Inabikari

[600_Followers]

This is the first chapter of a shonen manga style novel I made called Inabikari about a simpleminded and weak lightning mage named Moonlight, who dreams of going on an adventure around the world with friends to accompany him. One Piece and the MOTHER/EarthBound video game series are my inspiration when writing the story and creating the characters. The first chapter is quite long (about 7,731 words), so you'll probably need a lot of time in your hands to read it in one go.
I thought the chapter was too long to even put under a Hidden box.

http://bluelink826.deviantart.com/art/Inabikari-CH-1-132751287

[Kaimana]

wow it took me forever to read i but it was sooo awesome love it super cool and moonlight is funny "moonlight you idiot do something" that made me laugh and cry my eye balls out

[600_Followers]

Oh wow, thank you…even though you're banned. XD

[supa ninja]

lol i read some of it as in like uhh well the point is i got the main story oh oh! you know what you should do get in touch with a manga artist and make it a manga then BAM!! win a award then BAM become rich then BAM! then BOOOOOOOM!!! your famous just like oda and kishimoto and kubo and lil ol me…........im just kidding im not famous but i will be once i create the best thing in the whole wide world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:D

[600_Followers]

LOL I just make this story for fun, I don't want to publish it or make it into a manga. =] This is just a good novel with a story similar to One Piece (which I realized when I finished and read the first chapter). But after chapter 2 (which also has a One Piece-ish story), I'm going to try to give this novel a far more unique feel so it wouldn't seem too much like One Piece.

[supa ninja]

you should make a different story then send it to some one just a suggestion =]