Anyway like always I would REALY like your opinion and critics. Please be harsh on me
this is really nice, but one thing- you might want to practice inking.
inking confidently is a big deal. some of the strands/groups of hair in that picture have lines that are kind of sketchy or wobbly, so it's a little inconsistent. you might want to practice some harder, quicker, more direct strokes.
another random art tip- practice line width variation. if the outer outline of a drawing is a little thicker than the rest of the picture, it draws things together, and if you work at it enough, you can make parts of a drawing look nearer or further away just by how thick their outline is.
hope that made sense, haha