Alright so I just thought up of what i think is a very cool backstory about the badass we all know and love Croc. I'm going to give you the premise about what happens instead full chapters about it, so you can give me some ideas or have criticism etc.
Alright this is a timeline i came up with
-Crocodile is born into a normal middle-class family in a country in West Blue, it's a normal country with mild weather kind of like Goa.
-His relationship with family is loving and wonderful. His mother is kind and gentle and his dad strong a good-willed. He also has a little sister named Allie (reference to Alligator) giving her advice about life that he steals from his father and is amazing big brother to her. Crocodile always tried to imitate his father by smoking a cigar but was heavily scrutinized for it.
-His father was one of the crewman of a famous pirate ship and had managed to escape from Government detection for years, until the day of Crocodile's 11th birthday where the then Vice Admiral Kong shows up at their doorstep
-Apparently Crocodile's mother was warned about the possible arrival of marines by her husband, but wasn't sure when or where they would show up. She manages to grab and take away Allie hours prior to the marines coming and Crocodile was nowhere to be seen fishing in a nearby lake.
-The Marines take his father to their ship and Crocodile comes back home noticing no one is there. In the distance he sees his father being taken under arrest so he drops everything he has and chases after him, eventually being able to sneak on to the ship while it's on the way to Enies Lobby
-Crocodile desperately tries to find his father on the ship while hiding from the marines but fails and eventually is founded and taken to Kong who is talking to Crocodile's father.
-Crocodile screams at his dad, and his dad is seen crying with a grin on his face. Telling his son to live and to take control of the seas one day, Crocodile makes that promise while his father begs Kong for his son to be released. He compromises by knocking out Crocodile and dropping him on the nearest island the Winter Island Canata.
-Crocodile is screaming is in huge despair now that his family is gone and he is fully alone on this strange and unfamiliar island. His body feels weak and he tries to make it to the nearest village but his body collapses unable to move
-An old man walks the way and discovers the little boy crying by a small tree. He asks Crocodile what's wrong and he replies that he's alone and weak. The old man assumes Crocodile is hungry and reaches into his knapsack pulling out a fruit that he acquired from a strange shop and hands it to Crocodile.
END OF PART 1
Feedback on this timeline would be awesome