can someone plzz read and comment about my new fanfic, one piece a different story. i have so many ideas and it seems like no one is commenting
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After reading it, I have a few things to say…
1. This thread is in the wrong section.
2. It has horrid grammar.
3. You said that you have "many ideas." The problem here is instead of just having "ideas" you need to make sure that they are "good ideas." The story was completely void of those. -
well they are good ideas
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i hope your writing skills are better than your thread making skills
 