then, I then also knew that Dofla would HAVE to be a part of this....
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Jango doesn't need to hypnotize himself to be the champ XD He just is XD
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-slow claps-
I am quite impressed. That had me laughing my ass off the entire time.
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-slow claps-
I am quite impressed. That had me laughing my ass off the entire time.
:blink::happy: Really? squee Thank you ^^ It was so fun, and weird not to do my normal style, but I write with too much detail to be cracky XD
And cyber/Local you are right XD I just had to have him hyponise himself plus I wanted a motivation for the dance off
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SO. MUCH. CRACK.
I'm laughing so hard my stomach hurts. And that reminds me I need food, but I can't bring myself to leave this forum. This is actually dangerous. XDD I love this SO much, beyond words.
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Ben really busy these days but I came to read this part and wasn't disapointed :D
- Poor poor Hancock, she had a squirrel in her pants… But still, men swoon all over her XD
- Yay Sabo ! I wonder how this will turn out between us <3
- The slow motion was epic !
Thanks Gypsy ;D
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The slow motion is great it's all:
_Ace turned his tanned face to the upset beauty on the floor. Her lips drawn up to the start of a lonely cry, he could not hear the sniffles over the breaking of his heart. Sweat glistening off his dark hair's flips, he called her name: "CHHHHHHHHHHHARMMMEDDDWAAAAAAAAAAARDDDDD!"
Face turning sadly and gradually, a smile broke upon it upon the sight of the man racing toward her. From the depths of her breast, she cried back: "AAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCEEEEE!"_
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smacks Gypsy You're haminess is showing XD
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I'm a hopeless romantic! Leave me alone!
Oh shit. You didn't hear that. >.>
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The slow motion is great it's all:
Ace turned his tanned face to the upset beauty on the floor. Her lips drawn up to the start of a lonely cry, he could not hear the sniffles over the breaking of his heart. Sweat glistening off his dark hair's flips, he called her name: "CHHHHHHHHHHHARMMMEDDDWAAAAAAAAAAARDDDDD!"
Face turning sadly and gradually, a smile broke upon it upon the sight of the man racing toward her. From the depths of her breast, she cried back: "AAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCEEEEE!"
….................brain malfunctions :blink::wub: Words.......not.....enough.....
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!That should clear it up.
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I LOVE WHEN I GET GIFTS.
That last one…damn.
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They're all by Cloverkeat over on deviantart, she's got alot more, plus Croc and Dofla XD
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They're all by Cloverkeat over on deviantart, she's got alot more, plus Croc and Dofla XD
_________________ I must see this.
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HA charmed, you have talent. ;)
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FILLER.
! …MIHAWK PROPOSES TO PIRATEMARIMO BECAUSE HE CAN. She debates on whether or not this is the man for her, as Crocodile grows covetous that she is making her time with the swordsman and not him. But he cannot go retrieve her from the man, because if he takes a step, he’ll have his pants on the ground. Mia, knowing he wants his belt, lashes it like a whip at him. The tip of it strikes Coby in the face, shattering his glasses and causing him to drop his glass of milk. Crying out in shock and fury, he founds on Mia, ready to bust her skull. Since I have control of whatever the fuck I want, kind of like Doflamingo but with MINDS AS WELL, I command Trapped to ditch Shanks for Coby. She stands up for him, declaring her undying love for the small pink haired boy. Drowning him in kisses, the duo escape to a dark corner of the party room. LEAVING ME TO HAVE SHANKS ALL TO MYSELF. WE PULL OUT JETPACKS AND RIDE OFF ONTO THE ROOF TO LOOK AT THE STARS. The rest of the party starts a grind line with Enel, who has passed out glow sticks. Nia and Hattori are helping Brook up in the DJ booth. But then, since I felt like it, I gave Shanks back. He leaps on stage after his moment of weakness to my awesomeness and starts singing Eye to Eye for Trapped. She is like: “Sorry, Coby!” But Mia stops her and hands her a drink. We, as in the Fandom Pirates, assemble at a bar and being to sing “My Heart Will Go On” over Shank’s noise…
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Alright guys, just posting here in case you didn't get my PM (GO READ IT IF YOU HAVEN'T).
In accordance to our…."probation", I'll call it, no more on liners here. When you post, please try to contribute your thoughts about the fic. It can be astonishment at the level of crack or hilarity at something particularly silly that happened. Just no more off topic posts and one liners. I think that's reasonable.
So keep it up in the meanwhile and behave <3
Oh and spits milk out
WHAT? MIHAWK PROPOSES TO PIRATEMARIMO?? laughing head off Gypsy, you're crazy you know that. That girl already has a harem, we really don't need propositions. And you can't do that to Coby! First off, Trapped's going to have you head for making her ditch Shanks, second off I OBJECT. Coby's too...er...well, he's not suited for that kind of stuff! The ending makes up for it though....I think.
But really, "My Heart Will Go On?" XD We're at a rainbow crack disco rave and we sing sappy Titanic songs???
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ok , but do we need to delete our old posts?
and mihawk wants to marry marimo ? lolz!
(so this is not a bad post right?)
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@metteminne:
and mihawk wants to marry marimo ? lolz!
All because he could. (that, and the affection he feels for piratemarimo)
And shoot. I thought someone PM'd a Mod to close the old thread for a rest period….not permantely close it.
But it's only fair, we did go off-topic (was there any on-topicness?) XD
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They must be wed! A disco wedding shall come!
Yes, Titanic.
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MEETAAAAA. WHY IS YOUR PM NOT WORKING??? I emailed you instead. And no, most of the posts have been on topic discussing the lovely crack fictions so I don't think we have to delete anything. Just be a bit careful
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MEETAAAAA. WHY IS YOUR PM NOT WORKING??? I emailed you instead.
Because….you're not my AP Buddy List. (I chose to only accept PMs from users that are on the list. Should I add you?)
EDIT: Never mind, I read the e-mail, I know the deal now. ;)