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    • Gizmo
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      This weekend I reread Skypiea.

      Tangent

      ! First, I want to mention I was wrong in that Oda made a lot of mistakes involving the Shandian warrior designs during the survival game. He definitely did not have for sure 20 designs in mind and had in mind which character was offed in which scene.
      ! (For example, the "halfway" point where it mentions 7 Shandians are left. There are definitely more that 7 unique Shandian designs drawn still conscious after this scene)

      But on to the point. Storytelling. I couldn't help but notice the drastic change in storytelling. In Skypiea, Oda would draw every little scene that the current arc, Fishman Island, would skip over. For example, we definitely would've seen Luffy/Usopp/Chopper trying to find a blood donor for Sanji if it was the same pace as Skypiea.

      Skypiea would draw what every character was up to at every moment. Oda wouldn't skip over any scene (he would even draw scenes of the crew doing their thing. There were a few panels of Sanji preparing Skypiean food with Pagaya or the campfire scene where half the chapter is the crew just doing stuff for preparing a meal. Luffy is preparing water. Sanji is telling Luffy/Chopper/Zoro what do to for food. Chopper is describing doctoring methods. Robin found a rock salt. There's also the scene Robin digging to the ruins of Shandora etc.)

      Skip to Fishman Island where we skip Franky finding Den, Robin finding out that the poneglyph is at Fishman Island etc.

      There is a trade off between the reduced number of chapters vs what is shown. And this is only one of the main ways Oda has changed his storytelling abilities. I'm sure this forum can think of a bunch of different nuances of how Oda has changed his storytelling techniques.

      So this is that thread. It's not a "this arc is better" thread. It's a thread about comparing the evolution of Oda's storytelling over this series and explaining his high and low points in storytelling.

      This can include the sequences that he introduces information. The amount of information shown per panels. Foreshadowing. Callbacks to previous arcs. etc. This is for this thread. Let's discuss this now.

      Originally Posted by Nightwing

      Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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        this is an interesting topic

        but i would like to add that oda is to the point where he has to change his methods to shorten things

        bc there are a lot more characters and character interaction say compared to east blue or even alabastia

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          @Chopper:

          this is an interesting topic

          but i would like to add that oda is to the point where he has to change his methods to shorten things

          bc there are a lot more characters and character interaction say compared to east blue or even alabastia

          It's understandable. The discussion can be whether people believe it's better or not better. Is it better that we are skipping these events? Or are these events vital to fleshing out characters and developing them?

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          Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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            Well, while I still love One Piece, the pacing and skipping problems that you mention (and Oda's sudden inability to draw normal-sized people) are the reasons that I think it's not quite as good as it used to be (though of course it hasn't really dropped in quality compared to the many other mangas).
            Fishman Island has only lasted 13 chapters, and while it of course seems to last at least a few chapters more, we've gotten much more than we would have in former arcs. A big cast of characters and one of the more complex plots. And in e.g. Skypiea, we hadn't even SEEN the main villain after 13 chapters!

            I think Oda's biggest problem currently is that he has so much he wants to tell, but in the end doesn't have the energy to tell it all. So he should maybe think a bit more like "okay, I'd like to include a subplot about Sanji getting a blood donor, but do I even bother to draw it?" That would help much.

            And another thing is also that he uses much more panels than he used to do. See this: http://www.mangareader.net/103-2573-15/one-piece/chapter-466.html. Two panels and only one short line from Brook. He hasn't "squandered" his drawing paper that much recently. No, currently page 15 and 16 in this chapter would have been mashed together on one page. And he might even have skipped the fight as the fight itself wasn't as important as Zoro getting a new sword and Brook getting his shadow back. And we already HAD seen Ryuuma fight, so why show it again?

            The new pacing is quite nice on a weekly chapter basis, however. When I read e.g. the Thriller Bark weekly chapters over a year, they felt soooooo dragged out, and Impel Down was nice because the story always was pushed much forward in each chapter. When I read the whole arcs after they finished, Thriller Bark had almost perfect pacing (maybe except for the fight against Oars), and Impel Down seemed like an abscess Oda just wanted to get rid of as fast as possible.

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            • Don Quichotte De Flamingo
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              Oda has so many stuff in his mind, which he likes to introduce in his story..
              Just thinking about the oportunities the NW gives him to make various differnet islands is unbelievable.
              By that Oda has to decide whether he likes to introduce us some arcs\islands as big and detailed as possible, or show us more arcs\islands, where all those smaller details(interactions of the crew\smaller side quests etc) are more distributed to the arcs or are shown more off-panel.
              He has to cut some stuff off ,just like he did already.(like seeing the page where Usopp bought his goggles)
              By that the arc still remains long enough, but by deciding not to show every piece of story in every detail(like all the time we can think for ourselves what happens inbetween two panels), Oda can save so much time and space in his masterpiece, so that much more time for other newer stuff occurs,where he has to show us more details, so that we can understand it.

              Non the less with drawing less, he makes the reader more think about stuff which is most of the time a good thing…when you think for yourself what exactly now happens in those off-panels you can develop your own little adventures or situation.
              Also with off-panels you are sometimes able to introduce even more to a complex story, without wasting a chapter or something like that with showing us less interesting stuff, just to bring the story more forward.

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                Yeah Idk, I also think that things are getting out of hand in terms of pacing. Of course I'll have to reread everything when the arc is over to make a definitive opinion and feel. But as things are now I feel the flashback is a little rushed. I have no emotional connection or feeling whatsoever with fisher tiger or the other characters like neptune.

                I understand it's a very fine line between rushed and dragged, so I hope it gets better.

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                  @GiantGuy:

                  I think Oda's biggest problem currently is that he has so much he wants to tell, but in the end doesn't have the energy to tell it all. So he should maybe think a bit more like "okay, I'd like to include a subplot about Sanji getting a blood donor, but do I even bother to draw it?" That would help much.

                  Yeah, Oda definitely has a bunch of ideas that sometimes doesn't always pull through (the general zombies is the most prominent example I can think of). But it's those ideas that make the story so interesting so sometimes I wouldn't mind if he went through all of those plot points in retrospect. Weekly it'd be such a pain though.

                  I don't agree with the Ryuuma fight being unimportant, but that's another issue. It was an homage to Monsters and was an important battle for Zoro/Brook.

                  But yeah, Oda is putting a lot more in these chapters than he would've previously, which is good. IMO, Impel Down only felt rushed in the end where everyone but Magellan/Hannyabal was taken out quickly or offscreen but that more to do with a lack of payoff by the staff in the end.

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                  with drawing less, he makes the reader more think about stuff which is most of the time a good thing…when you think for yourself what exactly now happens in those off-panels you can develop your own little adventures or situation.

                  Sometimes leaving things to the imagination isn't always a good thing. For example, the Sanji in a dress cover story. That's something that I doubt will ever be explained, and that type of thing could lead to very different views (or people accepting Toei's take on it).

                  I can't really think of any in the current arc that would be as controversial, but that's the gist.

                  Also with off-panels you are sometimes able to introduce even more to a complex story, without wasting a chapter or something like that with showing us less interesting stuff, just to bring the story more forward.

                  I think it depends. Personally, I think the pacing of Fishman Island is fine except for the nosebleed situation.

                  It had a bunch of buildup only to get resolved off screen. It was a bad plot line, but Oda could've gone and shown how regular citizens of Fishman Island react to the idea of giving blood to a human, which could've been interesting to see whether all of them have the same mindset, or if the mindset is more diverse (like they would've but they didn't have the bloodtype).

                  @Mugiwara_no_Ice: I can understand. I started thinking about this because of the latest chapter's pacing, but since the flashback and arc isn't over yet, I can't really judge it. Still, it's interesting to notice Oda's evolution of pacing over time.

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                  There's a bunch of other things that could also be taken into consideration over time. It's interesting to note the difference in how arcs do things like: development of side characters, villains, main character interactions, overarching worldbuilding, scientific phenomena worldbuilding, cultures of the islands, errors/arc length etc.

                  Originally Posted by Nightwing

                  Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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                    @ultimateclima:

                    It had a bunch of buildup only to get resolved off screen. It was a bad plot line, but Oda could've gone and shown how regular citizens of Fishman Island react to the idea of giving blood to a human, which could've been interesting to see whether all of them have the same mindset, or if the mindset is more diverse (like they would've but they didn't have the bloodtype).

                    Thats something the anime may can expand, but for us readers it was not necessary.
                    We heard before that fishman have trouble in giving their blood, because of the Fisher Tiger accident.
                    Alxso we know that sure some may be willing to (like Camie)but most of them are afraid of having to face the consequences with the NFP.
                    Also by not going through those differnent reactions of citizien(which we all covered already in the previous chapter by main characters) Oda gave us another funny scene with showing us that okamas gave Sanji their blood.
                    It was only important to see who finally gave Sanji blood and Oda made a joke out of it, which is understandable because the whole scene of being near death because of a nosebleed was already close to being idiotic.

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                      If you look at how involved the rest of the world is in the story, then of course Oda needs to draw more panels now than before. There used to be just a handful of people in the Strawhat crew, but now that's 9. The arcs used to be the SHs and an enemy, with a few side characters littered throughout. And it used to be like an island-hopping story, but that's changed since. It's almost like world-conquest now.

                      And now that Oda's introduced so many characters and factions, there's so much going on, and the islands we see introduce more and more until finally–our minds are blown. Or not yet, since Oda generously skips some of the less important things.

                      He needs to speed things up and cram them in every page or the manga might end with, say, a few thousand chapters. Just imagine if One Piece showed every subplot and miniarc. x.x

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                      • Monkey King
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                        Alright this is the first time I'm gonna come out and say this but Fishman Island seems…like a stumble so far.

                        I mean...the world building aspect that Oda is an ace at is sloppy here.
                        Oda should slowly introduce us to the island and we should be given a definite feel for the layout early on.
                        he did this excellently in Skypiea, Alabasta, and Water7. And to prove it's not even about it being recent, he even did this for Impel Down and Shabondy.

                        This is the first island I felt has been poorly depicted as a living breathing entity.
                        This is one of the things I love most about One Piece and to not feel it here on Fishman Island is very very annoying.
                        Of all islands.

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                          Yeah, his pacing is definitely off with FI. I'm not sure why he seems to be in such a rush… but he does seem to be. Maybe he's excited to showcase the new world, maybe he's been leading up to FI for so long that now that he's finally here he's grown bored with it, or the opposite, he's so excited that he wants to show everything as soon as possible. Maybe there's a certain key scene he's eager to get to that'll put a context to the whole arc... I dunno, something. Maybe its just a case of him being human.

                          He hasn't even given us a MAP yet… especially crucial in this case when its a three dimensional terrain, with bus tunnels to other connected islands and some things up in the air. He's usually waaaay better about that.

                          Hopefully the flashback will slow down to a real pace with the next chapter, and after the flashback is over we'll get a proper FI arc. I've been… okay... with the pace so far, on the assumption that its going to be a 2 year arc and this has just been the opening mini-event, the Jaya setup, and that we're going to be spending a lot more time in the place and there's going to be a lot of meat to come yet, some big twist that'll make it more epic and more like the thing he's been teasing steadily for 5 years.

                          But if this arc is already almost over? Finished before the end of the year? There'd be a major dropped ball here.

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                            YEAH, I want that fucking map so bad. The shape of this island is so bizarre, we need to know where all these neighborhoods fall relative to eachother, esepcially where the fuck the Fishman district is, and where the Sea Forest is, if it's outside the bubble then WHERE. I mean for fucks sake, we even got a map of Enies Lobby, which was basically a glorified combat arena.

                            Brenrouge and some dingus were able to have a huge debate about it, shows how little we've been given. The stuff they were arguing we should know from the comic.

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                              Hopefully, this flashback will be nice and long in order to slow the pacing down.
                              But who knows, maybe Oda's trying to rush us into the New World. Which he shouldn't do because I've been waiting for this arc for years.

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                                I can only guess that there's just some big things that Oda doesn't want to show yet that a full map would give away? But usually a blank unspecified spot on a map just leads to curiosity as to what it'll have. I really can't think of why he's waited this long.

                                Or maybe Luffy is going to destroy it sooner than anybody expects so there's no point getting attached to the current layout.

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                                  So true. I'm getting more and more frustrated with every chapter! I keeping trying to float around with my mind's eye but of course we know next to nothing of how everything is laid out, through what is obviously multi-tiered areas. I keep trying to picture shaboady but on multiple levels like some sort of crazy 3D chess board but then I just get angry.

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                                    @RobbyBevard:

                                    Or maybe Luffy is going to destroy it sooner than anybody expects so there's no point getting attached to the current layout.

                                    If Luffy is actually going to do some serious landscaping, than wouldn't a map be ideal to show the impact of whatever happens?

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                                      @Don:

                                      Thats something the anime may can expand, but for us readers it was not necessary.
                                      We heard before that fishman have trouble in giving their blood, because of the Fisher Tiger accident.
                                      Alxso we know that sure some may be willing to (like Camie)but most of them are afraid of having to face the consequences with the NFP.

                                      Do we? We really don't know anything about the Fishman Island citizens or how they view the pirates or this ancient tradition. The citizens fangasm over Otohime and Fisher Tiger in the past, but we have no idea how much they respect the past now.

                                      This easily could've fleshed out the relationship between humans and fishman that seems to be lacking this arc, especially since human/fishman relations seems like a MAJOR theme this arc

                                      Also by not going through those differnent reactions of citizien(which we all covered already in the previous chapter by main characters) Oda gave us another funny scene with showing us that okamas gave Sanji their blood.
                                      It was only important to see who finally gave Sanji blood and Oda made a joke out of it, which is understandable because the whole scene of being near death because of a nosebleed was already close to being idiotic.

                                      I still hate this plotline regardless of it's "significance" or how "serious" it was meant to be taken. Butt monkey Sanji was a miss for me on the funny radar.

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                                        @RobbyBevard:

                                        Hopefully the flashback will slow down to a real pace with the next chapter, and after the flashback is over we'll get a proper FI arc. I've been… okay... with the pace so far, on the assumption that its going to be a 2 year arc and this has just been the opening mini-event, the Jaya setup, and that we're going to be spending a lot more time in the place and there's going to be a lot of meat to come yet, some big twist that'll make it more epic and more like the thing he's been teasing steadily for 5 years.

                                        This, too, is what I've been looking forward to for this arc, which is why I have no real pestering issues with Oda's progress just yet; hopefully, this arc really isn't just a couple more months long, because that would be quite disappointing.

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                                          Looking at Otohime's goal and thinking back on the "prophecy", maybe he's not giving us the layout because he's gonna destroy it =/

                                          I don't really buy into it myself, completely, but I can imagine this arc being another Water 7, so to speak. Whatever happens now drags the remainder of the story to another location (like Enies Lobby), bringing the arc to a close there, and/or having the cool down there.

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                                            Looking at Otohime's goal and thinking back on the "prophecy", maybe he's not giving us the layout because he's gonna destroy it =/

                                            I don't really buy into it myself, completely, but I can imagine this arc being another Water 7, so to speak. Whatever happens now drags the remainder of the story to another location (like Enies Lobby), bringing the arc to a close there, and/or having the cool down there.

                                            Yeah I though about that too.

                                            Umm, I must admit, I haven't even thought about this before. Maybe Oda and co. think the readers have so many expectations about this arc, so that we just want to get to "the case" as fast as possible. I mean, unlike the previous arc's we are probably more "prepared" now (though of course, with plenty room for mind blowation).

                                            About FI, It's no like Oda to hide certain necessary hints or important impressions from the reader. So maybe he thinks we get what we need and know the characters well enough to… guess what they might do or... something. I dunno...

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                                              Maybe it is a side effect of sending so much time on the mermaids whom I really don't care all that much about in comparison to the Fishmen, but I can agree that this arc hasn't quite clicked with me yet. We're at the point where usually all the main players have been introduced or alluded to, yet there's no tension here. Part of this is because the Straw Hats (or I guess really just Luffy and Zoro) are coming off as so overpowered relative to the villains that it feels like nothing poses any danger to them. I'm holding out for something big happening, like Luffy landscaping the place, to bring back some honest to goodness sense of danger and urgency. As it stands, with what we currently know, I can't imagine this arc lasting all that much longer, which would be quite a disappointment given how we've been waiting for this arc for around five years.

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                                                In addition to Odas eagerness to show us weird New World islands, his renewed focus on the target audience, that he has in mind, might play into this. I've read in interviews in the last few years that he want's to put as much manga as possible into a volume without making it any more expensive, than it is, so as to enable to middle-schoolers to buy it. (Even though the polls from that One Piece documentary suggests that only a small fraction of those who buy the books are teens) I think he said, that he cannot influence the price/page of a tankoubon, so he might have just opted to put more content onto each page instead.

                                                I wonder what the reaction would be, if we got a chapter now, and half of it would not advance any plot line, as mentioned in the opening example. Not good if we get a few in a row probably. The initial thoughts on Skypia saga of those who read it on a week to week basis were not that good either. Once read in marathon style many said they liked it a lot more on second read. For me it's one of the best stories in this manga. When you start at the moment the St Briss falls from sky and stop at the Going Merry falling, I think it almost has stand alone qualities. It would work as a manga of its own. That's in part because there are such long parts of just character interaction. I don't think someone who never heard of One Piece before, would be confused by it. (If you cut out Blackbeard, who is not at all needed for Skypia to work, that is)

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                                                  Crossword said it good about there being no real sense of danger. I think the only sense of danger right now is Zoro, Usopp, Brook, and Neptune being captured by the New Fishman Pirates at the moment. Vander Decken's first encounter with Luffy didn't give me a good impression of him and if it weren't for the water, I'd say Zoro would have defeated Hodi Jones (which is probably why the water was there). While I do like seeing how strong the SH are post-timeskip and seeing them oneshotting fodder, until they are forced to go all out, we won't know exactly how strong they are. Plus the oldest prince is already dealing with one of Hodi Jones's top crewmembers. When it comes to their subordintes so far, I'd say Vander Decken doesn't anyone that stands out as a threat and Hodi Jones has Hyozo (who's a mercenary first and a NFP pirate second). Maybe his other top crewmembers, but if one of the princes is already dealing with one of them, who knows? I think taking out the one Fukaboshi is fighting and Hyozo, there's only 3 top crewmembers of Hodi Jones and if the other 2 princes were to fight at least 2 of them…

                                                  I think this is my only complaint so far but I'll reserve judgment until the arc's over.

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                                                    I’m surprised at how many people are unsatisfied with this arc. I think it’s been great. So far, it's definitely exceeded my expectations. I wasn’t so interested in how Franky found Den as I was in the contents of their conversation. I thought it was executed fairly well since we didn’t see how Zoro was spotted by the Neptune army, how Nami wound up in Gyoverly Hills, how Brooke ended up in the Mermaid café, or how Robin found out about the Bus route to the Sea Forest. To me, it felt like Oda was depicting most of these events from the perspective of Luffy’s group since they weren’t crucial to the story and there were so many other important topics to cover.

                                                    I also think Oda has built up plenty of tension going into this flashback. There’s Caribou’s plan to kidnap the Princess, King Neptune being held captive by Hodi, the New Fishman Pirates’ takeover of the island, the Strawhat Pirates being accused of the kidnappings, Vander Dekken’s next move, the anticipation of Robin’s findings once she locates the poneglyph, Shirley's prediction, and the reason why Jimbei isn't allowed on the island anymore.

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                                                    Do we? We really don't know anything about the Fishman Island citizens or how they view the pirates or this ancient tradition. The citizens fangasm over Otohime and Fisher Tiger in the past, but we have no idea how much they respect the past now.

                                                    This easily could've fleshed out the relationship between humans and fishman that seems to be lacking this arc, especially since human/fishman relations seems like a MAJOR theme this arc

                                                    I have to disagree. I think the citizens’ views of humans are pretty clear since they were unwilling to sign Otohime’s petition and they were so quick to blame the Strawhats for the kidnappings. It’s also clear that they deeply respect the royal family because they were refusing to step on Otohime’s picture, they were so adamant about protecting Shirahoshi from Dekken, the princes are adored by them wherever they go, and they were in awe when Neptune invited the Strawhats to the Palace.

                                                    I think Oda has done well with the characterization of this arc as well, particularly with the royal family. Neptune and the princes are obviously honorable and just guys and he already managed to make me a fan of Otohime after only one chapter.

                                                    The pace does seem a little quick but I don’t see a valid reason to slow down since the Strawhats won’t (and in my opinion shouldn’t) be challenged at this island. The only thing I’ve been disappointed with so far is Sanji bleeding all over the place; everything else has been awesome. It would be nice to have a map but it seems like Oda only introduces them when the path the Strawhats are on is dangerous. A leisurely stroll to the Sea Forest doesn’t particularly warrant one.

                                                    Honestly, with Jimbei and Arlong's roles in this arc and the upcoming display of the Strawhat's new skills, I think it's on track to be the best Strawhat-centric arc since Water 7.

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                                                      I have to disagree. I think the citizens’ views of humans are pretty clear since they were unwilling to sign Otohime’s petition and they were so quick to blame the Strawhats for the kidnappings. It’s also clear that they deeply respect the royal family because they were refusing to step on Otohime’s picture, they were so adamant about protecting Shirahoshi from Dekken, the princes are adored by them wherever they go, and they were in awe when Neptune invited the Strawhats to the Palace.

                                                      First off, the trans state that many signed the petition in the past. Anyways…

                                                      The first part suggests that they do believe in Fisher Tiger's philosophy but the second half makes it seem they idolize the queen, and the two of them have major differences in their views on human kind. So which is it? Do they hate humans or like humans? Are they in fear of them or are they friendly with them?

                                                      The interactions between Luffy/Sanji/Chopper doesn't really count because they were blinded by the fact that they appeared to be kidnapping the princess, with their biases towards being humans becoming a factor, but not a cause for their hatred.

                                                      Plus, the blood argument Hammond gave also made it seem that they aren't willing to give blood because of fear, not because of hatred over human kind, yet there could still be citizens that are angry over Fisher Tiger's death.

                                                      From what I gathered, the citizens seem to be okay with human kind, it's still up in the air sense we honestly don't know yet.

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                                                        First off, the trans state that many signed the petition in the past. Anyways…

                                                        Jimbei’s reaction to Otohime’s speech, as well as the reaction of the citizens that were present, suggest that the majority of citizens are still opposed to Otohime’s ideals due to the oppression they’ve experienced from humans throughout their history.

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                                                        The first part suggests that they do believe in Fisher Tiger's philosophy but the second half makes it seem they idolize the queen, and the two of them have major differences in their views on human kind. So which is it? Do they hate humans or like humans? Are they in fear of them or are they friendly with them?

                                                        Just because they idolize Otohime doesn’t mean they have to agree with her views. And the only fishman that have been shown to agree with Fisher Tiger’s views were those he grew up with. The citizens aren’t obligated to choose sides. And I wasn’t trying to convey that all fishman hate humans. I was only implying that it’s pretty obvious most fishman distrust humans, whether it’s because they hate them, fear them, or whatever.

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                                                        The interactions between Luffy/Sanji/Chopper doesn't really count because they were blinded by the fact that they appeared to be kidnapping the princess, with their biases towards being humans becoming a factor, but not a cause for their hatred.

                                                        I wasn’t referring to the citizens blaming the Strawhats of kidnapping the princess. I was referring to them blaming the Strawhats of kidnapping the mermaids at the cove. They automatically blamed the Strawhats because humans were known for kidnapping their kind and selling them into slavery (i.e. they don’t trust them). In my opinion, Oda doesn’t need to delve into that topic any further.

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                                                          Maybe it is a side effect of sending so much time on the mermaids whom I really don't care all that much about in comparison to the Fishmen, but I can agree that this arc hasn't quite clicked with me yet. We're at the point where usually all the main players have been introduced or alluded to, yet there's no tension here. Part of this is because the Straw Hats (or I guess really just Luffy and Zoro) are coming off as so overpowered relative to the villains that it feels like nothing poses any danger to them. I'm holding out for something big happening, like Luffy landscaping the place, to bring back some honest to goodness sense of danger and urgency. As it stands, with what we currently know, I can't imagine this arc lasting all that much longer, which would be quite a disappointment given how we've been waiting for this arc for around five years.

                                                          This has been the concern of many fans. Now that they have such a bad ass upgrade in they're fighting abilities, what's there to stand in there way aside form an admiral or Yonko? I'm still holding out that this arc is only just beginning.

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                                                            I think that's just the problem of the fact that Fishman Island kinda has to be the first post-time skip arc. We had that small bit in Saboady, but that wasn't to flesh out the strengths of the characters. Oda needs to show us that the training they've been doing really was a lot and that they have come really far, and it does suck that he has to do that with an arc that's had build up for years. If they came into FI and were entirely evenly matched, it wouldn't seem like they grew that much, that they were just maintaining average to be where they needed to be. Them kicking total and complete ass initially upon their return isn't a bad thing at all. It's just a shame there wasn't some sort of obstacle before FI where they could show that they're far stronger than they used to be, so that FI could seem like it had more tension. Of course this is entirely based only upon what we currently know, and some extremely strong force could appear this arc, it just doesn't seem too likely.

                                                            And also, the other supernovas got into the NW two years ago, and managed to make it into the ocean, for the most part. The SH's can't be shown coming in after 2 years of intense specialized training and just look like the other supernovas must have been eons ahead of them from the start. Sure it's assumed none of the Supernovas got too involved on anything at FI, but they still would have been able to at least put up with any possible hardships experienced there.

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                                                              I don't know but I feel like I have been falling out of loop with One Piece since this arc started.

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                                                                I don't know but I feel like I have been falling out of loop with One Piece since this arc started.

                                                                well we're essentially starting over again. so. I think its understandable.

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                                                                  It's just a shame there wasn't some sort of obstacle before FI where they could show that they're far stronger than they used to be, so that FI could seem like it had more tension.

                                                                  Oda hasn't been afraid of angering his fans by dragging out time before they got to Fishman Island. If he wanted to make that sort of obstacle, he could easily have done so. I think it's more about that he doesn't want to introduce any enemies that can give the Straw Hats a good fight, because that would drag the arc, and it would be TERRIBLE if we had an arc lasting longer than 20-30 chapters (feel my sarcasm).

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                                                                  Sure it's assumed none of the Supernovas got too involved on anything at FI, but they still would have been able to at least put up with any possible hardships experienced there.

                                                                  Hody probably wasn't active 2 years ago, and Decken is of no concern to people who doesn't hang out with Shirahoshi. So the only things they had to cope with might have been other human pirates, just like on Sabaody.

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                                                                    yeah, something is bothering me too in this arc.

                                                                    i really don't know for sure, but i think what's most missing is this special adventure feeling what makes OP so unique and pleasant, you know, like every SH just making 'unimportant' stuff like the camping fire in skypia or the shopping in water 7 and so on.

                                                                    OP is NOT just about telling a dramatic/epic/cool story, it's also about the SH pirates just having fun and interacting with the new environment.

                                                                    the arrival at FMI was SO rushed (well, of course they literally rushed in, but…nah...)

                                                                    don't get me wrong, i still like OP sooooo much and it's a great arc so far, but it's so different. and i liked the old OP-style much better. i really hope the pace will dramatically slow down after the FB.

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                                                                      To sum it up:

                                                                      -no map or real feeling about the island so far
                                                                      -not enough interaction with the new environment from the crew
                                                                      -no real danger\villain which makes us unpatient to have a confrontation
                                                                      -overall a bit rushed

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                                                                        @GreatLiver:

                                                                        Oda needs to show us that the training they've been doing really was a lot and that they have come really far, and it does suck that he has to do that with an arc that's had build up for years. If they came into FI and were entirely evenly matched, it wouldn't seem like they grew that much, that they were just maintaining average to be where they needed to be. Them kicking total and complete ass initially upon their return isn't a bad thing at all. It's just a shame there wasn't some sort of obstacle before FI where they could show that they're far stronger than they used to be, so that FI could seem like it had more tension.

                                                                        Shabondy served that role. They one shotted pacifistas, where before it took the entire crew to barely defeat one and htey were all exhausted afterward.

                                                                        And here, having even Usopp and Nami takes on 10x stronger than normal humans fishman shows their growth and bravery, that shows their growth just fine. It IS okay for them to be stronger than 99% of the guys around them, but the big bosses of the arc… should be able to challenge them. The extreme exceptions.

                                                                        Of course, Hodi hasn't felt like the big bad since he was introduced, and Dekken certainley didn't, so there's still a chance he isn't the real enemy, and he's just a symptom of the politics and he'll be turned around by the end of all this, instead of beaten down.

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                                                                        I’m surprised at how many people are unsatisfied with this arc. I think it’s been great. So far, it's definitely exceeded my expectations.

                                                                        No preconceptions here, but you have an April 2011 join date. For how long have you been reading the series weekly? Just curious.

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                                                                          To sum it up:

                                                                          -no map or real feeling about the island so far
                                                                          -not enough interaction with the new environment from the crew
                                                                          -no real danger\villain which makes us unpatient to have a confrontation
                                                                          -overall a bit rushed

                                                                          I don't know for you all but it's the first time that I feel so meh about an One Piece arc's plot… I feel like I'm forced to be sad for all the fishman and the whole queen thing but it feels reallr rushed, so really I don't care about her and her relation with Jinbe.

                                                                          I don't care about Jinbe, I don't care about the queen and neptune, I don't care about the fishmen and I don't care about what's happening to fishman island. The only thing I care about at this time is how the Strawhat have changed. We had some hint in Shabandy but I want more.

                                                                          So far the only thing I liked in this Arc is Hodi's rampage on the human's ship and Zoro ownage under whater.

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                                                                            This has been the concern of many fans. Now that they have such a bad ass upgrade in they're fighting abilities, what's there to stand in there way aside form an admiral or Yonko? I'm still holding out that this arc is only just beginning.

                                                                            I agree with you further, maybe they are not so power-up, they only are two years stronger, but their enimies could be as strong as them.
                                                                            I don't know if I have explained weel, so sorry 😃

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                                                                              Interesting that Skypiea is used as a point of comparison. I'm currently working through that as well, and I would say Fishman Island is a sign of how he's grown as a writer. Yes, the developments of Skypiea were drawn out and there was more explanatory detail, but there's also a good deal of time devoted to dead-end characters, more space for concepts that just don't pan out (sure, I can understand the Monster Trio acclimating to the White-White Sea quickly, but Nami and Usopp? Why mention the troubles for Blue Sea dwellers if it didn't mean anything?), and a very lengthy flashback that, while touching in its own way, honestly didn't transform the world of One Piece that much. Plus 90% of the characters get his by EIGHTEEN BILLION VOLTS OF ELECTRICITY and end up fine.

                                                                              Fishman Island might be a little fast, but it's too early to say that Oda's rushing things. After all, it could very well be a much longer arc than expected, as has been mentioned. And even if it isn't, I think it's a forgivable offense considering a.) Oda's probably just as excited to have the crew back together as we are and is running at a mile a minute, and b.) he might realize that hitting the halfway mark at thirteen years could pretty much kill him at his current pace.

                                                                              But I realize I'm probably in the minority in considering Skypiea one of the low points of the series.

                                                                              Hang in there, Kierkegaard.

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                                                                                Basically this thread is a series of well thought out points, but I kinda feel like we might be nit-picking a little bit friends. Yes the pacing is different, but I feel like that's not entirely a bad thing. It was nice seeing scenes like Sanji telling the crew what kind of food to look for, Chopper talking about being a Dr, etc. but I feel like we're at a point in the story where we don't need to see that anymore, it's sort of understood that things like this are already going on. However, trying to find Sanji a blood donor is something that I am surprised got basically no panel time at all, at least it was handled relatively quick so at least we didn't feel like we were missing out on too much.

                                                                                As far as Oda "rushing" FI, I really don't think that's the case at all. This arc is definitely the most foreshadowed in the entire series so far (with the exception of Raftel), not to mention we aren't even 20 chapters into it yet. We (probably) haven't seen the arc-villain yet, the SH's themselves haven't been in any sort of real danger so far (unless you count Brook being submerged or Sanji's nosebleeds). I think with a little bit of patience, we'll all be able to appreciate this arc for what it most likely will be, which is great.

                                                                                "You were the leaves basking in the sun, and I was the root growing in the darkness"

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                                                                                  This is an interesting thread. My guess is that Oda tried hard to keep the pace up through Impel Down and Marineford so that he became more accustomed to that attitude. Ever since the timeskip, I've felt like the chapters have all been very full of material like never before.

                                                                                  After the timeskip I really started to get the feeling that Oda was trying to get all he could out of every panel. It's a feeling I didn't have before.

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                                                                                  Yeah, his pacing is definitely off with FI. I'm not sure why he seems to be in such a rush… but he does seem to be. Maybe he's excited to showcase the new world, maybe he's been leading up to FI for so long that now that he's finally here he's grown bored with it, or the opposite, he's so excited that he wants to show everything as soon as possible. Maybe there's a certain key scene he's eager to get to that'll put a context to the whole arc... I dunno, something. Maybe its just a case of him being human.

                                                                                  I agree with this, and specifically off panel development. There are more things happening off panel now than I can ever remember. Robin tracked down a poneglyph in one page. It's almost as if he has higher standards for what he bothers to draw now.

                                                                                  Hopefully the flashback will slow down to a real pace with the next chapter, and after the flashback is over we'll get a proper FI arc. I've been… okay... with the pace so far, on the assumption that its going to be a 2 year arc and this has just been the opening mini-event, the Jaya setup, and that we're going to be spending a lot more time in the place and there's going to be a lot of meat to come yet, some big twist that'll make it more epic and more like the thing he's been teasing steadily for 5 years.

                                                                                  If we make an assumption that Oda needed this flashback before he was ready to reveal certain things, then the pace seems a lot more understandable. If the pace of Impel Down was pushed in order to get back to a comfort zone for the author, then Fishman Island before the flashback could be in a similar position.

                                                                                  But if this arc is already almost over? Finished before the end of the year? There'd be a major dropped ball here.

                                                                                  Yes, if Fishman Island is left behind for the New World before 2012 ends, I'll feel as though Oda rushed too much.

                                                                                  He hasn't even given us a MAP yet… especially crucial in this case when its a three dimensional terrain, with bus tunnels to other connected islands and some things up in the air. He's usually waaaay better about that.

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                                                                                  YEAH, I want that fucking map so bad. The shape of this island is so bizarre, we need to know where all these neighborhoods fall relative to eachother, esepcially where the fuck the Fishman district is, and where the Sea Forest is, if it's outside the bubble then WHERE. I mean for fucks sake, we even got a map of Enies Lobby, which was basically a glorified combat arena.

                                                                                  Absolutely agree. If there's one thing I want to point out, though, it's how Oda uses maps in the first place. Typically Oda gives us maps that coincide with the crew's knowledge. We get the map when they get the map or have constructed one. I believe Oda wants us to feel as lost as the crew does (I hope). It seems like the taxi ride from Mermaid Cafe to Pappug's house was an ideal time to bring it up, so I can only hope that there's a reason why it's still a bit of a mystery (and that it doesn't wind up revealing any plot holes).

                                                                                  This map is also the most complex layout in the history of One Piece. It's all very 3D. If it was all just explained from the get go, the complexity of it all and the feeling of traversing an unexplored area would be damaged.

                                                                                  Brenrouge and some dingus were able to have a huge debate about it, shows how little we've been given. The stuff they were arguing we should know from the comic.

                                                                                  It also shows how many little pieces of information we've received. There are some conclusions that can be pieced together without being specifically revealed, such as the Sea Forest and Fishman District being outside of the island. Assuming all the pieces fit together properly at the end, I see great potential for the overall layout/design. Of course, there's also the potential of a piece not fitting properly and ruining it.

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                                                                                  I can only guess that there's just some big things that Oda doesn't want to show yet that a full map would give away? But usually a blank unspecified spot on a map just leads to curiosity as to what it'll have. I really can't think of why he's waited this long.

                                                                                  That's possible, and the first thing that comes to mind is that upper island bubble above FI. Maybe there's something about the location of the giant ship in the Fishman District that makes it an important reveal, or maybe even the same for the Sea Forest/poneglyph, though I doubt it. There's also the possibility that Oda just wants us to feel as lost as confused as the characters at the beginning of the arc as they're all separated.

                                                                                  I'm not sure a blank spot could be justified, though, unless it was a map that the crew was putting together in pieces.

                                                                                  Or maybe Luffy is going to destroy it sooner than anybody expects so there's no point getting attached to the current layout.

                                                                                  That logic didn't apply for Angel Beach, so I'm guessing it's not the case here either. I suppose I just don't see destruction as a reason to avoid revealing it.

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                                                                                  Maybe it is a side effect of sending so much time on the mermaids whom I really don't care all that much about in comparison to the Fishmen, but I can agree that this arc hasn't quite clicked with me yet. We're at the point where usually all the main players have been introduced or alluded to, yet there's no tension here. Part of this is because the Straw Hats (or I guess really just Luffy and Zoro) are coming off as so overpowered relative to the villains that it feels like nothing poses any danger to them. I'm holding out for something big happening, like Luffy landscaping the place, to bring back some honest to goodness sense of danger and urgency. As it stands, with what we currently know, I can't imagine this arc lasting all that much longer, which would be quite a disappointment given how we've been waiting for this arc for around five years.

                                                                                  Almost all of the tension to this point has surrounded drowning (the erupting volcano might be the only exception). From the adventure of sailing underwater to get to FI, to Hammond and his gang of sea monsters, to the crash landing entry to FI, to the flooding of the palace, the danger and tension has continuously come from the sea itself. It's what I'd expect, though, so I don't have a problem with it.

                                                                                  Luffy and Zoro just had a two year timeskip to get stronger in fights, so I'd expect them to totally outclass everyone who attempts to match up with them for a while. I wouldn't expect to see them struggle with strength until people like Usopp/Nami/Brook are upended first, so the danger and tension would need to come from somewhere else in the meantime. Luffy and Zoro will get worthy opponents eventually, and Oda wants to show them off until that comes.

                                                                                  This is a lot like Water 7 at this point, and the NFP are like the Franky Family. The Franky Family were absolutely no threat to the crew physically, but Oda created tension through losing the money. The NFP don't seem to be any threat either, but tension can be created through drowning.

                                                                                  I fully expect the outlook of the arc to be totally different after the flashback, so I don't dare to even pretend to see the end until I can see the twist that comes first.

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                                                                                  Crossword said it good about there being no real sense of danger. I think the only sense of danger right now is Zoro, Usopp, Brook, and Neptune being captured by the New Fishman Pirates at the moment. Vander Decken's first encounter with Luffy didn't give me a good impression of him and if it weren't for the water, I'd say Zoro would have defeated Hodi Jones (which is probably why the water was there). While I do like seeing how strong the SH are post-timeskip and seeing them oneshotting fodder, until they are forced to go all out, we won't know exactly how strong they are. Plus the oldest prince is already dealing with one of Hodi Jones's top crewmembers. When it comes to their subordintes so far, I'd say Vander Decken doesn't anyone that stands out as a threat and Hodi Jones has Hyozo (who's a mercenary first and a NFP pirate second). Maybe his other top crewmembers, but if one of the princes is already dealing with one of them, who knows? I think taking out the one Fukaboshi is fighting and Hyozo, there's only 3 top crewmembers of Hodi Jones and if the other 2 princes were to fight at least 2 of them…

                                                                                  I think this is my only complaint so far but I'll reserve judgment until the arc's over.

                                                                                  It's true that we don't have a good understanding of the crew's strength at the moment, but I think that's a good thing. Fights are frequently won when a character either reveals something new, or learns/creates something new. The option of revealing something new makes more sense in situations like reappearing after a timeskip, so Oda really needs to take advantage of it while he can. The crew will have to grow to succeed during their adventures in the New World for probably over 10 years of real time. Having a backlog of growth to call upon, however, is a situation with a few very limited chances.

                                                                                  At the beginning of the story, the interest came from wondering just how strong Luffy and Zoro were, rather than from wondering how they'd get stronger. It would make sense to follow the same pattern for the second half of the story.

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                                                                                    Decken and Hyozu seem to be the strongest so far this arc.
                                                                                    Of course there is no way to know how strong Jet Hammer is, but I imagine it is super powerful.

                                                                                    I think a double spread map would fix a lot of issues.

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                                                                                      Good points, Urouge. Especially on that Oda gives us maps that coincide with the crew's knowledge.

                                                                                      If thats his intent and reasoning behind it, I'm okay with it a little longer. They've had tour guides and taxis to get them everywhere so far… but with Hodi's goons taking over key locations and impending battles coming up and everyone escaping to different places, we really will need a better sense of it all soon.

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                                                                                          @RobbyBevard:

                                                                                          No preconceptions here, but you have an April 2011 join date. For how long have you been reading the series weekly? Just curious.

                                                                                          I’ve been reading weekly since the end of the Thriller Bark arc. And I really am impressed with this arc. I was expecting a typical arc where Oda introduces a single group of villains and the Strawhats beat them, but the current plot is a lot more involved than that. The setting has exceeded my expectations, I wasn’t expecting Franky to meet one of Tom’s relatives, Oda threw in another curve ball with Shirley’s prediction, and the Strawhats taking over the palace was a nice change of pace.

                                                                                          A lot of you guys are saying this arc lacks things like the Strawhats building the campfire at Skypea or shopping in Water 7, but they’ve already been to Camie’s house, rode the turtle elevator, swam with the Mermaids at the cove, visited the Mermaid Café, and went shopping at Pappug’s clothing store. They even took a taxi through the island and amicably talked about the candy factory and the genetics of fishman.

                                                                                          Some of you say you don’t care about the royal family or Jimbei, but did you really care about Gan Fall, the Shandians, or Conis much more? This flashback has already started off better than Skypea’s and there’s a lot more to look forward to afterwards.

                                                                                          It seems like Fishman Island isn’t meeting most of your expectations because the time-skip through everything off. But I, for one, think it’s a good thing that this arc is different from past arcs.

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                                                                                            Come on, it's obvious as hell that the second part of this huge arc will happen at Mariejoa. The princess, Caribou, VDD, Straw hats moving to the sea forest, all is setting up to get into the city.

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                                                                                              I'd love to see Mariejoa. If that were to happen, I think I'd like that. I know some hate rescue arcs but I don't mind One Piece's since saving Robin and Franky and trying to save Ace resulted in Luffy invading all 3 of the WG's strongholds in their special current.

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                                                                                                Mariejoa does seem pretty likely this arc. This is the only time the SH's are going to be in its vicinity for a long time, and this may be the only opportunity depending on where Oda plans to go with the manga once they reach Raftel. That would mean they'd have to fully introduce the Elder stars, among a lot of other people, which would definitely come across as strong villains as opposed to Decken and Hodi. For me I just at the moment can't really see why they'd choose to go there though. Some reason could be introduced at any time, but at the moment I don't see any reason for them to just nonchalantly decide to go there.

                                                                                                Something else with this arc, and with the entire post time skip in general is just the level of excitement everyone has to see everything that's changed. The full extent of all the SHs following their two years of training, who's in charge of the Marines, where and what all the other pirate crews in the series are up to. There's so much and a lot of it won't be flushed out for years, which just causes the anticipation to be constantly building.

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                                                                                                  I like how Oda mentions the names of ID prisoners for a reason and how it all makes sense.

                                                                                                  I am looking foward to see some revelations on Zoro's training and why his bounty went up.

                                                                                                  Oda is the master of hyping the shit out of you because I am dying of impatience to see Zoro's growth.

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                                                                                                    He can cut bigger stuff. Yeah.

                                                                                                    Who exactly is Mumbo?

                                                                                                    It's OFFICIAL, UsoppXNami 4ever.

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                                                                                                      I believe there must be a good reason why Oda keeps cutting Zoro's fights.

                                                                                                      It will be pretty awesome if Mihawk taught him Haki because it would make sense that Zoro asked his sensei how Rayliegh fought Kizaru.

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                                                                                                        @tatermoog:

                                                                                                        Interesting that Skypiea is used as a point of comparison. I'm currently working through that as well, and I would say Fishman Island is a sign of how he's grown as a writer. Yes, the developments of Skypiea were drawn out and there was more explanatory detail, but there's also a good deal of time devoted to dead-end characters, more space for concepts that just don't pan out (sure, I can understand the Monster Trio acclimating to the White-White Sea quickly, but Nami and Usopp? Why mention the troubles for Blue Sea dwellers if it didn't mean anything?), and a very lengthy flashback that, while touching in its own way, honestly didn't transform the world of One Piece that much. Plus 90% of the characters get his by EIGHTEEN BILLION VOLTS OF ELECTRICITY and end up fine.

                                                                                                        1)The breathing in the air thing makes sense scientifically. It's harder to breathe in higher altitudes, so it makes sense that it needs to be addressed. The fact that the crew got over it so quickly just showcases that the crew is not normal (like the shadow rule in Thriller Bark). It also explains why Calgara and co. were kicked off their land even though they were a race of warriors, since they had trouble adjusting to the altitude.

                                                                                                        2)The flashback was a perfect way to tie up everything within the story of Jaya/Skypiea together.
                                                                                                        It gave the importance of Luffy ringing the bell to ALL the characters in the arc.
                                                                                                        And it also has a few nuances that make the story more enjoyable to read. There was a lot of panels used just explaining how much the Skypieans like pumpkins. The fact that Norland was the one that gave pumpkins in the first place just adds more of a slap to their face.

                                                                                                        1. the not dying thing can be seen in any arc.

                                                                                                        @Alpha Male: Distrust is a good way to describe the fishman/human relationship. Maybe I'm just the minority, but I feel like there hasn't been enough view on the average citizen's take on the race issue to have a satisfying conclusion to the race issue, especially since all we've been seeing in the flashback is two extremes instead of how the Fishmen as a whole view human kind.

                                                                                                        The worldbuilding scenes in this arc seem…off in comparison to other arcs. It's there but it's not developed. I feel like the arc jumped into the action to quickly and it didn't really give the readers enough time to get a feel for the island, which is understandable given the chaotic situations they've constantly been in, but given the hype about the island it seems like a shame that we had to "rush" the relaxation scenes in the sense that we're still "lost".

                                                                                                        And as for the side characters. Shirahoshi and (maybe) Neptune were the only non-villains given characterization. Shirley so far was only shown as a plot device for the prediction, and we haven't seen nearly enough of the princes to get a feel for them.

                                                                                                        And Skypiea gave a lot of scenes on how the side characters feel about the situation. After the flashback we should have a better understanding of Jinbe. But side characters always tend to be hit or miss. (Amazon Lily is full of no personality characters. All the Shandians minus Laki and Wiper (maybe Kamikiri) weren't given depth. Gun Fall and Conis were given ncie characterization though.

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                                                                                                        Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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