strawhat and his
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strawhat and his
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friends who made
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a very big
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snowman who came
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armed with bazooka
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to shoot the
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long dead hippo…
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and that long
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ignored ussop who
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had an itch
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on his balls
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Kaku made a-cameo-aperance
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and wore it.
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Suddenly, it got
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leeches all over…
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and he got….
(sorryy i accidently db posted.)
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a cuban cigar and….
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stuck it in
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a water pipe…
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which he stuck
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down a sink….
(lol Marred, its just me and u doing this haha. were like taking turns cuz the 2 of us have replied to this the most i think. good job everyone else too. lets see how far we can get :):))
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and then the
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water started to
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spew out of….
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the sink in to
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Luffy's open mouth
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which made him hungry
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so sanji cooked….
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an apple-pie filled
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with apples :P and
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threw it at…
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Lucci's stupid bird
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Hattori went beserk and
(sorry for 4 words)
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pecked at Sanji's
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Making sanji drop
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sorry about the double post
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…. devilkid... "pecked at Sanji's Making sanji drop" isn't proper grammar. I'm sorry, I know I'm being uptight, but it really bothers me. The "S" and APOSTROPHY imply a possessive noun; that means an OBJECT or an adjective, then object have to follow that, not a verb. For example, "Hattori pecked at Sanji's eyes." or "Hattori pecked at Sanji's face." or "Hattori pecked at Sanji's bony, girlish legs." (No offence to anyone, just an example.)
I don't want to be a stick in the mud about this, >_< but I honestly can't stand things like that, from all of the English classes I've hammered into my brain. (I was bound to explode about this somewhere, going on the internet and all.) Although, if it was just a rushed entry, then consider this simply me venting about grammar. God knows, I've made mistakes, but I'm always glad when someone tells me, so I can correct them.
Anyway, consider my previous post "pecked at Sanji," .. that would make the rest correct.
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My grammer and punctuation is bad but i'll try to make it better.
can i say "Which made him" as the following sentence -
Ahhh… I think you missed the point.
Well, now that I've made an ass out of myself, I'll just go to bed. o/ sorry if this is spam. -
errrr….this really isnt in the topic if you want to talk about grammar start your own topic about proper grammer!!
back on topic from "making sanji drop":
his prized knife
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He picked it….
(lol yea good idea Luffy :P)
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up with tongs…
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and flung it
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at Nami because….
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she made him
(no hard feelings about what happened ok marred)and for everybody else thanks for your cooperation
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randy with a passion
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because he felt…
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really REALLY horny… :P
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Which made Nami
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want to have