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      Yes I know there's a couple of these now but this one is the thread. So Episode 1's coming soon: what are your thoughts?

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        Didn't you quit or something?

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          @MarcelloF:

          Didn't you quit or something?

          To anyone who is intrested this is why I quit:

          Out of 10 reviews for the first episode 5 were negative, 3 were 50/50 and 2 were positive. Now lazily I thought why even bother try to improve the scripts so I quit amongst other personal reasons. But then I thought hang on lets make this work so I rejoined to do that and prove a few people wrong. Lets hope my plan pays off! And even if people don't like episode 1 fair enough but that won't stop me, you can't expect everyone to like what you do. I guess I'm like a Saiyan/Saiya-jin whenever I get weakned/recieve a bad review I get more stronger/funnier. If that makes any sense…

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            My response to the script on episode 2.

            I actually think its pretty good so far. I would give it about 9/10.

            Support One Piece in the UK! Buy One Piece on DVD from Manga Entertainment!

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                Episode 2 is in the "dark ages" of editing.

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                  @GoldenManga7:

                  TI guess I'm like a Saiyan/Saiya-jin whenever I get weakned/recieve a bad review I get more stronger/funnier. If that makes any sense…

                  If that was bragging, that's terrible. If that was attempt at humor, that's even worse.

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                    Where can I see this "first promo"?

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                      www.youtube.com/user/gpponepieceabridged
                      I know that was a terrible brag. I wasn't attempting to be funny (and don't worry that's not a upcoming joke) I thought I'd try and be clever with it but it sort of backfired.

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                        Hey man, your link is wrong. It's: http://www.youtube.com/user/GGPOnePieceAbridged

                        One Piece Unleashed_-_ Production Manager; Voice Actor for Monkey D. Luffy

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                          I liked it alot, nice work! Luffy's voice suits him just fine, I'm exited to hear the other voices.

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                            PROMO #2!

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                              Eh, it was alright. I'm not liking Luffy's voice though.

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                                5/10. Sounds about average. I can't judge till I see some eps, though. 😉

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                                  Luffy's voice is alright I guess. The jokes in this 2nd promo aren't bad but not all that funny either. I would recommend steering away from this "serious but then silly" method. It can easily backfire but I'm assuming you're just promoting the parody with that method and wont be doing the same with the series.

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                                    @Sketchor:

                                    Luffy's voice is alright I guess. The jokes in this 2nd promo aren't bad but not all that funny either. I would recommend steering away from this "serious but then silly" method. It can easily backfire but I'm assuming you're just promoting the parody with that method and wont be doing the same with the series.

                                    For the most part no but there will be moments, that I can promise. To be perfectly honest when I re-read the scripts the other night I didn't like them but then I read them again I realized I do but they're different in style I suppose to other abridged series. They're still funny but in a different style. It's like comparing Frasier and Friends, Fraiser is more clever humour whereas Friends for the most part is jokes that you get straight away. But they're equally funny but different. So our series will be a bit of obvious comedy, a bit of steering to silly, a bit of randomness and a mixture of other things. But I have a feeling this series will change over time, character traits will evolve well at least in my mind anyway.

                                    Also being from Britain our humour is very different to american comedy. For example over here we have a show called the royle family which used to be , not so much nowdays about a family sat on the sofa for a half an hour talking about turkey twizzlers. I don't think you'd get that in say the simpsons. So I think being british my humour will be very different.

                                    Sorry for rambling, hope you enjoy.

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                                      @GoldenManga7:

                                      For the most part no but there will be moments, that I can promise. To be perfectly honest when I re-read the scripts the other night I didn't like them but then I read them again I realized I do but they're different in style I suppose to other abridged series. They're still funny but in a different style. It's like comparing Frasier and Friends, Fraiser is more clever humour whereas Friends for the most part is jokes that you get straight away. But they're equally funny but different. So our series will be a bit of obvious comedy, a bit of steering to silly, a bit of randomness and a mixture of other things. But I have a feeling this series will change over time, character traits will evolve well at least in my mind anyway.

                                      Also being from Britain our humour is very different to american comedy. For example over here we have a show called the royle family which used to be , not so much nowdays about a family sat on the sofa for a half an hour talking about turkey twizzlers. I don't think you'd get that in say the simpsons. So I think being british my humour will be very different.

                                      Sorry for rambling, hope you enjoy.

                                      I love the Royle Family :wub:

                                      EDIT: I guess I'd better say something on topic here. I thought Promo 1 was great but I just watched the 2nd one and thought it was just average really

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                                        Bizarro has sadly dropped out of the project, he'll be missed and I'd like to thank him for everything he's done.

                                        Now expect a reboot… Watch this space.

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                                          @GoldenManga7:

                                          Bizarro has sadly dropped out of the project, he'll be missed and I'd like to thank him for everything he's done.

                                          Now expect a reboot… Watch this space.

                                          Actually, I'm still in 👅

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                                            @Sketchor:

                                            Luffy's voice is alright I guess. The jokes in this 2nd promo aren't bad but not all that funny either. I would recommend steering away from this "serious but then silly" method. It can easily backfire but I'm assuming you're just promoting the parody with that method and wont be doing the same with the series.

                                            Yeah, I've been using that mainly just for the promos.

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                                              Yeah you heard it here first, biz is back. Dam I wish I could have a short thing, like gold or goldie, right that's it call me:

                                              Goldie, oh wait I already said that.

                                              Anyways I've been entrusted with editing another One Piece Abridged series and a Doctor Who one. Speaking of which would anyone be intrested in voicing characters for the latter?

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                                                Dr. Who… Abridged?

                                                I presume you'll be using the animated version?

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                                                  Nope we're giving it a shot with the real thing, the revived series and seeing how it pans out.

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                                                    You should really release the episode soon, so people can judge it better..

                                                    So far I think the problem is the way your taking this. Watch Yu-Gi-Oh! Abridged. You can tell that LK was having fun and not taking it entirely serious. You, on the other hand, are making promos for it , as if you are going to earn money with it and thats the only important thing. Take it less serious and just have fun, and it'll help. It won't make a it a sure thing that its good, though.. This is of course just my opinion..

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                                                      Thanks for the advice. Well I knew it anyway but I find it harder because it's harder for me to have fun hwen I'm pressured to make it good. I script edited another episode 1 script and I think you could tell I had fun writing it. Same applies for my Doctor Who abridged.

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                                                        Yay birthday today.

                                                        Now to go write another script.

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