Isn't that a mary Sue/Gary Stu?
I made one up… he's a total loser XD
Nah, a Mary Sue/Stu is a fan character who:
Is super powerful and beats all the original characters and/or can make any of the original characters fall inlove with him/her
My characters, I try to keep them from getting Mary-Sue ish as possible…
Here are my characters... Be warned that some do not have names yet
First up, the Red Rooster Pirates:
Captain Cock: The captain of the Red Rooster Pirates. His dream is for people to stop laughing at his name and tremble when they hear the word "Cock" His Devil fruit power is the "Egg Egg Fruit" which allows him to lay eggs, either they hatch into chibi versions of himself that back him up, or turn to egg bombs which he throws.
????: Captain Cocks pet Rooster who has the power to exhale fire
????: Captain Cock's first mate who is always dressed as an egg. He rolls up into an egg and uses himself as a giant ball to crush people.
????: Captain Cock's second Mate, basiccly he uses two giant drum sticks (Drum sticks as in fried chicken thighs) as giant clubs to fight
Next up are the Brown Bull Pirates.
Captain Strogenoff: The Captain, like Captain Cock he wants people to fear his name rather than laugh at it. His devil fruit power is the Stampede Stampede fruit. He can turn his first into a bulls head with horns, or even make his own body into a stampede of powerful running bulls.
?????: Captain Strogenoff's pet Bull, when he runs his legs spin at a complete 360 degree angle, while his nose leaks steam. Basiccly charges into things and makes the noises of a train while doing so.
Betsy: Captain Strogenoffs first mate, He wears a strap on utter which shoots different kinds of Milk depending on which teet he squeezes and pulls. (One Teet has acid Milk, one had sticky milk that can make people stuck, etc)
????: Captain Strogenoffs second mate. Basiccly a guy who always wears horns and constantly headbutts his targets till they are dead. The problem is, years of ramming his head into the most hardest surfaces have left him with brain damage, making him slow minded and Dimwitted. (However, he can still charge into things pretty quickly) but he never bothers to turn while charging, and will not stop until he hits something.
The Red Rooster Pirates and Brown Bull pirates are rivals who wish nothing more than to take each other down and claim a golden phoenix statue. Their constant battles often cuase trouble for the towns that get destroyed in the crossfire... which is why they must be stopped...
so yeah... thats it...