I posted it in the OP community at LJ, so clicky at this'ere linky if ya wanna read it (it might be worth it ). It's no slash or anything, it's just me taking an old folk tale about a magic fish and throwing the Mugiwaras (mainly Sanji) into the mix.
My first OP fanfic
Well! I'm only halfway through it, but you did a nice job a writing the story.
First of all, it was creative; and you used Sanji's knowledge of fish to your advantage. Well done.
Second of all, it was interesting to read. I can't remember how many Fanfics I start, but stop at the second paragraph because of it's dullness.
Third, the dialogue is great. The interaction is interesting.
However, I see a lack of details for both the setting and emotions of the characters (In this case, Sanji). A bit lacking in the imagery as well.
Just advice from one writer to another; you take it if you feel like it. ;p
But overall, I like it. Great job! :]
EDIT: I have to add: Love the ending.