Gypsy, if you weren't my co-writer and I didn't love you so much, you would be completely and utterly dead right now for that comment and mental image and the fact that you've quite possible just ruined the most epic fight that is to come in OP with said comment.
Baroque Works Disco Bar (Crack Filled.)
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What Skyrius said. (CAN'T… UNSEE. <__< ) All the same, I'm so tempted to put that in my sig, even though there's probably not enough room for it.
Also, I just want to say... to whoever posted that comic of Crocodile hopping on Whitebeard's shoulders and giving him a hug... THANKS. Because I can no longer look at that chapter the same way ever again.
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oh dear goodness. you are all certifiably head-over-heels insane.
THANK YOU, GYPSY'S BOOBSI see you found some inspiration in the picture thread : D
Loooooving this:happy:yeah!!! when i read that i immediately thought of your cottonstache. :wub:
and oh no why is BFF crying? :cwy: there there, don't be sad. here, have a Croc plushie! oh but then Shanks comes and drags me away to go salsa. sorry, BFF. have fun with your plushie?
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I can't even look at Akainu without also thinking of Britney Spears anymore. Dammit! I shouldn't have said anything. Although, why do I get the feeling that she would have come up with it sooner or later anyway?
sorry, BFF. have fun with your plushie?
Are you implying I would do something to this plushie? :ninja:
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Aokiji doing the worm. OMG. Cannot get the mental image out of my head AHAHAH so very much win XD And far less scary than, say, if Kizaru did it :O XD AHAHAHAH
Man, so much laughter, for srs XD hee hee hee i'm glad i'm caught up now. LOL I bet the Baroque Works Disco Bar is making a damn fortune off the drinks they're selling…...Someone should start charging admission to seeing such things as Akainu's kareoke XD LOLOLOL
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that should be the bouncer's job, right?
the entrance fee should be in the form of pictures.
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Ruining your outlook on characters? Causing Brittany Spears to be linked to One Piece? Getting death wishes sent for me, but blocked in seriousness simply due to how spectacular I am?
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! LATER, TOOLS!
GYPSY AWAYYYYYYYYYYY
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Ruining your outlook on characters? Causing Brittany Spears to be linked to One Piece?
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MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! LATER, TOOLS!
Well I almost choked to death on a liquid XD Both this and Trapped's…thank you note......damn you guys want me to die of laughter?!
Piratemarimo: What chapter is that you are talking about? I know it's during marineford but was wondering if you knew the number of the chapter? Also, both our questions were on the OP podcast =D This forum makes my day.
This is going to be one long night for the Baroque Works Disco Bar......
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You mean the chapter where Crocodile tries to attack Whitebeard? That's chapter 557.
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OH….MY......GOD.
HOW HAVE I NOT REALIZED UNTIL RIGHT NOW HOW EPIC AND AMAZING AND SPARKLY PERFECT AOKIJI X WHITEY BAY WOULD BE?!?!?!?!?!?I love Cake :wub:
Also... Brilliant mental images. brilliant mental images everywhere.
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Cake Fan = Coolest person on the thread.
See? Aokji and Whitey Bay are my OTP now. Since he knows that the sprinkler impresses her.
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QUICK. Give me a group to focus on. For some reason those make the best when I have a group.
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The Band, now looking for some post-gig action?
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I want a piggy back ride from shirtless Crocodile.
and I want to be head warden
What about the strawhats to focus on in honor of the new chapters? OR EVEN BETTER: THE FAKE STRAWHATS. -
Fake Straw Hat Chapter Is Next Hell Yes
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Is it ready yet ? Is it ? And Now ? And what about…now ?!
:P
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i demand to be F-Chopper's new best friend. not BFF, cause that's piratemarimo, but i want to be that adorable thing's friend.
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as long as the cucumber is in the story , it will be super special awesome :ninja:
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…............mette, was that on purpose or do you not have any idea?
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what do you think? :ninja:
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oh for crying out loud, stop talking about that thing!! i didn't even notice it at first read. mette you have corrupted my poor innocent mind. :getlost:
also, one short off-topic statement about the new chapter (cause i feel silly putting this in the manga thread):
warning: spoiler for 599
! ZORO REALLY LOST AN EYE NOOOOOOOOOO I LOVED HIS EYES :cwy:
! if the crack thread were still around we'd be doing a tribute to his eyes right now. and that would actually be on-topic.on-topic: i can't wait for the new chapter!
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Just be glad you aren't in the RoCho comm trapped.
It's eeeeverywhere.
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warning: spoiler for 599
! ZORO REALLY LOST AN EYE NOOOOOOOOOO I LOVED HIS EYES :cwy:
! if the crack thread were still around we'd be doing a tribute to his eyes right now. and that would actually be on-topic.Fully agreed here Trapped! We know how to be on topic sometime ;)
Back to THIS topic, fake SH crew would be awesome! We should all gang up on Fluffy (and Trapped can steal Fake chopper )
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I'm trying to pick who gets hit on or talks to what Fake Straw Hat.
You're all going to hate me.
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Me and Trapped can share Fake Chopper can't we? stares
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PART 16
The One Where Mia Learns to Be Careful What She Wishes For and Half the Readers Hate Me.
! …NIA’S NIGHT ISN’T GETTING BETTER BECAUSE FAKE LUFFY IS TRYING TO GET HER TO JOIN HIM ON HIS LAP. Nis is like: “No way dude, you look like if I shaved a gorilla then dibbed it into applesauce while singing ‘You’re Beautiful’ by James Blunt.” He gets really offended, but Fake Franky reassures him that she’s playing hard to get. He then goes to demonstrate how to properly hit on a lady by strutting over to LaCaSiNa who has changed tops. Her and Inazuma are delightfully chatting about clothing as Fake Franky stops in front of her.
! Taking her by the upper arm, he twirls her into his arms and wiggling his eyebrows seductively. Feeling the familiar taste of sick in the back of her throat, she stomps on his foot with full force. Howling in pain and mortification of not landing the dame, he storms off to his group. Fake Nami has left the table, and is pulling the end of skirt up flirtatiously to Cyber-Robin, who is just trying to get ice to nurse his whip burns he received from Sadi-Chan. Throwing a cringe to the red-headed phony, he walks off to his dates and warns Kidd and Bellamy about her as he goes. Pointing to her with his drink, they look at her to remember what face to avoid.
! Sadly, they’re blocked of the view by Shanks and Trapped, who have resumed their saucy tango around the room. After a final, fast clack of her red heels, she flips around to see a small fox under a barstool. It’s Fake Chopper, curled up under a ball under the seat of Fake Robin. Piratemarimo is seated next to them, and is cooing the fox on the floor. Trapped, who loves this adorable animal more than Shanks at the moment, dashes over to pet it as well. The two girls ask Fake Robin it’s name, but are horrified when they see that she is driving a pickle into her mouth trying to seduce Thatch. Thatch, who’s brain is broken beyond repair, is stunned at the sight of what he thinks is a lady beside him. I’m in need of my original date, and go to collect him, only to see the pickle. Both of us are stunned into a freeze, until shaken by Fake Zoro smashes the far end of the bar.
! Splinters of wood fly around the air, as he screams into the face of Jango. They’re screeching about who gets to dance with Mia. She has broken into a run away from them, Crocodile’s belt over her head. Spotting him singing with his now terrible mariachi band, she gets and idea. Shoving the belt between her lips, she decides to give it back to him, if he can get it back…with his teeth. A final dash to the stage proves pointless, because she sees MetaMario bellowing at the Fake Usopp: “YOU PUNK, YOU TOUCH ME AGAIN AND I’LL GO CARY GRANT ON YOUR FAT ASS.” While Fake Usopp is firing back with as much fury, as Real Zoro starts to get into his face, since he disrupted his drink. Mia settles on helping her two friends before getting any Crocodile action. Replacing the belt with her badass cigar, she starts over.
! Her cigar smoke starts floating over to ruin Fake Nami’s game, since she’s trying to now get Doflamingo. But he’s busy hopping around like some insane rave goer. Before he can start to mock the guitar that Crocodile is strumming, he is disrupted by Mihawk. He is like: “I NEED MY LOVE BACK.” And Doflamingo is like: “Who? Dude, just make her jealous.” This sparks Mihwak to go hit on the nearest female to Piratemarimo. He rules out Trapped, since she’s Shanks. Rules out Charmedward, since she’s preoccupied with Ace. This leaves Fake Robin the only other woman, and since I have dragged of Thatch to go party, the seat next to her is open… -
"I’LL GO CARY GRANT ON YOUR FAT ASS" Epic :3
Anyway, glad I wasn't there ! XDI guess…
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You're cuddling with Sabo. How's that? This was a hard part!
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“YOU PUNK, YOU TOUCH ME AGAIN AND I’LL GO CARY GRANT ON YOUR FAT ASS.”
i really like Meta. XD
and BFF is going to love that Mihawk is now trying to make her jealous to get back with him.
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Meta is a stud.
I love how I make everyone either drunk or really desperate for action. Gracious…
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This is hardly satisfying… Write me a lemon !
Kidding :D! (pm it…)
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PFFFFT Cucumber and poor Thatch's brain XD AHAHAHAHA there are too many gems in that to point out ROFL!!!! AHAHAHA bringing in the fakes was an excellent strategy LMAO!!
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BAHAHAHAH
I'M NOT SORRY OR REGRETFUL. NOT AT ALL. NOT EVEN A LITTLE BIT.Ohhhh, mariachi Crocodile…. How I would take pleasure in stealing your sombrero and tackling you to the ground for a sweet make out session. :wub:
oh, Mihawk. Such good intentions. Such ignorance on how to follow through on them.
I love you, Gypsy. You own my soul forever.
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Ohhhh, mariachi Crocodile…. How I would take pleasure in stealing your sombrero and tackling you to the ground for a sweet make out session. :wub:
Why does that inspire me? I should check my sanity level.
I love you, Gypsy. You own my soul forever.
Do souls look like pickles?
! DOUBLE REFERENCE
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You know. It kinda seemed silly that I wasn't the one going for Fake Robin or trying to pair her with Fake Chopper. What with me being that Robin (And RoCho) fanboy and all. And instead gave me Fake Nami who…well XD
Maybe cus I expected it to be more:
Me (looking from behind): ZOMG! IT'S ROBIN <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Cocoa (Fake Robin.): Yessssssssss
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Maybe cus I expected it to be more:
Me (looking from behind): ZOMG! IT'S ROBIN <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Cocoa (Fake Robin.): Yessssssssss
Me:…........................head explodesonce again, i love your conversations. and i would hate myself if that ever happened to me.
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Local, I don't hate you enough to make you go through a cucumber trauma.
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“No way dude, you look like if I shaved a gorilla then dibbed it into applesauce while singing ‘You’re Beautiful’ by James Blunt.”
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Due to an unnamed feedback message, I have to ask:
Do you guys dislike the block style, rant-like format of the story? And does it kind of bum you own that sometime you guys only get one line? I want to make you guys happy, so feedback like that is much loved.
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Uh.. yeah. Paragraphs would be nice. These days I'm getting annoyed reading block texts. It's not just this, but my overall mood right now makes me pissy and restless whenever I have to read things these days.
I still get the feeling you're trying to fit too much into one chapter even though the length is not that long. I don't know if the format would be suited for one-shot type chapters because it's all about the chaos, but perhaps that might work out better? Crack doesn't necessarily need a lot of people in the scene to make it cracky. Case in point: Croc + Dofla on a segway.
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Hm…that I understand. I've been meaning to try breaking it apart because it looks really messy and even I have trouble reading it when I proof. So, I'll start to do that. Sorry for doing that guys.
Perhaps...yeah. I can try that.
Edit: Okay. Broke the latest part up for the others. I'm going to try to stick to maybe a maximum of three characters each part. Is that fine?
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Paragraphs > Block text.
I don't mind if you just put one line in. I'd just rather be with chars that I'm huge fans like Robin, Chopper, Hina, Valentine, Sadi and Domino than ones like Nami and Vivi XD
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MetaMario bellowing at the Fake Usopp: “YOU PUNK, YOU TOUCH ME AGAIN AND I’LL GO CARY GRANT ON YOUR FAT ASS.”
You are a goddess. I am unworthy to be in your presence. bows down
Seriously, awesome stuff. XD
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Okay…okay...
I'm taking notes on all this. I don't want to disappoint! :)
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You should be writing for self-satisfication. That's the best way. I find it hard catering too much for other people when writing fics.
I've just came out of writing a 200 page RoCho fic simply cus it was what I wanted to do. People just contributed by the way it was a 'Choose-Your-Adventure.' fic. It's just so much easier to work like that than make sure everyone is happy ^_^ I'm sure we'll all love it anyways.
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Meta is a stud
This. I wade into this thread and it's the first thing I see…..
Gypsy, I've already given you my feedback on the chapter as a whole, but I don't mind only getting one/no lines. Actions speak louder then words ;) Obviously I know this is different for probably everyone else, but I don't really feel the urge to complain.
Blocks of text don't really bother me either, but I easily lose my place when scrolling down & reading and that kinda kills the crack a bit....
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We've been over how insecure I am about my writing, therefore I want to please.
But thank you, Local! 200 pages? Lordy…
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Taking notes? While I would love to request things for the story… the last time I did that, this happened:
There is going to a be the mega battle of the century between Luffy and Akainu…and you'll just picture him crumping the stars.
You killed me with that comment. Surely there's a limit to how many lives a person has. but whatever you do, please for THE LOVE OF GOD, don't put the meat-eating sheep from the chapter cover in this story. I just saw a trailer for Black Sheep that was linked in the manga thread and now I am literally terrified of sheep (except Going Merry).