Supremely bogus by Kuro.
Great story Monkey.
My One Piece Story
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Wow….good!!!
Very evul from Kuro.... very, very good... :lol:
I just can't wait 'till the next chapter...
Speachless...
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Great work…I wanted to comment after the first story but I couldn't stop reading lol :lol:
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you need more commenting My man… your the next Oda :lol:
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It's good to have both Akeisha and you back here, dude… Arlong Park have missed you guys greatly...
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The Happiness Of The Past! Tokiya's Memories (Part 11)
Team Usopp and Chopper
Usopp and Chopper keeps staring at Tokiya's chest
Usopp: Is that…. What I think it is?
Chopper: Well, anyway he needs to be treated...
Chopper opens his first-aid kit and pulls out several bottles and bandages
Chopper: I wonder what he knows of your father?
Usopp: Yeah.....
Usopp and Chopper: Hm?
The both of them looks up at the sky
Usopp: I just felt...
Chopper: .... Luffy's in trouble
Chopper: W-what am I thinking of? Luffy is strong! He wouldn't die so easily...
Usopp: H-hahaha! Yeah! We must be imagining things!
Usopp sits down and watches Chopper treat Tokiya's wound
Team Nami, Vivi, and Robin
Nami: Hm?
Vivi: What's wrong, Nami?
Nami: I don't know but somehow I feel Luffy's in trouble...
Vivi: To be honest, I felt that too...
Robin: I felt that as well...
Vivi: I hope he's alright...
Nami clutches her fist
Nami: (Luffy..)
Team Luffy and Karu
Karu keeps slapping Luffy's face silly
Karu: QUAK!!!
Luffy: ................
Luffy clutches his fist
Luffy: Err.....
Luffy slowly gets up
Luffy: Yawn.... That was a great naaaaappppp~~~! XD
Karu: Quak?
Luffy: Mornin' Karu! Haaahahahaha!!
Karu: Quak!
Luffy: Now let's--
Luffy's chest ached badly
Luffy: ??!!!
Luffy holds it tightly
Luffy: W-what the... W-what's wrong with me?
Luffy's vision becomes blurly
Luffy: I ate meat this morning, I should be fine....
Luffy slowly gets back up
Luffy: Alright! Let's get going, Karu!
Karu looks at Luffy
Karu: Quak!
Luffy and Karu continues walking upwards
Team Usopp and Chopper
Usopp: It's looks he's coming to...
Tokiya: Argh......
Chopper: Give him some space....
Tokiya slowly gets up and looks around him
Tokiya: Ouch!
Tokiya touches his right arm
Usopp: Don't move so much... You're not exactly completely healed right now..
Tokiya: You... Treated me?
Chopper: We couldn't just leave you like that.....
Tokiya: Thank you.....
Tokiya picks up his sword and closes his eyes
Tokiya: Seat....
Usopp and Chopper look at each other and sits down on the nearest rock
Tokiya: As promised, I shall tell you what I know of your father...
Tokiya opens his eyes
Tokiya notices that Usopp keeps staring at his chest
Tokiya: Hahaha... You're most probably wondering where or why I got this tatoo and scar on my chest well... I guess it's best to start at the very beginning...
Tokiya: A long time ago, when I was still in training.... Your father and his friends came to my village to buy some wine....
Tokiya flashback
-Tokiya walks into the bar and sees Shanks' crew having a good time-
-Tokiya waks towards Yassop-
-Tokiya: Mind if I sit?-
-Yassop: Haahaha!!! No problem at all!!!! Come, join me for a drink!!!-
-Tokiya: Alright!-
-Everyone drinks and laugh-
Flashback over
Tokiya: I was so happy back then.... Your father was a real nice guy...
Tokiya: One day, I decided to join Shanks crew.... I loved the sea....
Usopp and Chopper both smile
Tokiya: Hm?
Tokiya: Something coming!
Usopp: Huh?
Chopper's ear wingles a bit
Chopper: I-I can hear something coming!
Rumble
BANG~!!!!!
A giant lizard comes out running towards them
Usopp and Chopper: AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Tokiya: (Yasopp, this is for what you have done for me...)
Tokiya draws out his blade and runs towards the giant lizard
Tokiya: YAHHHHHH!!!!![To Be Continued]
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Wow! :ohmy:
Another great story!!!XD
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Thought I was never going to write stories again, huh? Got a promise to keep with Thedevil and finish what I started. It'll be a while before I come up with something due to all the hussle I deal with. So for those of you who did/didn't like my stories, I'M BACK!:biggrin:
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Ok, sorry for the delay not that anyone waited :urg: so… Anyway, here you go.. title sounds off to me.. whaddaya think?
Escape the Marines! Yasopp helps Tokiya (Part 12)
Tokiya runs towards the Giant Lizard
Tokiya: YAH!
Tokiya jumps up high, ready to strike
Tokiya: (Yasopp...)
Flashback
-Tokiya is seen running away from the Marines-
-Tokiya: I'm innocent!! Why won't you believe me?!-
-A Marine shoots him in the shoulder-
-Tokiya: Gah!-
-Marine Man: Believe you? We don't have time to hear dirty lies from a villian...-
-Tokiya: I did not murder your captain! I've been framed!!!-
-Marine Man: Yeah, right! KILL HIM!-
-The Marines take aim and Tokiya looks up and closes his eyes-
-BANG!!! BANG!! BANG!!! BANG!!!-
-Tokiya slowly opens his eyes and sees the entire Marines taken by Yasopp-
-Yasopp gives him a thumbs up-
-Yasopp: Yo!-
-Tokiya: Yasopp..-
-Yasopp: Come on, let's get outta here!-
-Tokiya runs after Yasopp as he leads the way-
-Yasopp: My crew and me knows you're innocent. We're gonna help you escape this island.. Besides, the bar ran outta booze.. HAHAHAAHA!! :laugh: -
-Marine Mens: DAMN YOU PIRATE SCUM!!!-
-Yasopp: I love my life!! HAAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!-
-Yasopp and Tokiya runs out in the open and find themselves surrounded by the Marines-
-Tokiya: Crap!-
-Yasoop: Hey! Don't mind us we're just passing through.. Got a boat to catch..-
-Marine Man: STOP HIM AND THAT MURDERER!!!-
-The words had a strong impact on Tokiya-
-Tokiya: Murderer....-
-Yasopp: Don't listen to him.. the Marines aren't exactly saints as well.. Sometimes, they can be even more evil than me... HAHAHAHAHAHA!!-
-Marines take aim and fire at Yasopp-
-Tokiya: YASOPP!!!-
-Yasopp smiles-
-Yasopp: inhales-
-Yasopp takes his guns swiftly and starts spinning them around his body, DEFLECTING the bullets and sending them right back at the Marines-
-Yasopp: exhales-
-Yasopp: Well, that was boring.. I didn't even get to use my guns..-
-Tokiya is amazed at Yasopp incredible skills-
-Tokiya: How.. Did..-
-Yasopp: Questions later.. Let's get outta here first then we talk-
-Shanks: HEY~~!!!-
-Shanks is in the boat waving at them from a distance-
-Yasopp: Great timing Capt!!-
-Shanks: What'd you expect? Nice show you put on dealing with the Marines.. All wounded but not a single one dead.. You're getting better..-
-Tokiya: What!?-
-Tokiya looks around him and sees Shanks was right.. ALL the Marines were wounded by the shoulder and sides but they were all alive-
-Yasopp: Come on!-
-Tokiya: Ah! Yeah!-
-Yasopp and Tokiya makes a run for the docks-
-They both jump once they reached the docks and landed safely on the ship-
-Shanks: Alright, full speed men!-
-Shanks looks at the Marines-
-Shanks: Tell the bartender his food was delicious!!! HAHAHAHAHA!! :laugh: -
-Marines: Arghhh...... -
-Shanks and his men laughs as they sail away-
Flashback over
Tokiya tries to cut the Giant Lizard but finds it's skin too thick to cut
Tokiya: (NOT good... I can't hurt the monster at all.. I can't believe Kuro was able to kill 3 of these things at once..)
Tokiya recalls Kuro being attacked while he was observing Luffy's crew
Tokiya: (Usopp MUST not meet Kuro... He's gotten stronger and also has been restored to his original speed)
The Giant Lizard heads for Usopp and Chopper
Usopp and Chopper: :blink: AHHHH~~!!!!
Tokiya: NO!
Tokiya runs towards thier position
Tokiya: (Yasopp! I won't let anything happen to your son or his friends!!)
Tokiya pushes them out of the way only to get himself crashed by the Giant Lizard's massive paw/claw
Usopp: TOKIYA!!
Chopper: No!
Tokiya: Usopp... You.. Must.. Live.. With your.. Friends..
Usopp and Chopper runs to him
Tokiya barely alive looks at them
Tokiya: Run.. Leave me...
Usopp: No way!
Usopp pats Chopper's head
Usopp: Chopper can stay here with you while I run..
Chopper and Tokiya: SCREW YOU!!!
Usopp: We still won't leave you!! Chopper! Help me carry him!
Chopper: Got it!
Chopper goes into Heavy Point and carries Tokiya's upper body part while Usopp carries the lower part
The Giant Lizard runs towards them
Usopp: Crap!
Chopper: We can't outrun that!
Tokiya: And I've... Given you guys a beating just now... sigh
Chopper: Don't speak!
A Man runs outta nowhere
Man: AHHHHH~!!!!
Usopp: What's his problem?
Tokiya: He's.. He's one of Kuro's men!
Chopper: The Giant Lizard's here! What's he running away from?
Zoro and Sanji busts out of the bushes
Usopp: TWO BIGGER MONSTERS :blink:
Zoro: Usopp?
Sanji: Chopper? And someone else...
Tokiya: Name's Tokiya...
The Giant Lizard roars and charges towards them
Sanji: Think he makes a better tie-breaker?
Zoro: Yep...
Sanji and Zoro looks at the Giant Lizard, then at each other and grins
Sanji and Zoro: (I'M NOT GONNA LET YOU WIN!!) :yatta:[To Be Continued]
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Ok… An entire day passed by and not even a single comment on my stories... This is sad, man... I need to know whether you guys like it or not you know... If it's bad, I can push myself to be a more creative and better writer here... So, it can't exactly hurt to give me a few points now can it? This stuff ain't exactly easy to come up...
p.s: I'M SO NOT SPAMMING THIS STORY FOR FUN.... I'M SERIOUS HERE..
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you spelled gomu wrong. Also this smiley :yatta: doesnt seem right at the end. IMO
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Whoops.. You're right.. And as for the smiley.. I was actually trying to find a grinning one.. I need more comments people… HIT ME, BABY!
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Wow! It's great! I love it! When's the next chapter coming?
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Whoops.. You're right.. And as for the smiley.. I was actually trying to find a grinning one.. I need more comments people… HIT ME, BABY!
yeah another chapter might help. I also kinda want to know what happens with karoo and luffy.
