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      This thread is about Criticizing One Piece.

      Since everyone on internet says "omg, Oda is a genius, he did this, and he was planning to do it like 600chapters ago (roughly 12years)" and I'm okay with that, this is good writing and I think everyone agrees. But still, the manga isn't perfect ( well, I used the word "perfect" but please don't fall into a philosopichal bullshit like "uhuh perfection doesn't exist" or "what is perfection? let's try to figure it out" ) even though it is very good, and this is why we'll talk about the flaws of this manga. Because we're not going to wait Oda finishing it before saying it was shit or whatever as we did with Naruto and Bleach. It's been 18years now, I think we have enough material to criticize.

      Try to be objective, even though you can say what you personally didn't like or whatever.

      Criticism isn't only about the flaws but also the good points, so you can say what is objectively ( or not objectively ) good and WHY.

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        I know this is necessary to defeat Kaido, but the crew is now more separated than during the timeskip… First, Nami, Chopper, Brook and Sanji were forced to sail to Zou, then, the whole crew met again (except Sanji) for a brief moment, and now, a part of the Strawhats is in Whole Cake and we know nothing about the others.

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          Criticism of literary works such as this is pretty much subjective. One can like something in One Piece and another can dislike it equally.

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            Feels like an irrelevant thread. The chapter threads are pretty much this and we do them every week.

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              99% sure there is already a thread about the exact same topic.

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                @Steakbrine:

                I know this is necessary to defeat Kaido, but the crew is now more separated than during the timeskip… First, Nami, Chopper, Brook and Sanji were forced to sail to Zou, then, the whole crew met again (except Sanji) for a brief moment, and now, a part of the Strawhats is in Whole Cake and we know nothing about the others.

                I don't wanna get into the splitting of the crew right now, because it seems that we're still in one arc "pirate alliance" or something. So, don't know how Oda is gonna unravel the situation. But it could be very great.

                @Kaido:

                Criticism of literary works such as this is pretty much subjective. One can like something in One Piece and another can dislike it equally.

                As I said before, I don't wanna turn it into something philosophical.
                But if your point is "even objectivity is still kind of subjective", uhhh yeah you're right but as I said, don't wanna turn it into philosophy.

                I have things to say, don't have time right now to write down a massive post but well, you'll see then if it is objective or wat or nowt.

                @King:

                Feels like an irrelevant thread. The chapter threads are pretty much this and we do them every week.

                But this is about the WHOLE manga. See ?
                There is a thread for Totland, Dressrossa…. what about the whole manga ? yeah there is the forum itself, but "Criticizing One Piece" is a very specific topic.

                @MasterKingJC:

                99% sure there is already a thread about the exact same topic.

                okay, show me which then. didn't find it.

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                  http://forums.arlongpark.net/showthread.php?t=27758

                  Here's the old thread. I guess things have been pretty good lately since no one's been posting there.

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                    indeed, things are very great since Dressrossa ended.

                    what if I call this thread is "Most Disappointing thing in OP v.2" ?
                    but well, I don't really mind. I'll just let an admin decide.

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                      Yeah Zou is being better than Dressrosa. It was too long, at least in the anime because I started manga in Zou's arc. I hope Wano's arc does not get too long if Luffy is going to defeat him definitely.

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                        Cracker's powers might be more disappointing than Doflamingo's regarding all the clone bullshit. At least the string stuff made sense thematically because it further portrayed Doffy as a master puppeteer. But biscuits that can walk and talk? What's that got to do with anything?

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                          Yeah Zou is being better than Dressrosa. It was too long, at least in the anime because I started manga in Zou's arc. I hope Wano's arc does not get too long if Luffy is going to defeat him definitely.

                          Then I suggest you read Dressrosa in the manga. In terms of pacing, the anime did a horrendous job with the entire arc.

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                            @John:

                            As I said before, I don't wanna turn it into something philosophical.
                            But if your point is "even objectivity is still kind of subjective", uhhh yeah you're right but as I said, don't wanna turn it into philosophy.

                            I mostly meant that any criticism will be very much subjective, so there's no real line you can draw other than maybe only allowing constructive criticism.

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                            Zou was a treat for us weekly readers, but I highly doubt that I'll remember it as well (or fondly) as Dressrosa. It was just a setup arc for Totland and Wano Country, while Dressrosa was an epic saga that told a very enjoyable story (which has grown a lot better to me ever since it ended)

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                              while Dressrosa was an epic saga that told a very enjoyable story (which has grown a lot better to me ever since it ended)

                              Even ignoring the pacing, Dressrosa gave us some horribly handled plot points and characters. The conclusion to Operation SOP with Usopp's crazy face, the Bird Cage, Rebecca's entire character arc, Trebol's lack of doing anything, Burgess getting rekt, and annoying Bellamy were all huge dips in Oda's writing.

                              Gear 4, Rosinante, and Issho carry the arc, but there's a lot of crap weighing them down. Zou's direct storytelling was a godsend in comparison.

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                                Even ignoring the pacing,

                                See I wasn't initially a fan of the pacing either but thinking back I can't really say what'd I want to get rid of

                                Dressrosa gave us some horribly handled plot points and characters. The conclusion to Operation SOP with Usopp's crazy face,

                                I don't see what's to hate about it, given how it pulls off the unexpected twists that Oda is known for

                                the Bird Cage,

                                Didn't have a problem with that

                                Rebecca's entire character arc,

                                I must be in a very small minority who thought it was good. See my initial post in the One Piece Confessions Thread, if you'd like

                                Trebol's lack of doing anything,

                                Trebol's purpose was to shed light on Doflamingo's past

                                Burgess getting rekt

                                Against the second in command of the Revolutionaries who just took on an admiral before. He struck fear into just about everyone else.

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                                  @FrankyFan:

                                  Even ignoring the pacing, Dressrosa gave us some horribly handled plot points and characters. The conclusion to Operation SOP with Usopp's crazy face, the Bird Cage, Rebecca's entire character arc, Trebol's lack of doing anything, Burgess getting rekt, and annoying Bellamy were all huge dips in Oda's writing.

                                  Gear 4, Rosinante, and Issho carry the arc, but there's a lot of crap weighing them down. Zou's direct storytelling was a godsend in comparison.

                                  I see this thrown around a lot but there isn't much discussion on it beyond "it was dragged out". The level of stuff/ideas that Dressrosa had, it's understandable why the arc ended up being as long as it is. Having re-read the entire arc after it was finished, and i found the flow of the arc pretty good.

                                  And yes one could argue that it's Oda's fault for throwing too many ideas in the arc, and i would kinda agree with that but Oda handled it really well in the second half where he stopped and allowed for a much needed breathing room. A lot of people will say that the arc dragged out in the second half and i would say that Oda needed to stop and properly develop stuff. The first half of the arc was especially guilty of constantly throwing stuff at the audience without taking it's time. Some of the best moments from that arc happened in the second half.

                                  And yes Rebecca was a garbage character but to counter that Kyros was an awesome character. To top it off we had some of the most memorable side-characters in the entire series. To top it off we had finally a villain who was explored heavily in the arc instead of just being there for the sake of getting punched.

                                  Not gonna compare Zou because that arc was ultimately a set up arc compare to the full blown saga of Law that Dressrosa was.

                                  People are still sore about Dressrosa because of their weekly fatigue but i think that just like Skypeia arc, it will be looked back upon fondly, and will be consider a classic One Piece arc despite its flaws.

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                                    See I wasn't initially a fan of the pacing either but thinking back I can't really say what'd I want to get rid of

                                    How about Bellamy? I'm still not sure what the point of his reappearance was. He didn't even get a chapter of closure like Rebecca and Kyros, he just sort of left at the end.

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                                    An actual bet and conversation on the Chapter 905 thread, literally an hour before he got banned again.

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                                      Yeah Zou is being better than Dressrosa. It was too long, at least in the anime because I started manga in Zou's arc. I hope Wano's arc does not get too long if Luffy is going to defeat him definitely.

                                      Considering all the build-up and how many characters will be involved, it's very safe to say that Wano will be a huge arc. Personally I expect it to surpass 100 chapters.

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                                        The scene with Usopp is lame because it takes away all the satisfaction after weeks of buildup. Imagine if Doflamingo lost that way to Luffy. Sugar was one of the biggest threats that arc behind Doffy.

                                        Bird Cage makes Doflamingo way stronger than he's written to be. If an Admiral can't beat it, what's stopping Doflamingo from caging an Emperor in one by themself? Oda had a very hard time on limiting Devil Fruits.

                                        Trebol's defeat is more embarrassing than any other family member's. His Devil Fruit reveal is also really confusing and seems to have been thought up in the last minute (I don't buy the tucked legs theory). Robin was like ten feet away waiting for a fight.

                                        Compare Burgess' to performance to what we've seen of Jack and Cracker. He should be up there with Sabo.

                                        @HeartOfDarkness:

                                        I see this thrown around a lot but there isn't much discussion on it beyond "it was dragged out".

                                        I know this comes up often, but there's a lot of running from Point A to Point B that doesn't seem to really do anything. Like it's only there because Oda was still figuring out how he'd get certain characters in the same room together.

                                        Luffy, Zoro, Kinemon, and Viola breaking into the palace is almost pointless since Doflamingo frees Law and Dold anyway after the toys return to being human. Just have Kyros go there by himself and "behead" Doffy so we don't have to waste so much time seeing Luffy run into Pica, Lao G, and Gladius.

                                        The Star Game is given a lot of detail but is quickly forgotten soon after. Most of the gladiators and citizens just ignore it right away. Only the Funk Brothers bought into it and that's not really an important or significant scene. Enel's Survival Game is much more satisfying to read as we're given numerous countdowns to the last remaining five.

                                        My least favorite chapters in that arc have to be 779-782 where Law possibly being dead is the cliffhanger for three out of those four chapters. Just remove him from the fight or stop faking us out. There's a lot of repetition in these chapters. Like Law says "Corazon couldn't pull the trigger that day but I can" twice in that one fight.

                                        I'm all for Oda having fun with his world and his characters. The Colosseum could have been even longer to introduce us more to the D Block contestants. But there really needed to be some tighter editing in the last half of the arc. I thought Luffy vs. Doflamingo was about to start in the 740s when he enters the King's throne room. It's not until another 50 chapters later, over a year, that Doffy is defeated.

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                                          The scene with Usopp is lame because it takes away all the satisfaction after weeks of buildup. Imagine if Doflamingo lost that way to Luffy. Sugar was one of the biggest threats that arc behind Doffy.

                                          The difference is that Sugar was never a physical opponent, and Usopp is by nature a comedic character. To me, it was satisfying because it completely subverted all that buildup. Would you really have been all that interested if the Tontatta or Usopp had just fed her the Tatababasco?

                                          Bird Cage makes Doflamingo way stronger than he's written to be. If an Admiral can't beat it, what's stopping Doflamingo from caging an Emperor in one by themself? Oda had a very hard time on limiting Devil Fruits.

                                          It's a completely organic extension of his DF abilities, and it's called an ultimate technique for a reason. Plus, the Birdcage will come down if Doffy is taken down, which a Yonko should easily be able to do, as well as an admiral, to a lesser extent. Fuji just didn't take Doflamingo down because of his position and obligations.

                                          Trebol's defeat is more embarrassing than any other family member's. His Devil Fruit reveal is also really confusing and seems to have been thought up in the last minute (I don't buy the tucked legs theory). Robin was like ten feet away waiting for a fight.

                                          Trebol's DF is really simple: he covered his body in mucus in order to make his opponents confuse him for a Logia. As I said before, his role in the second part was not as a combatant but as a device to develop Doffy's past more. You really would have wanted Robin to grab that mucus-covered body?

                                          Compare Burgess' to performance to what we've seen of Jack and Cracker. He should be up there with Sabo.

                                          Sabo didn't fight Jack or Cracker.

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                                            Oda introducing Awakening and then focusing on a Riku speech.Instead of showing an incredible battle between Luffy's G4 and Doflamingo's ultimate power we got another shitty speech.Also those horrible chapters with the pushing of Birdcage.I don't remember Oda ever producing such a bad streak of chapters.

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                                              @John:

                                              Because we're not going to wait Oda finishing it before saying it was shit or whatever as we did with Naruto and Bleach.

                                              Who the heck waited to call those two shit lol.
                                              People were calling them shit LONG LONG LONG before they ended.

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                                              Yeah Zou is being better than Dressrosa. It was too long, at least in the anime because I started manga in Zou's arc. I hope Wano's arc does not get too long if Luffy is going to defeat him definitely.

                                              If you haven't actually read the manga you really shouldn't be posting opinions on anything in this section of the forum.
                                              You have seen Dressrosa, you have not read Dressrosa. And this is the manga sub-forum.

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                                              @FrankyFan:

                                              The conclusion to Operation SOP with Usopp's crazy face

                                              What was wrong with that?

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                                              The scene with Usopp is lame because it takes away all the satisfaction after weeks of buildup. Imagine if Doflamingo lost that way to Luffy. Sugar was one of the biggest threats that arc behind Doffy.

                                              That isn't the point where Sugar is taken out for good. That point is when she was about to turn both Luffy and Law into toys, and Usopp sniped her out from like a mile away. Which was very cool, probably Usopp's best action sequence in the series.

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                                                Yeah Zou is being better than Dressrosa. It was too long, at least in the anime because I started manga in Zou's arc. I hope Wano's arc does not get too long if Luffy is going to defeat him definitely.

                                                There's your problem. It was already an overlng arc, but the anime inflates that problem horrendously. The anime is reeeeeeeally slow constantly.

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                                                The conclusion to Operation SOP with Usopp's crazy face,

                                                That wasn't the conclusion though. That was the mid break point. Usopp haki sniping Sugar from a mile away through a window was.

                                                the Bird Cage,

                                                What was wrong with it? It was a legitimate threat along the same lines as Crocodile's bomb or Kuma's giant explosion or Enel's death ball of lightning that united the people together against one major death threat.

                                                Rebecca's entire character arc, Trebol's lack of doing anything,

                                                Rebecca's arc was fine. It was also Kyros' arc, and the King's. If you wanted Rebecca to be a badass warrior amazon I can see the dissapointment, but the story of a girl that just wanted to live with her father figure after a tragic past worked fine.

                                                Burgess getting rekt,

                                                That was more Sabo hype than anything. Burgess completely destroyed everyone else, to the point there was an entire 1/4 of arena gladiators we never even saw.

                                                and annoying Bellamy were all huge dips in Oda's writing.

                                                Bellamy's undeserved loyalty and turning over a new leaf were both great for a guy that we thought was dead 10 years ago.

                                                Gear 4, Rosinante, and Issho carry the arc, but there's a lot of crap weighing them down.

                                                The arc was definitely bloated. But all the individual elements weren't bad… there were mostly just too many of them all at once slowing everything down. Had the dwarves and arena been a seperate island arc entirely the whole thing might have come out better for it.

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                                                  What was wrong with that?

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                                                  That wasn't the conclusion though. That was the mid break point. Usopp haki sniping Sugar from a mile away through a window was.

                                                  @Kaido:

                                                  The difference is that Sugar was never a physical opponent, and Usopp is by nature a comedic character. To me, it was satisfying because it completely subverted all that buildup. Would you really have been all that interested if the Tontatta or Usopp had just fed her the Tatababasco?

                                                  I agree that that Sugar's second defeat is one of Usopp's best moments in the series, I just don't understand why it needed to follow arguably his worst. It's just incredibly silly in a scene that was building a more serious tone. The Chu, Mr. 4, Perona fights didn't need it, I would have rather just had Usopp do some clever sniping and creative battle tactics against Sugar and Trebol from the beginning. Him figuring out Trebol's Devil Fruit not really being a Logia would have felt more like a classic Usopp fight.

                                                  What was wrong with it? It was a legitimate threat along the same lines as Crocodile's bomb or Kuma's giant explosion or Enel's death ball of lightning that united the people together against one major death threat.

                                                  It's a completely organic extension of his DF abilities, and it's called an ultimate technique for a reason. Plus, the Birdcage will come down if Doffy is taken down, which a Yonko should easily be able to do, as well as an admiral, to a lesser extent. Fuji just didn't take Doflamingo down because of his position and obligations.

                                                  What bothers me about the Bird Cage is that it can't be stopped at all. Issho, Zoro, the whole Grand Fleet, the Samurais, and dwarves could only hold it off for a few minutes. Kuma's paw explosion has been tanked by both Zoro and Little Oars Jr. I'd assume haki could stop Crocodile's bomb or Enel's lightning ball. But the Bird Cage had multiple strong characters against it that couldn't do anything.

                                                  I mean when Issho tried to stop the cage from closing, he couldn't. If Doflamingo could trap someone in there without trapping someone else, what could they possibly do? Because his strings are portrayed to be indestructible.

                                                  Trebol's DF is really simple: he covered his body in mucus in order to make his opponents confuse him for a Logia. As I said before, his role in the second part was not as a combatant but as a device to develop Doffy's past more. You really would have wanted Robin to grab that mucus-covered body?

                                                  The problem is Usopp cut his head clean off earlier. His head drooped to the floor to. It's too dramatic of a change for him to just be a Paramecia. At this point, Robin fighting anything is considered a win in my book.

                                                  Rebecca's arc was fine. It was also Kyros' arc, and the King's. If you wanted Rebecca to be a badass warrior amazon I can see the dissapointment, but the story of a girl that just wanted to live with her father figure after a tragic past worked fine.

                                                  Yeah, I think Oda did fine on Rebecca finally being able to share a home with her father was done well, but there's several instances in the arc - where she cries to Luffy that she wants to be the one to save Kyros for once or when she goes to fight Doflamingo - it tells me she wants to be an active, strong character. But the narrative seemed to constantly be going back and forth on that. In one chapter, Kyros tells her to drop her sword and live a life of pacifism. A few chapters later, she picks it back up to fight the boss of the arc. And she's never rewarded for these acts of bravery against Diamante or Doflamingo. She's always a burden and always needed saving.

                                                  That was more Sabo hype than anything. Burgess completely destroyed everyone else, to the point there was an entire 1/4 of arena gladiators we never even saw.

                                                  Bartolomeo also made it out of his block completely unharmed. I just wish Oda had given Burgess someone like Elizabello or Koala to clobber so that we could have a general idea of his strength before he got pushed around by Sabo.

                                                  Bellamy's undeserved loyalty and turning over a new leaf were both great for a guy that we thought was dead 10 years ago.

                                                  Bellamy's return was cool. But Oda spent such little focus on him that I'm not sure it was really worth it. Bellamy comes and goes every couple of dozen chapters. I think in this 100 chapter arc, there's like two full chapters actually spent fully on his character. All of the other scenes are sidelined into a page or two. Even Bellamy's farewell is thrown into a flashback panel after the arc. I just don't think Oda cared all too much with everything else going on.

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                                                    Oda introducing Awakening and then focusing on a Riku speech.Instead of showing an incredible battle between Luffy's G4 and Doflamingo's ultimate power we got another shitty speech.Also those horrible chapters with the pushing of Birdcage.I don't remember Oda ever producing such a bad streak of chapters.

                                                    Come on… those scene are not so terrible. One Piece is, and has always been, also about the drama and struggling of the minor character involved. Otherwise it would be a common flat battle shonen. If more readers tried to empatize with those characters and to see them as human beings instead of empty shonen warriors with no personality, there would be way less runts about everything in OP in general.
                                                    Riku is a character who has been through very tragic events and years of unfair shame, and yet at the end he still asked selflessly everyone to not give up. That was a very powerful scene if you ask me.

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                                                      I dont think it was ever hypothesized doflamingo could make a cage that he wasnt inside, in fact didnt the center only move as doflamingo himself moved. Since he cant trap people stronger than him, basically if they cant defeat him then it doesnt really matter either way,

                                                      It's not like doflamingo could have showed up to marineford with a battleship full of every fruit in the world and birdcaged the place to death and snagged like everyones fruits.

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                                                      So who think Usopp is inside that duffelbag?

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                                                        It's just incredibly silly in a scene that was building a more serious tone.

                                                        This is One Piece.

                                                        Mr. 4, Perona fights didn't need it,

                                                        What? Both those fights were filled with goofy stuff, and the Perona one ended with a prank involving cockroaches mixed in with a cartoon hammer.
                                                        That same cartoon hammer which first appeared in the Mr. 4/Ms. Merry Christmas fight (why didn't you mention her??)
                                                        Sounds like someone has nostalgia blinders on that don't actually remember older stuff very well.

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                                                          Even the Luffy vs Usopp had goofy shit in it, for Chrissakes

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                                                            I miss the good old days of super serious badass Usopp fights, like the one featuring a gun that turned into a Dachshund that sneezes baseballs that explode.

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                                                              oh common, Zou is just the best arc of the manga.
                                                              nobody was expecting this twist http://i8.mangareader.net/one-piece/816/one-piece-7045219.jpg
                                                              best kneeling of the manga.

                                                              Also, Dressrossa is the worst arc imo. It's filled with tons of shitty fights.
                                                              the coliseum guys vs the family was boring.
                                                              the executives were lame. every single one of them have been one-shoted….. and so are most of the badguys in this arc.

                                                              @FrankyFan:

                                                              Compare Burgess' to performance to what we've seen of Jack and Cracker. He should be up there with Sabo.

                                                              We don't know if he's one of the strongest in BB's crew or not you know… even though Shiliew is obviously one of the strongest, we have no idea about the others.
                                                              But either way, even if he was. Sabo kicking his ass isn't absurd since there are lots of very very strong people in One Piece.
                                                              For instance, Luffy was no match to Rayleigh, even with his Kong Gun.

                                                              ! @FrankyFan:
                                                              ! > I know this comes up often, but there's a lot of running from Point A to Point B that doesn't seem to really do anything. Like it's only there because Oda was still figuring out how he'd get certain characters in the same room together.
                                                              ! Iagree.
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                                                              ! > Luffy, Zoro, Kinemon, and Viola breaking into the palace is almost pointless since Doflamingo frees Law and Dold anyway after the toys return to being human. Just have Kyros go there by himself and "behead" Doffy so we don't have to waste so much time seeing Luffy run into Pica, Lao G, and Gladius.
                                                              ! Iagree.
                                                              ! @FrankyFan:
                                                              ! > The Star Game is given a lot of detail but is quickly forgotten soon after. Most of the gladiators and citizens just ignore it right away. Only the Funk Brothers bought into it and that's not really an important or significant scene. Enel's Survival Game is much more satisfying to read as we're given numerous countdowns to the last remaining five.
                                                              ! Iagree.

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                                                              I thought Luffy vs. Doflamingo was about to start in the 740s when he enters the King's throne room. It's not until another 50 chapters later, over a year, that Doffy is defeated.

                                                              This is one of the major flaws of this manga. Luffy running into the "boss arc", being ejected a few times and comes back finally because the author didn't finish setting up the drama. like "oh shit, there was suppose to be like 6flashbacks before he beats him. also forgot about the other fights, shit !! "

                                                              Alabasta: Luffy loses 2 times before winning.
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                                                              Dressrossa: BELLAMY !!!!!!!! for fuck's sake. wat da fuck was that ?
                                                              also, http://www.mangareader.net/one-piece/745/10

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                                                                Come on… those scene are not so terrible. One Piece is, and has always been, also about the drama and struggling of the minor character involved. Otherwise it would be a common flat battle shonen. If more readers tried to empatize with those characters and to see them as human beings instead of empty shonen warriors with no personality, there would be way less runts about everything in OP in general.
                                                                Riku is a character who has been through very tragic events and years of unfair shame, and yet at the end he still asked selflessly everyone to not give up. That was a very powerful scene if you ask me.

                                                                Powerful scene?I don't have problem with the dialogue but it gets in the way of Luffy's fight with the antagonist which should be above anything else.Not only that instead of Oda focusing on the battle later on,we get Luffy being helpless and Doflamingo playing with a bunch of fodders alongside freaking Rebecca and Viola.Sorry but Oda handled Luffy's fight with Doflamingo really bad.Well Oda just doesn't want to draw prolonged fights anymore like the stuff he did with Luffy vs Lucci etc.Maybe it's taking a lot of effort now for him and he instead tries to focus on stuff like those dialogues and people running.That's sad really.

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                                                                    Powerful scene?I don't have problem with the dialogue but it gets in the way of Luffy's fight with the antagonist which should be above anything else.Not only that instead of Oda focusing on the battle later on,we get Luffy being helpless and Doflamingo playing with a bunch of fodders alongside freaking Rebecca and Viola.Sorry but Oda handled Luffy's fight with Doflamingo really bad.Well Oda just doesn't want to draw prolonged fights anymore like the stuff he did with Luffy vs Lucci etc.Maybe it's taking a lot of effort now for him and he instead tries to focus on stuff like those dialogues and people running.That's sad really.

                                                                    Yea how dare Oda set up an emotional moments behind the fights instead of a generic kicking and punching just for the sake of it.

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                                                                      Alabasta: Luffy loses 2 times before winning.
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                                                                      Dressrossa: BELLAMY !!!!!!!! for fuck's sake. wat da fuck was that ?
                                                                      also, http://www.mangareader.net/one-piece/745/10

                                                                      It's called dramatic build up, and adding emotional context to the scene. So you can really know what it means when Luffy is about to take out the baddy. Would the Arlong fight have meant half as much without Nami's flashback? Heck, the Chopper flashback was a volume long and took place in the literal middle of a punch and it was one of the most satisfying dramatic crunches ever. ANd the skypeia flashback is one of the absolute strongest stories Oda's ever done, and it adds 400 years of weight and payoff to Luffy striking that bell!

                                                                      You can't just toss in the flashbacks at the start of the arc before you know the characters or the situation, and you can't do it after the fight is over either, it's too late then. But after you've seen them surviving whatever their problem was, and struggling to win but just not being able to do it? For them to have a vendetta, or a dream, but not quite know what's really pushing them? To see them having had a weird bizarre quirk the entire arc, such as the Fishman Island princes dancing like idiots… and then have the symbolism and meaning of that explained later, thus adding depth and weight to the entire arc you just saw? Sure it's sometimes a little frustrating to interrupt during a climax, but Oda consistently adds so much weight and payoff to it that it just about always works.

                                                                      (About the only time I'd say he really actually botched it and backpeddaled to add something in was on Punk Hazard to show the kids interacting with Chopper before swallowing poison... and that was just a single chapter.)
                                                                      It's only a problem if you're here purely for the fights, and that's not what One Piece is about.

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                                                                        What bothers me about the Bird Cage is that it can't be stopped at all. Issho, Zoro, the whole Grand Fleet, the Samurais, and dwarves could only hold it off for a few minutes. Kuma's paw explosion has been tanked by both Zoro and Little Oars Jr. I'd assume haki could stop Crocodile's bomb or Enel's lightning ball. But the Bird Cage had multiple strong characters against it that couldn't do anything.

                                                                        I mean when Issho tried to stop the cage from closing, he couldn't. If Doflamingo could trap someone in there without trapping someone else, what could they possibly do? Because his strings are portrayed to be indestructible.

                                                                        Uh, stop Doflamingo himself? I literally just said that. You think a strong person is gonna be dumb enough to try attacking the Birdcage until they die?

                                                                        The problem is Usopp cut his head clean off earlier. His head drooped to the floor to. It's too dramatic of a change for him to just be a Paramecia.

                                                                        That never happened. I do agree that Usopp cleaving Trebol was a bit too big of a retcon, but the explanations behind it were logical

                                                                        Yeah, I think Oda did fine on Rebecca finally being able to share a home with her father was done well, but there's several instances in the arc - where she cries to Luffy that she wants to be the one to save Kyros for once or when she goes to fight Doflamingo - it tells me she wants to be an active, strong character. But the narrative seemed to constantly be going back and forth on that. In one chapter, Kyros tells her to drop her sword and live a life of pacifism. A few chapters later, she picks it back up to fight the boss of the arc. And she's never rewarded for these acts of bravery against Diamante or Doflamingo. She's always a burden and always needed saving.

                                                                        The thing about Rebecca is that even though she is brave and will fight if she must, she never liked fighting, which was clearly demonstrated when Kyros started training her as a child.

                                                                        Bartolomeo also made it out of his block completely unharmed. I just wish Oda had given Burgess someone like Elizabello or Koala to clobber so that we could have a general idea of his strength before he got pushed around by Sabo.

                                                                        He clobbered hundreds of gladiators in seconds, and his presence alone drove fear into Koala and Gatz. And why would Oda have a major character like Bartolomeo to get clobbered? Barty could easily barrier block Burgess' attacks anyways.

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                                                                        oh common, Zou is just the best arc of the manga.
                                                                        nobody was expecting this twist http://i8.mangareader.net/one-piece/816/one-piece-7045219.jpg
                                                                        best kneeling of the manga.

                                                                        Yes, because a single plot twist was strong enough to push a transition arc past the likes of Alabasta and Enies Lobby. Because it's not like Dressrosa had any plot twists. Definitely not any in December 2013 and April 2015.

                                                                        Also, Dressrossa is the worst arc imo. It's filled with tons of shitty fights.
                                                                        the coliseum guys vs the family was boring.
                                                                        the executives were lame. every single one of them have been one-shoted….. and so are most of the badguys in this arc.

                                                                        Do you know what one-shotted means? The only character that would apply to off the top of my head is Sugar, as all of the other battles involved both parties exchanging blows before the heroes unleashed a final attack.

                                                                        For instance, Luffy was no match to Rayleigh, even with his Kong Gun.

                                                                        Uh…what? When did Luffy fight Rayleigh?

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                                                                          It's just incredibly silly in a scene that was building a more serious tone.

                                                                          As Monkey King already stated, this is One Piece. What series have you been reading the entire time? You set your own self up for disappointment. That seems to be where a lot of the criticisms in this thread stem from. Rebecca is a perfect example of this. People were obsessed with having this super badass female character and wanted Rebecca to fill that role for some reason so they decided to hate anything dealing with her even though it was established from the very start that she was never like that and was never supposed to be. @Joy:

                                                                          I don't have problem with the dialogue but it gets in the way of Luffy's fight with the antagonist which should be above anything else.

                                                                          Why should it be above anything else? One Piece has never been about fighting. That was nothing but a piece of the puzzle as was the dialogue.

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                                                                            The drama in Dressrosa may not have been the strongest Oda's ever done, and the climax with Doflamingo may not have been the best arc villain fight either. The whole ending sequence though, and general closure to the arc, i think is definitely one of my favorites in the whole series.
                                                                            From the narrator speech bubble that says: "a country in ruins is not necessarily a sad one", to all the big reveals after it, and seeing old timers like Sengoku and Tsuru chilling with Fujitora bowing with the marines and all, it definitely brought smiles upon some of which should be considered "villains".

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                                                                              As Monkey King already stated, this is One Piece. What series have you been reading the entire time? You set your own self up for disappointment. That seems to be where a lot of the criticisms in this thread stem from. Rebecca is a perfect example of this. People were obsessed with having this super badass female character and wanted Rebecca to fill that role for some reason so they decided to hate anything dealing with her even though it was established from the very start that she was never like that and was never supposed to be. Why should it be above anything else? One Piece has never been about fighting. That was nothing but a piece of the puzzle as was the dialogue.

                                                                              Yea seeing people on a weekly basis constantly hate on Rebecca for not being a badass sword-warrior, even though the story clearly established that it was never the point of her character, was extremely face-palm-worthy. It was the pure definition of people refusing to acknowledge the actual point, and bitching about her not being what they wanted her to be.

                                                                              I mean i hate her character because was her simply being too bland, and a typical Oda-female but i never once hated her for not being a badass warrior.

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                                                                                Powerful scene?I don't have problem with the dialogue but it gets in the way of Luffy's fight with the antagonist which should be above anything else.Not only that instead of Oda focusing on the battle later on,we get Luffy being helpless and Doflamingo playing with a bunch of fodders alongside freaking Rebecca and Viola.Sorry but Oda handled Luffy's fight with Doflamingo really bad.Well Oda just doesn't want to draw prolonged fights anymore like the stuff he did with Luffy vs Lucci etc.**Maybe it's taking a lot of effort now for him and he instead tries to focus on stuff like those dialogues and people running.**That's sad really.

                                                                                What? Do you realize Dressrosa lasted 100 chapters? You really think he would care how much effort it takes for him if he wanted to draw a specific thing? And, though i know nothing of drawing, i fail to see how battle scenes would be harder to draw than large landscapes with several buildings and people.
                                                                                Maybe, just maybe, Oda actually liked this narrative pattern better?

                                                                                @John:

                                                                                This is one of the major flaws of this manga. Luffy running into the "boss arc", being ejected a few times and comes back finally because the author didn't finish setting up the drama. like "oh shit, there was suppose to be like 6flashbacks before he beats him. also forgot about the other fights, shit !! "

                                                                                Alabasta: Luffy loses 2 times before winning.
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                                                                                Dressrossa: BELLAMY !!!!!!!! for fuck's sake. wat da fuck was that ?
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                                                                                Ehhm… OP has always been about the main character being defeated even multiple times before succeeding, it is meant to show how Luffy never gives up after a defeat and also to give the main antagonist his time to shine in the manga, i fail to see how that would be a flaw.
                                                                                Also, even if you cannot believe it, there are people who actually liked Bellamy's involvement in the story and his character development.

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                                                                                  That wasn't the conclusion though. That was the mid break point. Usopp haki sniping Sugar from a mile away through a window was.

                                                                                  It was very much the conclusion to the SOP operation. The whole point was to revert everyone back to humans- especially Kyros - whereupon they would rise up against Doflamingo. Just because the "tragic ranks" subplot got dropped hard, doesn't mean Usopp resolved the SOP operation plotpoint right then and there through sheer dumb luck.

                                                                                  The second sniping of Sugar was cool, but a completely superfluous moment in the grand scheme of things, as she had already been KO'd once, and all the intended consequences of that had taken place. It feels like Sugar was artificially wheeled out again to give Usopp a redemtive moment, but the moment ultimately isn't as cool as it'd have been if it was the only Usopp v Sugar moment because its recycling a villain, and because the tension with the citizens on the Usopp side is completely fake.

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                                                                                  I miss the good old days of super serious badass Usopp fights, like the one featuring a gun that turned into a Dachshund that sneezes baseballs that explode.

                                                                                  Usopp resolved that fight through brains, trickery, and utilization of his skillset though, just like Vs Chu and Perona. Which is the actual point regarding his first fight with Sugar, not that it concluded in a silly way or involved silly elements, but that Usopp won it with sheer dumb luck; not even him capitalizing on luck, just the luck of Sugar basically KO'ing herself. Despite his fight being against a Flammable Man and a tiny, fast girl who needs to swallow a tabasco ball, Usopp wins through no conscious effort of his own - And you know as well as I do that this was not presented as a "clever trope suberversion!".

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                                                                                  That was more Sabo hype than anything. Burgess completely destroyed everyone else, to the point there was an entire 1/4 of arena gladiators we never even saw.

                                                                                  When the only credentials Burgess has in the arc is the offscreen takedown of characters we don't see/know in his initial appearance, and he spends the rest of the time getting tossed around by Sabo, thats pretty bad. He didn't "destroy" anyone else.

                                                                                  Its possible to write someone to failing their objectives, and still looking threatening or competent, but Oda never attempted that with Burgess. Ever since his introduction, Burgess never got a personal “win”, a high-moment to give him credibility, because everything he did was always offset by Sabo trumping him, thus making it “wins” for Sabo.
                                                                                  Elaborating on the latter: When I talk of Burgess getting “wins”, or moments of credibility, I’m not talking about reader-inferred, pseudo-feats of “Burgess survived a hit from X so he must be Y durable, that’s impressive”. I’m talking Burgess getting wins as framed deliberately, visually in the manga. Oda is a seasoned artist, and he knows how to draw a manga to get across an intended effect – which here was all about Sabo looking cool, and NOT Burgess looking credible, or even threatening. When Burgess is set ablaze and flying in a two page spread, while he’s screaming his head off in pain, Odas aim is not to make us think “wow! Good on you Burgess for surviving that!”, we’re supposed to think “Wow, Sabo is so cool!”. Even when they allegedly “tied” in their clash in the coliseum, the manga still give the “win” to Sabo. Burgess is the one whos’ armor breaks, who has the annoyed expression during and after the hit, and Sabo is the one whose expression is unchanged and gets the cool quip.

                                                                                  In the end Burgess is left battered, panting and beaten on the ground, while Sabo walks off in nonchalant, unhurt dominance. None of these moments are designed to make Burgess look credible to the readers. The biggest “win” you can attribute to Burgess this whole arc is his introductory offscreen defeat of fighters never seen before or since. And even that only gives him credibility as far as us readers having to do he legwork of “well, if we assume that the fighters in his block were of X power level and he defeated them in Y time, and with Z ferocity causing the possibly fearsome fighters to be completely incapacitated for the rest of the arc, he does seem to be quite strong”.

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                                                                                    The way coa was handeled in marineford bothered me alot one of them is the slash vista and marco did to akainu and he just said ouch how bother some and same with whitebeard fighting kizaru and aokiji

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                                                                                      The thing about Rebecca is that even though she is brave and will fight if she must, she never liked fighting, which was clearly demonstrated when Kyros started training her as a child.

                                                                                      The problem with that is that most of the "citizen" characters don't like fighting, its not unique to Rebecca. Vivi didn't enjoy having to save Alabasta, but she gave her all anyway, she was dead set on contributing. Rebecca also repeatedly tries to contribute, only for her to wind up screaming for Kyros/Luffy to resolve her problems. She is being used as a prop to enforce how awesome Kyros is more than anything else, and ultimately I find the "stand back, Daddys here now" conclusion to be annoyingly infantalizing towards her. She even gets in trouble because she disobeys Kyros wanting her to stay put, and heads out to fight Doflamingo. If only she'd done what Daddy said!

                                                                                      Its particularly annoying to me once you break down their history: A dad is erased from his wife and childs memories through a magic spell that removes his physical strength. The wife/childs mother is killed. For 10 years, the child is trained by his Dad, in order to not being reliant on Dads protection. Eventually the child becomes an accomplished 16-year old warrior, who wants to take down the Evil King. During the course of the story the child comes face to face with the mothers murderer, and reunites with a restored Daddy… whereupon Dad tells the 16 year old accomplished warrior to stay back, not fight anymore, and let Dad resolve everything by himself. Theres not any sort of familial team effort involved.

                                                                                      I just don't see that ultimate resolution happening if Kyros had a son, is all I'm saying.

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                                                                                        I know this is necessary to defeat Kaido, but the crew is now more separated than during the timeskip… First, Nami, Chopper, Brook and Sanji were forced to sail to Zou, then, the whole crew met again (except Sanji) for a brief moment, and now, a part of the Strawhats is in Whole Cake and we know nothing about the others.

                                                                                        True but the alternative is even worse, namely having additional inflated arcs. The New World arcs are really interconnected just through the nature of NW´s structure and many characters are necessarily involved, so instead of juggling many thing at the same time, i think it´s better to build up everything until the entire crew takes down their first Yonkou.

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                                                                                        Feels like an irrelevant thread. The chapter threads are pretty much this and we do them every week.

                                                                                        Chapter threads usually only criticize what happens in the respective chapters though. Rather than that, the problem is that such a thread already exists.

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                                                                                        I see this thrown around a lot but there isn't much discussion on it beyond "it was dragged out". The level of stuff/ideas that Dressrosa had, it's understandable why the arc ended up being as long as it is. Having re-read the entire arc after it was finished, and i found the flow of the arc pretty good.

                                                                                        And yes one could argue that it's Oda's fault for throwing too many ideas in the arc, and i would kinda agree with that but Oda handled it really well in the second half where he stopped and allowed for a much needed breathing room. A lot of people will say that the arc dragged out in the second half and i would say that Oda needed to stop and properly develop stuff. The first half of the arc was especially guilty of constantly throwing stuff at the audience without taking it's time. Some of the best moments from that arc happened in the second half.

                                                                                        And yes Rebecca was a garbage character but to counter that Kyros was an awesome character. To top it off we had some of the most memorable side-characters in the entire series. To top it off we had finally a villain who was explored heavily in the arc instead of just being there for the sake of getting punched.

                                                                                        Not gonna compare Zou because that arc was ultimately a set up arc compare to the full blown saga of Law that Dressrosa was.

                                                                                        People are still sore about Dressrosa because of their weekly fatigue but i think that just like Skypeia arc, it will be looked back upon fondly, and will be consider a classic One Piece arc despite its flaws.

                                                                                        Just like Robby already mentioned, the real problem is really having everything in one arc. Despite some minor issues, the ideas Oda presented are not in any way bad but having everythign in one arc was simply too much. You have the Law-DD relationship, Dressrosa´s past, Alabasta 2.0 with Fujitora, colosseum, Sabo´s reintroduction, Burgess, the dwarves, Luffy´s fleet…
                                                                                        Basically enough stuff to fill 2-3 50-chapter long arcs. I do not think it was necessary to put Sabo, the colosseum, the Mera Mera reintroduction and Luffy´s fleet into the same arc in which we deal with one of the most anticipated villains of OP.

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                                                                                        It was very much the conclusion to the SOP operation. The whole point was to revert everyone back to humans- especially Kyros - whereupon they would rise up against Doflamingo. Just because the "tragic ranks" subplot got dropped hard, doesn't mean Usopp resolved the SOP operation plotpoint right then and there through sheer dumb luck.

                                                                                        The second sniping of Sugar was cool, but a completely superfluous moment in the grand scheme of things, as she had already been KO'd once, and all the intended consequences of that had taken place. It feels like Sugar was artificially wheeled out again to give Usopp a redemtive moment, but the moment ultimately isn't as cool as it'd have been if it was the only Usopp v Sugar moment because its recycling a villain, and because the tension with the citizens on the Usopp side is completely fake.

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                                                                                        Usopp resolved that fight through brains, trickery, and utilization of his skillset though, just like Vs Chu and Perona. Which is the actual point regarding his first fight with Sugar, not that it concluded in a silly way or involved silly elements, but that Usopp won it with sheer dumb luck; not even him capitalizing on luck, just the luck of Sugar basically KO'ing herself. Despite his fight being against a Flammable Man and a tiny, fast girl who needs to swallow a tabasco ball, Usopp wins through no conscious effort of his own - And you know as well as I do that this was not presented as a "clever trope suberversion!".

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                                                                                        When the only credentials Burgess has in the arc is the offscreen takedown of characters we don't see/know in his initial appearance, and he spends the rest of the time getting tossed around by Sabo, thats pretty bad. He didn't "destroy" anyone else.

                                                                                        Its possible to write someone to failing their objectives, and still looking threatening or competent, but Oda never attempted that with Burgess. Ever since his introduction, Burgess never got a personal “win”, a high-moment to give him credibility, because everything he did was always offset by Sabo trumping him, thus making it “wins” for Sabo.
                                                                                        Elaborating on the latter: When I talk of Burgess getting “wins”, or moments of credibility, I’m not talking about reader-inferred, pseudo-feats of “Burgess survived a hit from X so he must be Y durable, that’s impressive”. I’m talking Burgess getting wins as framed deliberately, visually in the manga. Oda is a seasoned artist, and he knows how to draw a manga to get across an intended effect – which here was all about Sabo looking cool, and NOT Burgess looking credible, or even threatening. When Burgess is set ablaze and flying in a two page spread, while he’s screaming his head off in pain, Odas aim is not to make us think “wow! Good on you Burgess for surviving that!”, we’re supposed to think “Wow, Sabo is so cool!”. Even when they allegedly “tied” in their clash in the coliseum, the manga still give the “win” to Sabo. Burgess is the one whos’ armor breaks, who has the annoyed expression during and after the hit, and Sabo is the one whose expression is unchanged and gets the cool quip.

                                                                                        In the end Burgess is left battered, panting and beaten on the ground, while Sabo walks off in nonchalant, unhurt dominance. None of these moments are designed to make Burgess look credible to the readers. The biggest “win” you can attribute to Burgess this whole arc is his introductory offscreen defeat of fighters never seen before or since. And even that only gives him credibility as far as us readers having to do he legwork of “well, if we assume that the fighters in his block were of X power level and he defeated them in Y time, and with Z ferocity causing the possibly fearsome fighters to be completely incapacitated for the rest of the arc, he does seem to be quite strong”.

                                                                                        Yep, the problems does not lie with the comedic tone of Usopp´s fight, this has been the case since the beginning, whether it´s against Chew and one of the most hilarious of early OP with Usopp Hammer, his golden moment on Enies Lobby in which he starts to sing or the "fight" against Perona. The problem is that his resolution to overcome his fear, to fight and become the hero he pretended to be before for the Tontatta has no real payback. Sure, the fact that he turned around and faced them despite the overwhelming odds against him still ultimately led to Sugar fainting but it neither felt earned nor did it have the impact the scene in EL had for example.
                                                                                        And like you said, reintroducing Sugar to give Usopp the redemption felt too artificial and did not remotely have the impact it would have had in the first place.

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                                                                                        The problem with that is that most of the "citizen" characters don't like fighting, its not unique to Rebecca. Vivi didn't enjoy having to save Alabasta, but she gave her all anyway, she was dead set on contributing. Rebecca also repeatedly tries to contribute, only for her to wind up screaming for Kyros/Luffy to resolve her problems. She is being used as a prop to enforce how awesome Kyros is more than anything else, and ultimately I find the "stand back, Daddys here now" conclusion to be annoyingly infantalizing towards her. She even gets in trouble because she disobeys Kyros wanting her to stay put, and heads out to fight Doflamingo. If only she'd done what Daddy said!

                                                                                        Its particularly annoying to me once you break down their history: A dad is erased from his wife and childs memories through a magic spell that removes his physical strength. The wife/childs mother is killed. For 10 years, the child is trained by his Dad, in order to not being reliant on Dads protection. Eventually the child becomes an accomplished 16-year old warrior, who wants to take down the Evil King. During the course of the story the child comes face to face with the mothers murderer, and reunites with a restored Daddy… whereupon Dad tells the 16 year old accomplished warrior to stay back, not fight anymore, and let Dad resolve everything by himself. Theres not any sort of familial team effort involved.

                                                                                        I just don't see that ultimate resolution happening if Kyros had a son, is all I'm saying.

                                                                                        First off, i should say i dislike what Oda has done with Kyros and Rebecca as well but to be completely accurate, Toy Kyros never trained her to fight nor did he ever intend for her to be a warrior, hence him training her to only protect herself without harming anyone else.
                                                                                        The problem is that Oda basically says that fighting, no matter in what situation, is something to be avoided which really puts a bad light to everything that has happened before where he basically preaches that fighting for what you believe is right and protect your friends is a noble and the right thing to do. I can understand that Kyros, having killed two people only for revenge, wants her to not walk the same path but for Rebecca, it was never truly about taking revenge, it was about protecting the toy soldier she loved, so having Oda present this as something tainting really left a bad taste in my mouth.

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                                                                                          The problem with that is that most of the "citizen" characters don't like fighting, its not unique to Rebecca. Vivi didn't enjoy having to save Alabasta, but she gave her all anyway, she was dead set on contributing.

                                                                                          I don't think Vivi was fond of violence,but i also don't think she was averse to violence,which is the case for Rebecca.of course you can argue about the pacifism aspect of rebecca,but it is undoubtedly a part of her character,something her mother instilled in her.
                                                                                          And i don't see how Vivi was any more effective,and had any more desired results combat-wise in comparison
                                                                                          to Rebecca.she fought against crocodile and i think robin too,but was promptly defeated.she didn't fight any other top agents of crocodile.the only ones she fought were the chumps who were with the bomb.i would say that that's comparable to rebecca's feats,which were more focused on defensive tactics anyway

                                                                                          Rebecca also repeatedly tries to contribute, only for her to wind up screaming for Kyros/Luffy to resolve her problems. She is being used as a prop to enforce how awesome Kyros is more than anything else, and ultimately I find the "stand back, Daddys here now" conclusion to be annoyingly infantalizing towards her. She even gets in trouble because she disobeys Kyros wanting her to stay put, and heads out to fight Doflamingo. If only she'd done what Daddy said!

                                                                                          if she was a prop,then so was every secondary character who couldn't win against their enemy,even people like calgura and paulie

                                                                                          Its particularly annoying to me once you break down their history: A dad is erased from his wife and childs memories through a magic spell that removes his physical strength. The wife/childs mother is killed. For 10 years, the child is trained by his Dad, in order to not being reliant on Dads protection. Eventually the child becomes an accomplished 16-year old warrior, who wants to take down the Evil King. During the course of the story the child comes face to face with the mothers murderer, and reunites with a restored Daddy… whereupon Dad tells the 16 year old accomplished warrior to stay back, not fight anymore, and let Dad resolve everything by himself. Theres not any sort of familial team effort involved.

                                                                                          I just don't see that ultimate resolution happening if Kyros had a son, is all I'm saying.

                                                                                          the point of kyros teaching her wasn't to make her some ass-whooping gladiator,it was teaching her self -defense stuff and dodging,while knocking down the enemy in the least harmful way possible(remember the bladeless sword stuff).and he didn't teach her for 10 years,it started only later when she was much older.
                                                                                          and she was a somewhat accomplished warrior,who didn't actually kill anyone and who uses a bladeless sword and never got hit.
                                                                                          Rebecca's stay in the colosseum was always about enduring and holding on,never really about "i'm gonna take down everyone in my path".it was about staying true to your ideals even if the whole world was against you.
                                                                                          she never wanted to defeat people,she wanted to protect them and that's why kyros told her she didn't have to fight anymore.
                                                                                          though,i agree Rebecca could have played more of a role against diamente,but it wasn't that necessary i think

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                                                                                            I'm not surprise John Doe was the one to create such thread…

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                                                                                              I didn't like how dressrosa was developed. Doflamingo and his crew was very hyped and in the end all of them fell like nothing. Dofla himself was not able to give Luffy physical damage, and was first showed being aware of luffy's potential power, then in the actual fight he called him brat and gave him little credit.

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                                                                                                I'm not surprise John Doe was the one to create such thread…

                                                                                                heyyy, do I have to be offended ?
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                                                                                                  As talented as Oda is, as influential as One Piece is, and how it is probably the best example of good Shonen Manga, it has it's flaws. A few I can list off are as follows

                                                                                                  1. There are only two main female characters who have not done any big fights in years.
                                                                                                  2. The story arcs drag down in the middle especially during the later years.
                                                                                                  3. Skypiea still has yet to prove it's relevance to the overall story.
                                                                                                  4. Fishman island was overhyped as all hell.
                                                                                                  5. Portgas D Ace was barely in the story, yet we are supposed to view his death as some huge game changing moment in the plot. (It is, I just wish Ace had done some shit)
                                                                                                  6. Oda tends to design his female characters mostly the same. (Nami's body with a different face)

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                                                                                                    At this point opinions on Dressrosa are set and won't be changed, but I do want to say a few quick things and be done with it.

                                                                                                    As far as Rebecca is concerned, I think she was solid overall even if there could be some annoying things and admittedly her trying one attempt at Doflamingo may have been a scene too much with her. The big problem is just with how Oda deals with and portrays female characters, which while not as much of a problem at first has become very apparent over the years. Yes, most likely if Oda made the story about Kyros and his son it would've been very different. That said, while I will always be critical of the overall use of female characters, I look at each individual character as their own. So while Rebecca was yet another damsel in distress and not a fighter like many others, her story arc and dreams were still developed and being someone forced to fight since being young it was quite effective.

                                                                                                    The other thing is talking about the Doflamingo hype. Personally, I never really understood the hype behind him when the arc started. Yes, he was introduced early and there was some mystery behind him, but when he was the first major enemy of the New World my expectations of the fight part went down a lot. We had two years for the Straw Hats to grow and get better at fighting, and with the Yonko in the horizon Doflamingo was doomed to be strong, but not the worst thing to ever be faced. Instead Oda went a different direction with Doflamingo's past and connections, and how his downfall had the biggest effects around the world yet. Some also point to the build-up of the officers and how they were taken down. Once again, I think it was hinted if you looked well enough that they weren't going to be big threats. Yes, compared to the Dressrosa army they were threats, but for the first time Dressrosa had legit warriors who had gone through various levels of hell. The officers at one point did as well, but after seeing what they used to look like they were a shell of their former selfs.

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                                                                                                      @Halfmetal-lich:

                                                                                                      As talented as Oda is, as influential as One Piece is, and how it is probably the best example of good Shonen Manga, it has it's flaws. A few I can list off are as follows

                                                                                                      1. There are only two main female characters who have not done any big fights in years.

                                                                                                      Just because they haven't had any fights doesn't mean their characters are wasted or irrelevant.

                                                                                                      Is all about the story and those two females character are the most important characters in the whole crew right now. You cannot reach Raftel without them.

                                                                                                      2. The story arcs drag down in the middle especially during the later years.

                                                                                                      I can agree with this!

                                                                                                      3. Skypiea still has yet to prove it's relevance to the overall story.

                                                                                                      Skypea is part of the bigger picture, so no reason to play it out just yet.

                                                                                                      4. Fishman island was overhyped as all hell.

                                                                                                      Fishman Island isn't done just yet. This will probably be the only island that the Strawhats revisit once again. (Not counting SA)

                                                                                                      5. Portgas D Ace was barely in the story, yet we are supposed to view his death as some huge game changing moment in the plot. (It is, I just wish Ace had done some shit)

                                                                                                      Many fans view it as a breaking point because Ace's death was what pushed the main character to where he stands right now. We didn't need to have Ace in the story 24/7, we just needed to know the bond between him and the main character.

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                                                                                                        for me the part which deserves criticising is definitely punk hazard.
                                                                                                        punk hazard is weird in that for the starting of the arc,it's awesome.there's adventure,exploration,mystery,just weird stuff,comedy,new characters it's just awesome.and then comes shinokuni.after that,there's running and running,the pace get off-point,the fights aren't really that satisfying,the drama isn't that relatable,the narrative just isn't done consistently.
                                                                                                        i would say Punk hazard is the most disapointing arc for me.
                                                                                                        but it's been a while since i reread it,so maybe my opinion will somewhat temper after rereading it
                                                                                                        and dressrosa is flawed and certainly not the best,but overall i think it's good.
                                                                                                        with fishmen island,don't really get what the people's problems with it are.i personally enjoyed it and aside from some slow pace in parts,it's i think pretty good.
                                                                                                        overall i can understand a common complaint that people have,that post Timeskip is not as good as before timeskip.i too feel that somewhat,but it is variable and overall i don't think there's too much difference.and any series will have it's highs and lows,not everything will be equal.

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