Ever make a fan character for One Piece and write em into a fanfic or draw them with an already existing One Piece character? If so, please share it!
I have a few fan characters myself, but I just want to make sure this thread is okay… don't wanna type alot of stuff and then this thread gets closed... >.>
Is this okay?
On my DA page, is the 'embodiment of myself in the OP world.' Wussier than even Koby, he immediately falls into the Arlong crew (essentially worshipping the freak cos he gives a nice clear sense of order). When Arlong Park falls, he joins the Marine, but the same spark isn't there to follow a mere human.
Ever make a fan character for One Piece and write em into a fanfic or draw them with an already existing One Piece character? If so, please share it!
I have a few fan characters myself, but I just want to make sure this thread is okay… don't wanna type alot of stuff and then this thread gets closed... >.>
Is this okay?
Isn't that a mary Sue/Gary Stu?
I made one up… he's a total loser XD
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I wooped batmans ass.
isn't nami kinda mary sue too? ^^
My one piece character named Ritsu thats why I register with that name XDD
here is the drawing. -> http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/771/ritsuchan9mf.jpg wheee ..very old sketch ..and I am a lazy ass <__<;
Making an original character that could fit in the One Piece world != Mary Sue/Gary Stu/self-insert. Character-building in an existing world is fun, guys! Try it!
At the height of a raging fever, I once entertained the concept of an independant merchant company's flagship - The Bright Coin of Widefield and Family's Shipping. It has since grown into a never-to-be-completed project due to the fact that it's fanfiction, and therefore not something I can afford to spend too much time on. Feel free to rip 'em off; I ain't using 'em much. Just let me know if you do, it'd be really cool to see someone actually work with these guys. (/delusions)
The Bright Coin of Martin and Family's Shipping:
Isn't that a mary Sue/Gary Stu?
I made one up… he's a total loser XD
Nah, a Mary Sue/Stu is a fan character who:
Is super powerful and beats all the original characters and/or can make any of the original characters fall inlove with him/her
My characters, I try to keep them from getting Mary-Sue ish as possible…
Here are my characters... Be warned that some do not have names yet
First up, the Red Rooster Pirates:
Captain Cock: The captain of the Red Rooster Pirates. His dream is for people to stop laughing at his name and tremble when they hear the word "Cock" His Devil fruit power is the "Egg Egg Fruit" which allows him to lay eggs, either they hatch into chibi versions of himself that back him up, or turn to egg bombs which he throws.
????: Captain Cocks pet Rooster who has the power to exhale fire
????: Captain Cock's first mate who is always dressed as an egg. He rolls up into an egg and uses himself as a giant ball to crush people.
????: Captain Cock's second Mate, basiccly he uses two giant drum sticks (Drum sticks as in fried chicken thighs) as giant clubs to fight
Next up are the Brown Bull Pirates.
Captain Strogenoff: The Captain, like Captain Cock he wants people to fear his name rather than laugh at it. His devil fruit power is the Stampede Stampede fruit. He can turn his first into a bulls head with horns, or even make his own body into a stampede of powerful running bulls.
?????: Captain Strogenoff's pet Bull, when he runs his legs spin at a complete 360 degree angle, while his nose leaks steam. Basiccly charges into things and makes the noises of a train while doing so.
Betsy: Captain Strogenoffs first mate, He wears a strap on utter which shoots different kinds of Milk depending on which teet he squeezes and pulls. (One Teet has acid Milk, one had sticky milk that can make people stuck, etc)
????: Captain Strogenoffs second mate. Basiccly a guy who always wears horns and constantly headbutts his targets till they are dead. The problem is, years of ramming his head into the most hardest surfaces have left him with brain damage, making him slow minded and Dimwitted. (However, he can still charge into things pretty quickly) but he never bothers to turn while charging, and will not stop until he hits something.
The Red Rooster Pirates and Brown Bull pirates are rivals who wish nothing more than to take each other down and claim a golden phoenix statue. Their constant battles often cuase trouble for the towns that get destroyed in the crossfire... which is why they must be stopped...
so yeah... thats it...
Not ALL fanmade characters are Mary Sues/Gary Stus. You just know when they are. Most often it's a female character that is so wonderful and multi-talented that everyone can't help but lover her - and usually is somehow related to one of the main character, and will usually end up tragically dying, while the audience is quite happy about it.
Example:
The strawhats meet a girl who is the long-lost twin sister of Zoro who was sold as a slave at birth and had a very tragic past. She's even better at fighting than Zoro, ravishingly beautiful with unusual hair/eye color, and everyone falls in love with her, but she will probably become involved in a relationship with someone, which of course makes Nami jealous. She will save everyone in the end.
I was actually wondering if anyone ever made a One Piece Mary Sue litmus test. That would be fun.
Without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible. - Frank Zappa
Usopp-sencho's weird looks renders him somewhat invisible to the Mary Sue writers/Suethors' love arrow. Thank God.
Alas, they tend to exploit his cowardice and make him appear as one shitty guy who gets in the way, or a weakling that the Sue must save. A lesson needs to be taught.>=(
Another form of self-insertion.. is to be a Sue-ish original character. Like a Sue-Nami.
Usopp-sencho's weird looks renders him somewhat invisible to the Mary Sue writers/Suethors' love arrow. Thank God.
Not true! I've seen Usopp with a Mary Sue before! No one is safe from Mary Sues! Not to mention there's plenty of really bad Usopp pairing fics with actual crewmembers that are just as out of character as Mary Sues.
I haven't really read a whole lot of OP fanfics. I just go based on recommendations in most cases.
Another form of self-insertion.. is to be a Sue-ish original character. Like a Sue-Nami.
Yeah, they call that a canon-sue. It's easy to do that, because who does everyone know the best for reference? Themselves.
Without deviation from the norm, progress is not possible. - Frank Zappa
Not true! I've seen Usopp with a Mary Sue before! No one is safe from Mary Sues! Not to mention there's plenty of really bad Usopp pairing fics with actual crewmembers that are just as out of character as Mary Sues.
facepalms and cries WHY!?
Blah, ever since 4kids exposed One Piece to millions, the quality of the fanfics go down faster than the Merry on Reverse Mountain >.< Of course, it's not as terrifying as Naruto's fandom(yet), but the One Piece section in the Pit of Voles (fanfiction.net) now hosts a helluva number of badfics.
Eh, the shit was deep even before 4Kids. And why the hell is it called the "Pit of Voles" anyway? That makes no sense to me.
And the single Usopp-loving Mary Sue I know of is actually a Gary Stu – it's over on Y!Gallery.
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And why the hell is it called the "Pit of Voles" anyway? That makes no sense to me.
Yar, maybe it's just a bad name for a place of evil. Moronic, fanboyish/fangirlish evil -_-
Well I've got Mary, whom according to this test she's actually an anti-sue. Then again i really haven't put much thought into her thus so far except that she's dumb as a post, slightly crazy and falls in love with/fangirls over Kurobi.
As for the whole SoppxSue thing, i've actually had thoughts of pairing him up with one of my own characters, but that was more for fun and in my own head than putting stuff to paper.
I've thought about fan characters; but I never actually take my time to make them… However I've had myself in a couple of comics that I've appeared in and also some OP characters guest starred in...
But me in those comics is pretty much the opposite of a Mary Sue. I end up falling in love with the characters; but nothing good happens to me, and none of them like me. Usually these comics involve me getting hurt/scared/killed in some way or another while the characters that I fell in love with either ignore me or go "Good riddance! :rolleyes:"
... Great; I'm a freaking PARODY. XD
But other than that; no fan characters for me.
Someone should make an OC date for Mohmoo. Call her Dairy Sue.
XD
Someone should make an OC date for Mohmoo. Call her Dairy Sue.
This is LOL beyond all LOL.
As for the whole SoppxSue thing, i've actually had thoughts of pairing him up with one of my own characters, but that was more for fun and in my own head than putting stuff to paper.
I have a lot of fun in my head with UsoppxNami that is probably best never to be seen by anyone else. XD
Hm…pit of voles...a pit full of little annoying, gnawing rodents, seems appropriate. Yeah, there's always been badfics for OP on FF.net, there's just MORE now. I don't know what Y!Gallery is...
Someone should make an OC date for Mohmoo. Call her Dairy Sue.
Har har. XD
Hm…pit of voles...a pit full of little annoying, gnawing rodents, seems appropriate. Yeah, there's always been badfics for OP on FF.net, there's just MORE now. I don't know what Y!Gallery is...
A ha. OK, that makes sense. And Y!Gallery is the yaoi gallery that grew out of Sheezy after the "no more porn" meltdown. It has vore and shota and furries and I dislike it.
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A ha. OK, that makes sense. And Y!Gallery is the yaoi gallery that grew out of Sheezy after the "no more porn" meltdown. It has vore and shota and furries and I dislike it.
Ah, ic. Well, I have no interest in going there. I hope there isn't OP vore. XD
No one is safe from Mary Sues!
So true…I swear I found a Mr. 9/Mary Sue fic at the Vole Pit once. Sadly(?), it's gone now.
My friend and I have loads of OCs for this extremely crazy OP roleplay we're doing...we try not to make them Mary Sue/Marty Stus, but I dunno how well they've turned out, considering how many of them are Devil Fruit users. XD
Well I've got Mary, whom according to this test she's actually an anti-sue. Then again i really haven't put much thought into her thus so far except that she's dumb as a post, slightly crazy and falls in love with/fangirls over Kurobi.
Oh, that Mary? XD From the KuroobixMary pic I knew she was crazy, but "dumb as a post" is new XD
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So true…I swear I found a Mr. 9/Mary Sue fic at the Vole Pit once. Sadly(?), it's gone now.
My friend and I have loads of OCs for this extremely crazy OP roleplay we're doing...we try not to make them Mary Sue/Marty Stus, but I dunno how well they've turned out, considering how many of them are Devil Fruit users. XD
MR. 9xKITTEN FOREVER. Their love was so pure.
God, I'm still dead from that one.
I have some OP fanfics that I've never posted on any site. I have a lead character who's definitely not a mary sue/stu. Nothing works out for him, people tend to hate him and take advantage of him. Hell, even Chopper slaps him around.
