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      WickedMissy
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      Disclaimer : I don't own One piece.. (But trust me.. I hope I do)
      Nami
      I rushed a look at one of my drawers, and I knew what I needed.. what I needed was Ahem! Lingeries..means gotta go alone.. and saying 'alone'.. it's hard being invisible on this freaking ship.
      “Going out?” Robin pointed a question at me from her position; by the door.
      “Yep gotta shop for these” I said waving one of my panties in the air. She just smiled with her understanding nature which soothed me so much!
      “Need privacy?” she asked observing her nails.
      I just nodded with a grin. How can she be so understanding!!
      “It's kinda dangerous on that island so take care Nami-chan.” she stated before she left.
      I made my way to the grassy surface of 'sunny', the usual scene played itself; the boys running around in circles.. Zoro laying around.. and Sanji-kun..well he's serving drinks to us ladies!
      “Nami-san ~ can I accompany you shopping?”
      a firm 'NO' shushed him up! I went to my room to get my purse, well just when I did so I heard a knock on my door.. it was Luffy..
      “I'll come with you!” he said already determined.
      “You can't Luffy..”
      “Why not?”
      “It's a ladies-thing”
      his mouth went to the shape of 'O' then said “It's dangerous to be by your own on pirates Isle” well.. he had a point there..but..I 'll just give up .. not like I can win to a determined Luffy.
      “alright then.. You can stick up to me!”
      –------------------------
      I am standing in front of the boutique staring at the mannequin, poor Luffy didn't seem interested he was just staring down at his sandals innocently.
      So here I go! Luffy followed me everywhere! He even cracked me up when he thought the bra I bought was sunglasses!and the lady at the shop wasn't the least bothered. She actually laughed too!
      “Thanks ma'am!” I was satisfied with what I bought..
      But seems like someone wasn't satisfied“So now let's go eat somewhere!”
      ..
      “Table for two!” I said to the waitress when we reached the Restaurant.
      “Follow me Ma'am..” she said shooting a glance at Luffy.
      Well... and we ordered .. The usual things for Luffy.. I got minestrone soup which is now steaming in front of me. I took sips so slowly because I was busy staring at Luffy.. he was stuffing himself like a starving pig..I wonder how big is his stomach.. it's funny that am never embarrassed of how he looks!
      “Since Captain knows a lot about his Navigator..”I started “Can't Navigator know about Captain as well?”
      “Eh? Like what?” he gave me an odd look, took another bite then said “Yow cwld awsk awnd I wiw answew!” which means 'You could ask and I'll answer'
      “alright then.. tell me about your childhood.”
      “Child who?” he raised an eyebrow as if I was speaking some other language
      “I mean when you were a child.. what was it like? Was your mom nice? What did she cook for you?”
      “Mm.. I dunno.. I never saw mom .. she died before I could see her” he said as cheerfully as he was before.
      “And your father?”
      to my surprise he laughed “Well he left before I was even born!.. he left mom and Ace alone .. then when mom died. Gramps took care of us! But he was so MEAAN!”
      he giggled to a memory he had in mind “But he also then left to the Navy! And Ace left later too..OH then I saw Shanks.. come to think about it.. he also left..” the last part sounded like he was thinking to himself. “ so ya know I left later to find Zoro,You, Usopp, Sanji, Robin, Chopper, Franky, Brook!”
      “I see.. it must've been painful not to see any of your parents…” I cut off ignoring the last thing he said.
      Guess what did this carefree guy said?
      “Nah .. I didn't know them anyway so it's fine!”
      I was just staring at him disbelievingly! Wow he's a really tough guy!
      “i guess you're like a mom! cause.. most of the time you're mean to us because you worry tooo much!”
      I giggled when he toned the 'tooooo much' part.. I tried to hard to recover fast “No.. Luffy!.. it's like am a disgrace to worldwide mom's! Mother's duty is way more than this.. She comfort her kids.. give 'em a goodnight kiss on their foreheads.. oh and She give them their food even if she's starving!”
      “That's sounds awesome! I want a mom to join our crew!”
      “Not any person can be your mom except you mom dummy!” I yelled! But it sounded mean!
      “ ohhh.. but I can't see my mom!”
      “me too Luffy..” I thought of something to cheer him up.. “ we can make Robin act like she's our mom tomorrow!”
      “YAY! Cool!”
      “yep let's go already..” I stood up after I gave the waitress her money and Luffy.. well he followed in silence because he had something in mind .
      “Nami ..what are these glasses for?” he asked referring to my brand new bras “Can I use them?”
      Seriously! How does his shitty brains work?
      END
      hope you like it! .
      please R&R~
      thanks! And sorry for wasting you time!
      _**do you like this little fic of miine? 😁

      WickedMissy
      here's a link of my story on fanfiction.com
      http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5157674/1/Essentials**_

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        Palochka
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        Even though it's fanfiction, it deserves to adhere to the standards of the English language. I know I'm being nitpicky considering the probable target audience (to which I clearly was not), but I would've appreciated at least allusions to a formal presentation.

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          @Palochka:

          Even though it's fanfiction, it deserves to adhere to the standards of the English language. I know I'm being nitpicky considering the probable target audience (to which I clearly was not), but I would've appreciated at least allusions to a formal presentation.

          yeppz am sorry 😊
          English ain't my first language
          Grammar is my weak point..
          :sad:
          Consider the plot pweez 😆

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