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    Impromptu Poetry.

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    • theinvisibleworm
      theinvisibleworm
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      I Came Out, Moon
      Beams On My Fore
      Head, Illuminating
      The Sky.

      The Stars Were
      Invisible, I Was
      Angry.

      I Screamed,
      At The Moon.

      Night Came To Me
      Darkness Filled
      The Sky.

      I Hope You Liked
      This Cocophone's
      Sal
      Ute
      To
      The
      Stars.

      Get Out Of My
      Sky You
      Ugly Moon.

      Get Out Of My Sky
      Let The Stars Bloom.

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      • Ms. Suave Debonair
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        • theinvisibleworm
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          theinvisibleworm
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          theinvisibleworm
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          Have you ever considered a more literal reading?

          ps, the idea was that people would write their own impromptu poetry. It's really easy and no one's going to care if you're good or not.

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          • ?
            C-PiMP
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            Title: Temptation

            spinning is my head… control is lacking, but is there. much like the planets and our universe. Chaos is afoot... The brightest of lights has been getting darker as if a evil plan is pulling togeather. As if words of deceit are softly whispered into my ear, made to sound beautiful. .... Two worlds are being pulled close with much friction... Is this the begening of it all? When will it end? When will peace be restored? The battle has just begun all over again. And I still searching for the place from once I which came. Will I find it this time? Will I be whole again?

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            • theinvisibleworm
              theinvisibleworm
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              theinvisibleworm
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              I think you should format it, then it would be much nicer. Thanks for posting!

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                C-PiMP @theinvisibleworm
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                @theinvisibleworm:

                I think you should format it, then it would be much nicer. Thanks for posting!

                I will format nothing… take is as I have written it or format it yourself...
                thats how it came out and thats how I write it.

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                  meethz
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                  What if she knew what love was since years ago?
                  When it first pulled her neck, touch her lips and grazed her thighs
                  When her heart was given, left then frozen in time

                  .. impromptu, so that is all. bows

                  music's never loud enough

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                  • theinvisibleworm
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                    I like that meethz.

                    c-pimp, I just assumed you forgot to format, if that style was your intention than I apologize.

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                      meethz
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                      thank you! ^^ you know, i'm starting to like this poetry stuff XD

                      music's never loud enough

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