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    • dirt monkey AL
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      Seeing as I've taken a great liking to writing drabbles recently, I'm going to start posting my drabbles here. I'm not going to repost any drabbles I've done in other sites though because I'm just that lazy. And if you can't tell, yes, Skypiea's been on my mind lately.

      So here.

      Golden Peony

      When the first rays broke through the murky storm clouds, Nami was blinded, and she raised an arm above her eyes to see clearly. It seemed as if Luffy had created a giant hole in the sky to allow radiance through.

      The massive shaft extended downwards, encompassing the entire White White Sea.

      Everything seemed to glitter.

      With the coming of the abrupt light, the aches of her body lifted away, and she was numb with incredulity and awe.

      She had forgotten that it wasn’t night, but the middle of the day.

      There was a sun even above the darkest clouds.

      Originally Posted by Silence

      And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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      • dirt monkey AL
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        Since no one reviewed, I'm just going to double post for this drabble.

        Dragon

        Little Luffy found a box in the closet.

        In it was a big pair of shoes.

        This confused Luffy. He was certain that these things had never been in the hall closet.

        Once he stuck his feet inside, they felt humid as if they had recently been worn. Comparing the length to his own shoes revealed to him that the owner had feet about four times his size.

        Years later, when his feet fit, he considered taking the not-so big pair of shoes with him on his adventure.

        However, Monkey D. Luffy just wanted to fill his own large shoes.

        Originally Posted by Silence

        And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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        • beautifuldreamer1289
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          oooo… thats so cool... i REALLY liked the dragon one! it took me a while to get, but then I read the title XD.

          <3 hoffy for the sig

          "You hold your future in your own hands. Never waver in this belief." -Sir Frederick Treves

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          • dirt monkey AL
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            XP I thought it was pretty obvious really. Someone else didn't get it either, and I had to explain the idea behind it - which kind of ruins it a bit, but still.

            Originally Posted by Silence

            And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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            • beautifuldreamer1289
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              lol. the reason i didn't get it was cuz i sorta ignored the title… lol. but then i saw it and was like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH i get it lol. write more! ❤

              <3 hoffy for the sig

              "You hold your future in your own hands. Never waver in this belief." -Sir Frederick Treves

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                • dirt monkey AL
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                  Since they couldn't box common sense …

                  Zoro's Birthday Gift

                  “I don’t think that’ll help,” Luffy said, squinting at it.

                  Frowning, Nami wrapped her hand around it, and said, “It has a better chance of helping him find his way than his own intuition.”

                  “But he can’t use it in the Grand Line,” Usopp said.

                  “It keeps spinning,” Chopper said.

                  “Shit for brains isn’t worth the extra pocket change in my opinion. Nami-san shouldn’t’ve bothered wasting it on the simpleton.”

                  Robin smiled, “He might like it though.”

                  “Would he even know how to use a compass?” Franky asked.

                  Lowering his head, Zoro’s cheeks burned, “I can hear you guys …!”

                  Originally Posted by Silence

                  And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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                  • beautifuldreamer1289
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                    LOL!!!! that's BRILLIANT!!! XD

                    oh, and I don't get your sig. explain?

                    <3 hoffy for the sig

                    "You hold your future in your own hands. Never waver in this belief." -Sir Frederick Treves

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                      Very cool! I like the first one most, dunno why. It had a very cool atmosphere.
                      the last one is just cool and fits great to the characters!

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                        @beautifuldreamer1289:

                        LOL!!!! that's BRILLIANT!!! XD

                        oh, and I don't get your sig. explain?

                        … Uh, which signature was it? The one with Luffy saying "Chopper, I choose you!"?

                        Originally Posted by Silence

                        And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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                        • beautifuldreamer1289
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                          well yes, but there was a quote under that pic that I didn't understand… <_<

                          <3 hoffy for the sig

                          "You hold your future in your own hands. Never waver in this belief." -Sir Frederick Treves

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                            @beautifuldreamer1289:

                            well yes, but there was a quote under that pic that I didn't understand… <_<

                            It said something like … "It's not a holiday, and it's not (some festival or other), so why is my brother-in-law kissing me?"

                            I just immediately assumed it was a man saying this, so yeah. Which is probably actually the case.

                            Originally Posted by Silence

                            And when this manga closes out, and Luffy's arm stretches back to deliver that last punch, I wanna feel the crunch of the dream coming true.

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                              @dirt:

                              It said something like … "It's not a holiday, and it's not (some festival or other), so why is my brother-in-law kissing me?"

                              I just immediately assumed it was a man saying this, so yeah. Which is probably actually the case.

                              yeah yeah, that one. I didn't really get it though… like, is there a point? lol maybe I'm just being stupid XD

                              <3 hoffy for the sig

                              "You hold your future in your own hands. Never waver in this belief." -Sir Frederick Treves

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