Crocodile's Backstory (Fan-fic)

Chef Nate

Alright so I just thought up of what i think is a very cool backstory about the badass we all know and love Croc. I'm going to give you the premise about what happens instead full chapters about it, so you can give me some ideas or have criticism etc. =)

Alright this is a timeline i came up with

PART 1
-Crocodile is born into a normal middle-class family in a country in West Blue, it's a normal country with mild weather kind of like Goa.

-His relationship with family is loving and wonderful. His mother is kind and gentle and his dad strong a good-willed. He also has a little sister named Allie (reference to Alligator) giving her advice about life that he steals from his father and is amazing big brother to her. Crocodile always tried to imitate his father by smoking a cigar but was heavily scrutinized for it.

-His father was one of the crewman of a famous pirate ship and had managed to escape from Government detection for years, until the day of Crocodile's 11th birthday where the then Vice Admiral Kong shows up at their doorstep

-Apparently Crocodile's mother was warned about the possible arrival of marines by her husband, but wasn't sure when or where they would show up. She manages to grab and take away Allie hours prior to the marines coming and Crocodile was nowhere to be seen fishing in a nearby lake.

-The Marines take his father to their ship and Crocodile comes back home noticing no one is there. In the distance he sees his father being taken under arrest so he drops everything he has and chases after him, eventually being able to sneak on to the ship while it's on the way to Enies Lobby

-Crocodile desperately tries to find his father on the ship while hiding from the marines but fails and eventually is founded and taken to Kong who is talking to Crocodile's father.

-Crocodile screams at his dad, and his dad is seen crying with a grin on his face. Telling his son to live and to take control of the seas one day, Crocodile makes that promise while his father begs Kong for his son to be released. He compromises by knocking out Crocodile and dropping him on the nearest island the Winter Island Canata.

-Crocodile is screaming is in huge despair now that his family is gone and he is fully alone on this strange and unfamiliar island. His body feels weak and he tries to make it to the nearest village but his body collapses unable to move

-An old man walks the way and discovers the little boy crying by a small tree. He asks Crocodile what's wrong and he replies that he's alone and weak. The old man assumes Crocodile is hungry and reaches into his knapsack pulling out a fruit that he acquired from a strange shop and hands it to Crocodile.

END OF PART 1

Feedback on this timeline would be awesome :)

Chef Nate

PART 2- since i got so many comments -_- haha jk

-Crocodile eats the fruit and realizes his body had now turned into sand, the old man who gave him the fruit is appalled and shocked at this and quickly takes Crocodile into his home

-Crocodile is to emotionally destroyed over his loneliness and the death of his father that he doesn't seem to care nor realize of his new-found power, the old man gets worried that Crocodile will go around the town telling them that he gave him the fruit and he'd be in huge trouble

-The old man reveals his name which is Luigi-san and feebly attempts to try and comfort Crocodile but ultimately fails and eventually hits Crocodile with his fist and it passes through Crocodiles sand body, Crocodile then passes out.

Years pass with Crocodile in the care of Luigi, over the years Crocodile carried two ideas that he was going to put to fruition. To eventually go to sea back to his home island to discover the fate of his mother and sister, and to assemble a crew and conquer the seas During this time he was also training his Suna Suna no Mi powers without notice from the village

-When Crocodile reaches age 24 Luigi dies of old age, and now Crocodile is ready to set off back to his home. He takes Luigi's old caravel ship and sets sail wondering what could possibly await him

-After days at sea he finally recognizes his homeland and reminiscences his childhood life with his younger sister and family. He nearly cries at the possibility of seeing them again.

-He arrives home and finds that his younger sister Allie is amazingly alive and well. However his mother had been killed by the kingdom's nobles merely a day before his arrival. In a huge amount of anger he tells his sister to stay put and he storm's the castle of the nobles.

-With his sand abilities he kills everyone in the castle including the king as revenge for the death of his mother. Leaving a few witnesses.

-He arrives back to Allie feeling upset that he couldn't find their mothers body. She comforts him and he recalls the promise he made with his father, that he would conquer the seas.

-Allie informs him that the Pirat king Gol. D Roger was just executed and had left his treasure One Piece at the Grand Line. Crocodile then grins wide and tells Allie to come with him on his ship and that they would own the seas together, she is shocked but then agrees. Over the course of one week Crocodile assembled a large group of people who had hated the nobles and were thankful to Crocodile for getting rid of them, they then set sail for the Grand Line

END OF PART 2

I like writing thisssss :$

Chef Nate

PART 3

-Crocodile and his crew sail towards the Grand Line, conquering what they could of ever island and marine vessel that stood in their way. Crocodiles Suna Suna no Mi's powers were far to strong for anyone to possibly handle, and he gets himself bounty of 81,000,000 beli's

-He eventually reaches the New World where he crosses paths with the all powerful Whitebeard and his small pirate fleet during that time. Crocodile and Whitebeard's crews clash together with Whitebeard annihilating crocodiles crew….. even resulting in the death of Allie

-Crocodile is enraged and then quickly struck across the face with Whitebeards sharp Juttei. the trail of blood was straight across Crocodiles face reaching from ear to ear.

-Before passing out Whitebeard informs him that he is to weak but has the potential to change things so he lets him live for now. Whitebeard and his crew leave with Crocodile laying on the deck of his half-destroyed ship and dead crewmates.

-He wakes up but doesn't move and starts to cry for the first time in 12 years over the death of his sister and his crew. The world was hopeless and cruel to him now and he would give anything to wipe out the government and Whitebeard. He remembers the old story of Pluton and how it had to potential to destroy the world, he vows to find it someday.

-As he continues to lay on the deck weakened a letter dropped from a seagull lands in front of his hand from the World Government asking him if he wanted to become apart of the first order of Shichibukai.

-Crocodile puts on his famous grin, and throws out his memories of his father, his town, his mother, and his sister for the sake of finding Pluton and conquering the seas to make the world his way so that it will never be cruel to him again. And joining the World Government as much as he hated them, would make it easier to find what he needed.

END OF PART 3

END OF BACKSTORY

Chef Nate

Once again feedback would be awesome :D

Lurkeker

Nice idea! Crocodile looks like he was a pretty weepy kid, though. :P
Did you mention how he got his hook hand or how he decided that he wanted to become the Pirate King? (Because I think that part's canon).

Chef Nate

@Lurkeker:

Nice idea! Crocodile looks like he was a pretty weepy kid, though. :P
Did you mention how he got his hook hand or how he decided that he wanted to become the Pirate King? (Because I think that part's canon).

ohhh sheet, how the hell did i forget about the hook?!
And I guess with my whole thing about "Conquering the seas" it sorta meant the Pirate King really.

Imma brainstorm and come up with the hook backstory for tommorow :P :)