Maybe I'll get some intrest out of this. Due to lack of ability to make a creative title, I just used the characters last name. Its about a really weird, with a power that has only been seen once before. He attends an academy for kids with strange powers, headed by adults called Adapts. Adapts are divided by skill types (Earth, Wind, Fire and Water). The main
Think of it as Harry Potter meets Naruto meets X Man meets Avatar.
Oh well, lets get this started.
Chapter 1: Reflection
Narraration(Jazz): My name is Aderu B. Jazz, and I'll be your narrator! For all my life Ive had this weird strength, so I decided to go try out to become an Adapt. Ive always felt compelled to become one, and now that Im old enough, Im ready to take on the responsibility! Lets hope I dont die in the process…hehe.
Setting: A round fighting arena, with a council sitting above. The council is shrowded in shadows. A crowd of hopeful canidates stand under the council.
Council Member: Greetings hopefuls. My name is Seio, and welcome to the Academy of Elements and Adapts! Every year we accept 7 students into the school, and out of the dozens of you who showed up, only 7 will remain standing.
10 young men appear infront of the canidates
Seio: To gain entry into the academy, you must risk your lives to fight these 10 Adapts. Of course, they will not kill you, but we will not be able to protect you if they go abit... over board.
Canidate: scoff I'm not afraid of a few guys taller then me, let I'll tear em up!
Female Canidate: Dont get too hyped up Aaron.
Aaron: Hah. I'll kill them all myself, I'll TEAR EM UP!
Jazz fights his way through the crowd
Jazz: Oh man, Im late Im late...
Seio: And with that, let the entry exam BEGIN!
One Examiner appears infront of Jazz
Examiner: You look weak. Time for you to be weeded out.
Flames engulf the area around Jazz, knocking out a few other canidates in the process. Jazz is unscathed.
Examiner: EHHHHHHHH?! Hmph. Small little kid... You got lucky.
Jazz: Um, sorry. Im new here, is this where the exams start...? (Yes, Jazz is incredibly naieve(sp) )
Examiner: What the fuck? Who are you...
Jazz: Aderu B. Jazz smile Nice to meet ya!
Examiner: Well well well...my name is Sato. I'll be the one to make sure you DONT MAKE IT INTO THE SCHOOL!
Jazz: OOOOH , I made it in time? Well then....
Jazz knocks out Sato with one punch
Jazz: ALRIGHT! Do I pass?!
Everyone stares and backs away from Jazz as the Council looks on in awe
Seio: Well well... I think this one passes.
Academy Council Head: That group is getting out of control..The Romance can no longer be allowed to grow....
Seio's voice: I think we have another Adapt... like that man.
The council member drops the phone
Wish I could draw what I saw in my head.
Anyways, any comments? Ill type up the 2nd chapter if anyone actually likes it...
I think the narraration was kinda corny, I dunno.
Thanks for any feedback on my generic shonen story though.