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Akira

I'd thought that I'd be a nice person and create a thread about where people can post poems (What a shocker) or any other things that they want. Feel free to discuss about theses things.

Tribute that my friend (Alias : MochaCube) did for me…I didn't write this one.

"Offline Madness"

You go offline, my eyes water like i just had bad wine, but now its time for me to shine in the hizzle ya hear? Dats right dog, my eyes i see smog.. lol his head looks like one of a frog. I like to play pong, but my joy stick is just to long...to use, except when i plug in the fuse ya hear? I flew over the school in a canoe and while in flight i witnessed a mule actin like a fool aight, then I yelled boo! My lace is all over the place as if i made a bad rap song and they sprayed me with mayce, but jayce the ace destroyed all the mace before it could get to me. Ya dig

Here's mine.

Throw down those textbooks!
Close up that binder!
Raise the flag for freedom
Rebellion is the new "In" style
Before you march for freedom
You remember her
That feeling runs down your spine
Ever so slightly
You drop to your knees
Curled up in a ball, whimpering
Like a lost puppy dog, Thinking
"Why did she leave me? Did I not treat her good enough?"
Those words run through your mind
Like everlasting darkness taking form, Slapping
You in the face with a glove
As you wake up, you remember your task, shaking it off.
We rise up , for freedom!
The anti-rule establishment starts
Now.

Your poem was alright, you could have chosen more descriptive words or rhyming or something unique.

terri

My (ex)boyfriend just recently broke up with me and I kind of felt that this poem represents how I kind of felt during the time.
Just change the she to a he, and the her to a him :P

Farewell
by: http://manga.clone-army.org/index.php
(Note: I'd only go to that site if you were 18+, there are a lot of explicit adult material, however, if you feel that you can bear it, then go ahead and go, but don't say I didn't warn you.)

And then she turned around
and smiled at me.
she always told me
that I was the only one
who could make her smile.
It was only after she was gone
that I realized her smile
had always been a sad one.

somehow, I could only hurt her.
somehow, she could only hurt me.
so we decided
to never see each other again.
and if that hurt us both
maybe that's proof
of something
called love…

oceanizer

(Hey, Naru's Guy, welcome back.)

I'm a no poet, so I'll just share the one I like.
http://www.poedecoder.com/Qrisse/works/annabel.html

It's "Annabel Lee" by Edgar Alan Poe. I wonder if I could love a person this passionately.

JudasChrist

Nice thread…Well I have a small thingie i've written maaaaaaany months ago... well here goes nothing.

CHAMELEON
The transformation of the butterfly occurs in reverse
Beaty, eaten abruptly, by the ancient worm

When in the icy peaks of the moon I hunt,
With the frenzy of the white wolf,
To stare into my own companions I can't
Cause they remain a prey

And when the sun appears before me
I raise my spear with fury
So I can stab him in the heart
And feed my sons not bury

And in the city of the screaming statues
I am their father, their mother and son
With their mouths open wide and cold
They come to eat my sun

Frozen and bloody I now lay in the snow
With a pack of wolves feastin on my chest
For I was the greatest hunter of them all
And now my spear can rest

And like a butterfly I was,
I flew and now I lay
But now I know I can't be saved
I can't forever pray
Cause for once in life I understand
Now in my final day
I can be killed, I can get hurt,
cause the hunter is the prey.

Akira

I just thought of this one like 10 minutes ago.

Here I go, The bell rings
Sending me straight to hell's gates.
I walk in, Machines looking over at me
Gawking…Staring at me with blank faces.
I think of something funny, and not let it phase
My self-image.
The clocks whirl by like a tornado
Never ending, always dangerous.
It's break time, Time to sit alone
Thinking on why I can't be with someone
I just have to sit by my lonesome.
I leave, Come home and think
Think about the misfortune.
Think about the hatred
Think about the Lonleness.
I still wonder If I should end it all right now
But I realize, There's always tommorow.