**This is a story I'm writing. I usually don't write unless I have to but I've had this idea for quite a while. I know it isn't that good and it needs some work. I need some constructive critiscm.
And in case you havn't figured, Infinity is the name of the story. No particular reason, I just like the name.**
! Chapter 1
! “Daybreak”
! “More, more!” yelled the kids
“Sorry, I gotta leave now” Senshi said. He was a young man, about 5’10 in height. He had somewhat messy, shiny black hair. His emerald eyes pierced your gaze. His thin mustache and trimmed goatee gave him a slight ruggedness.
“Wait, Senshi” At least give me your uniform before you leave” said Mr. Sensei.
“Oh, yeah. Here ya go.” Senshi said while scratching the back of his neck. It was a white martial arts uniform with a black belt. One the back of the belt it said 56th degree.
“where’s you going?” a little kid asked
Senshi grinned. “To the top”
Now wearing Black shorts and a gray collared shirt, Senshi left Sunset village.
! “Yosh yosh yosh yosh yosh yosh, yoshy!” Senshi sang while walking up a hill. It was a pretty rocky hill. There was a road on it and a few trees here and there. As Senshi walked nearer to the apex of the hill he saw what resembled a sign.
“Wassa? A sign?” Senshi examined the sign closely before remember an important detail.
“Oh! Signs usually have words on them.” Senshi shouted “Lets see, it says ‘Klatiko Village’ odd name.” Senshi walked past the sign and into the village.
“What the hell? Where’s everyone?” It was an empty town. There were stone buildings and houses along the side of the dusty road. The road cam to a fork. Senshi decided to go the way the wind was blowing, left. Suddenly a fist shot at him from behind, he caught it with ease. The man who attempted to hit him was around 7 ft tall with brown pants and a huge pistol in his belt. He had a reddish nose and long curly black hair.
! “Who’d ya work for?” Senshi asked. He let go of the mans fist.
“What are you talking about“” the man replied.
“I work for myself” He said shakily. It was obvious he was lying.
“Are ya saying you took on this town by yourself?”
“Me and my crew” The man replied while digging for something in his pocket.
“Alright. I give up” Senshi told him while putting his knees on the floor. The man grinned and took out some handcuffs from his pocket.
! Senshi followed the man into a wooden building with some broken windows. They went down to the basement and reached another door. The red-nose got out a golden key and opened the door. On the other side of the door was a stair-case. It was long and windy.
“He should be here somewhere” Senshi whispered while looking around.
“You say something?”
“No.” they were now in a huge room with a whole bunch of people. Children ran from place to place playing games, seniors sat on the floor. It seemed the whole town was here. The man left and locked the doors. Senshi proceeded to walk around as if he was looking for something. He stopped in front of a snoring man. He looked about the same age as Senshi. He had jet black hair gelled back. He was wearing black jeans and a black shirt a picture of a few golden coins on it. The soles of his feet were black, indicating he was either naturally dirty or he lost his shoes.
“Oi! Wake up.” Senshi yelled. When that didn’t work he kicked his on the belly. The guy woke up.
“You….” He said while yawning. He stood up and brushed the dust off his knees.
“Alright let’s go.”
“Ah.”
! Chapter 2
! “Free at Last”
! “Come on!” the man screamed.
“Damn Abree, I’m coming” Both of them proceeded to go to the staircase from where they came.
“Not so fast, boy” Two guards wearing black suits and shades stood in their way. Senshi and Abree both gave them a punch in the gut, and they fell. The people looked shocked. Abree went on to explain that around a month ago a group of bandits had come through and raided the town. He said he tried to fight, took out 30 of them. But then the boss came and stabbed him in the chest. He pulled up his shirt to show the scar. They finished in a few minutes. We’d thought it was over when they left, it was bad enough the whole town had been deprived of everything. But it seemed some of the lesser bandits stayed, they took everyone into this room.
“I was waiting for you.” Abree stated.
“You were supposed to come a week ago.”
“I know. I got……sidetracked.” Senshi smiled and a yawned.
“Let’s sleep here for a while.” Abree tried to stop him, but it was too late. Senshi has fallen asleep, standing up.
“May I borrow this bottle?” Abree asked an old man sitting on the floor.
“Anything for this towns hero.” the old man smiled. Abree got the glass bottle and broke it on Senshi’s head.
“No! It belongs to the fat man with the beard!?” Senshi screamed after getting hit with the bottle.
“Come on.” Abree said in a solemn voice.
“I want to kick their asses before dark.”
“Kick who’s asses?!?” Senshi asked out of curiosity.
“Who else? The bandits.”
“YOOOSSSSHH!!” Senshi screamed as he turned around. He was now facing the people imprisoned in the room.
“Come one peoples, you’re going home!” Senshi explained to everyone. It look a little while, but they finally convinced everyone to get out. With Senshi leading the band they went forward. Breaking the doors wasn’t a problem for the two friends.
They were finally outside. Standing in front of them was the man Senshi first saw in this town followed by what seemed to be a few of his underlings.
! “Get outta my way, NOW!!” Senshi said with a stern, and extremely scary, face.
“Or what?” the cocky man answered?
“ You two may be strong, but your out-numbered and all of you except the new guy haven’t ate for two weeks. What do you think you can do?”
“HAHAHAHA.” spit shot across when the monster of a man laughed.
“You guys are dead.” He said while pulling out his pistol. One of the bandits stepped forward and took a little girl. He stabbed her in the arm, blood gushing out. Senshi’s lost his cool.
! “WHAT THE HELL DID SHE DO?!!?!” Senshi’s ran forward and head butted the sadist in the gut. Then, while the man was in the air he jumped up and stomped him down into the ground, making small cracks into the earth.
! Senshi started to reach into his pocket.
“Almost forgot, here ya go, you left ‘em in Sunset” Senshi tossed Abree a pair of brass knuckles, though they seemed to be made of gold.
“Take the rest, I got Rudolph.” Senshi ordered Abree.
! “Ah.” Abree answered as if he had worked under Senshi for a long time.
! Senshi planted his feet into the ground. He burst forward and ran as fast as he could toward the red-nosed cowardly weakling. He pulled his arms back as far as he could and made fists.
“DEVILS…..”
When just in front of the man he swung forward will full force, punching the man on both sides of the stomach.
“WRENCH!!” Blood spurted out of the man’s mouth.
! “How…did you?” he had no strength left to talk to he pointed at Senshi’s shoulder. There were three bullets stuck in his stomach and one in his left shoulder. Senshi dug in and grabbed each of the bullets that burned into his flesh and threw them at the man’s face.
! Senshi and Abree stayed in Klatiko village for 3 more days. The doctors agreed to patch up their wounds.
! “Thank you” A voice whispered behind the two men. They quickly turned around. They weren’t surprised they had gotten many thank yous from the townspeople already. It turned out it was the little girl one of the bandits had stabbed. Behind her was the old man Abree asked for the bottle.
! “Your welcome” Senshi said.
“And thank you doctor, for healing out wounds” the old man smiled.
“It was the least we could do for you.” the doctor smiled and scratched his neck.
“Oh, now I remember why I came here. We got a present for you guys. Senshi and Abree looked puzzled, what could they give them? The town was raided just a few weeks ago.
! “I could tell from the way you guys fought., your warriors.” The Doctor explained.
“Which means you want to go to the tournament” Senshi raised an eyebrow.
“What if we don’t?” Abree asked
“HAHA, I’m not stupid. Take it.”
“It belonged to the bandits, we just made it a little better.”
! The present was a ship, a medium-sized caravel. They left that same day sailing into the water.
! “We’ve got to go find the other three, Abree.” Senshi explained
! “yep-yep.” Abree said in his sleep.
**I copied-pasted from mocrosoft word so the format might be a little messed up. Any one know a way I can show it like it appears in word?
And there's more chapters to come. I just started yesterday.**