I'm a Moroccan rapper, HERE's my 1st clip ever. Feedback pls?

[DEE JAY]

Hello everyone, I'm a very active member on this forum :D a one piece fan to the bone.

I'm a civil law notary in real life, however, i do rap. cuz its my passion… here's my first clip.... Song is called DON'T F**K WITH ME

please let me know whatcha think about it?

Peace AP community <3

Your feedback is HIGHLY recommanded! ty ty:ninja:

[AlucarDraculA]

Hey I checked your video and some of your other songs out and I was quite impressed. Especially for your first video that was very well done. Anyways keep it up I'm looking forward to more from you in the future.