Zoro VS. Mihawk (Fan-Fiction)

[jmbjr]

Well, I've decided to start my first fan-fiction! This is basically how I think the final Zoro VS. Mihawk battle will be like. I'm doing this under the impression that Zoro will get a new sword before he fights, and that Brooke joins, just so ya know. So here's part one:

Part 1: Mihawk approaches

It was a warm, sunny day in the Grand Line. The Strawhat crew were doing what they normally did; Luffy and Chopper were watching Brooke and Franky play their instruments in a mini-concert; Nami was finishing up a map; Usopp was working on a new weapon; Sanji started to cook dinner; Robin was reading a history book; and Zoro was lifting weights that an ordinary man would never dream of even moving.

Then, Luffy looked away from Franky and Brooke for just a second, and noticed a Marine ship, twice the size of the Thousand Sunny, heading straight towards them, cannons ready to fire.

"Oi! Marines!", Luffy shouted, and the crew rushed down to the deck preparing to fight.

"Load the cannons, Usopp!", commanded Luffy. Usopp nodded and rushed to the cannons.

"Argh, why now!", yelled Nami, who was nearly done with her map when the announcement came.

"Don't worry Nami-swan! We'll finish them off quickly!" assured Sanji.

The ship was getting closer and closer. Soon, the ships were right next to each other.

"Ready? 3…2...1...FI-" Nami was interrupted by several loud slicing sounds. Suddenly, the Marine ship was split into several large pieces.

"What the...Brooke, was that you?" Nami asked, but Brooke shook his head.

"Zoro?" She asked, but Zoro wasn't listening. He was glaring ahead at something beyond the wrecked ship. The crew followed his gaze and gasped at what they saw.

Behind the ship, a small, coffin-shaped boat was floating in the water, with two green-flamed candles and a single sail. Standing in the boat was a man who was all to familiar with Luffy, Zoro, Usopp, and Sanji. With his cross-shaped sword, black and red coat, cross neclace, and feathered hat, there was no mistaking who it was.

"I've been waiting for you, Zoro," Mihawk said.

Zoro had an evil-looking grin on his face. "As I have been looking for you, Mihawk."

He drew Kuina's sword, feeling his heart beating faster. He had remembered what Mihawk told him last time, about being able to know you're opponent's strength before you draw your sword. Well, Zoro knew Mihawk's true strength now. It was almost horrifying, how powerful he was. However, there was one problem for Mihawk now; Zoro was ready this time.

To Be Continued…

Kind of short, but it's just the first part.

Tell me what you think so far!

Edit: I'll post part 2 in a little while. I would like to hear some comments or critizism first.

[jmbjr]

Okay, nobody's posting, so I'll just type part 2.

Part 2: The Battle Begins!

Mihawk jumped out of his boat, landing on a large chunk of the wrecked Marine ship. Zoro did the same, putting on his bandana when he landed.

"Well, then," said Mihawk, "let's see just how much you've improved!"

Mihawk swung his sword in an upward arc. It appeared nothing had happened at first, but Zoro knew better. He jumped away, right before the area he was standing in was engulfed in a large, purple energy force. Quickly, he drew the rest of his swords and charged at Mihawk.

"Oni Giri!", he yelled, but Mihawk blocked the technique.

"Rising Hawk!", replied Mihawk, sending a large, bird-shaped attack at Zoro, who countered with a perfectly timed Dragon Coil attack. Mihawk jumped high in the air and attacked from above. Zoro quickly blocked, then used Dragon Coil again, only to have Mihawk block it with a similar, but upside-down, version of Zoro's attack. When the two tornados met, sparks flew in every direction, and the wood underneath them cracked under the incredible pressure.

By now, people on the nearby islands were seeing large flashes from Zoro and Mihawk's duel, and decided to go watch.

The other Strawhats were in awe at how much stronger Zoro had become. Some of them were thinking about cheering him on, but decided against it.

"Do you think he'll be okay? I mean, you do remember what happened last time, don't you?", Usopp asked Luffy, concerned.

"Yeah, I remember. But I also remember how Zoro did after that. I remember what he promised me, and I believe him. He can win this. I know he can!", Luffy replied.

Usopp still looked worried, but not quite as much.

Zoro and Mihawk were now exchanging fierce, quick blows, so fast that their weapons were hardly visible. Sparks were constantly flying out, and every once in a while, some debris from the ship would split in half from the attacks being exchanged.

"Tiger Hunt!"
"Hawk Wave!"
"Dragon Coil!"
"Oni Giri!"

No matter what Zoro threw at Mihawk, Mihawk was already ready to counter the attack, which Zoro would find a way to counter, as well. Suddenly, Zoro jumped away from Mihawk.

"Nine sword style! Asura!", Zoro said, turning into his Asura form. The people who had come to watch gasped at his sudden transformation.

Mihawk, however, merely raised his eyebrow. "Hmmm. I don't believe I've seen anything like that before," he said, mildly impressed.

"Asura: Ichibugin!", shouted Zoro, charging at Mihawk, and delivering a fierce attack with all nine swords. Mihawk managed to block it, but clearly showed that he was taken by suprise. Zoro was pushed away, but recovered, and lifted his multiple arms into the air.

"Nine sword style: 324 POUND CANNON!", Zoro shouted, then unleashed a huge, horizontal tornado of slices at Mihawk, who brought his sword up, blocking it. Despite his strength, Mihawk winced slightly at the huge impact. His sword redirected the attack upward, causing a large cloud above them to recieve a massive hole in the middle.

Slowly, Zoro returned to his normal form.

Mihawk smiled slightly. "Well, I see you've certaintly grown stronger! However, it is time for me to fight seriously now!"

"Yeah," Zoro replied, grinning back, "me too!"

To Be Continued…

I'll write part three tomorow.

Edit: meh, nobody's posting, so I'm just gonna give up on this.

[Gojita]

put in some more details. Otherwise its good.

[ITSALION]

I'm surprised the Sunny isn't being destroyed by this fight.
Still, better than I expected. Keep it up.

[jmbjr]

Hey, someone did reply to it! Okay, I'll post part 3 tomorrow then. I'll take Gojita's advice and add more details in next time. Thanks for the comments!

[pokemaster95]

Awsome story dude Can he use Three thousand worlds.

[jmbjr]

Ok, here's part 3:

Part 3: History in the Making

Everyone stared at Zoro and Mihawk. The fight was already increadible, yet they could both still do more! The battle ground was in multiple pieces now; if they were going to keep fighting, they'd have to pick a different part of the ship.

"Oi, everyone; you might want to get the Thousand Sunny away from here for a while," said Zoro, without taking his eyes off of Mihawk.

"Oh yeah, now that I think about it, it's a miracle it hasn't been harmed, seeing how this fight is so far!", replied Nami, observing the splintered deck of the ruined Marine ship. By now, the sails had been cut into shreds, the mast was cut into thirds, and there was only one area of the deck left that was suitable for fighting on.

"Okay, let's get it away from here! There's no way I'm letting this ship be harmed!", Franky said defiantly, and with that, the rest of the Strawhats left the area to observe the battle from a safe distance.

Zoro returned his attention to Mihawk, who right away jumped to the largest part of the ship that was left. Zoro soon followed, but had to climb up, as he couldn't jump as far or high as Mihawk could. When he came up, the fight resumed right away.

"Raven Hunt! Oni Giri!"

The combo did not take Mihawk by surprise at all. However, as he blocked, sparks and pieces of wood went flying in all directions.

Zoro whirled around and struck sideways with two swords. Mihawk blocked, then countered with large, vertical swipe, which Zoro dodged and countered with Torou/Otorou combo. Mihawk blocked and countered with multiple sideways swipes, which Zoro ducked under. He then did a flaming swipe with his right hand, which Mihawk dodged. Zoro then quickly used a spining attack with all three swords, making a large tornado, which Mihawk somehow unwound with his own slashes. All of this happened in a few mere seconds, and yet the power behind each move was so powerful that the deck they were fighting on continued to crack and break in places.

Suddenly, Mihawk stabbed thousands of times, which Zoro just barely blocked with Ushi Bari. Mihawk was now leaning over Zoro, both constantly stabbing at each other. However, it was clear that Zoro was being overcome, as the deck beneath him was becoming litered with holes, while only a few of Zoro's stabs were seen to have an effect. Quickly, Zoro intensified the speed of his attacks, eventually driving Mihawk back slightly. By now, they were moving so fast that Luffy, who was observing the battle through a telescope, was reminded of his Jet Gattling Gun move.

Both swordsmen then made equally powerful swipes at each other, with Zoro using his gorilla-arm move. They both went flying back, debris and dust following them. However, they quickly recovered and charged at each other.

Mihawk slashed multiple times, but Zoro used his Bleeding-the-Wolf technique to dodge the attacks. Mihawk looked down and saw two cuts on his chest; minor injuries, but injuries non the less. He looked up and saw that Zoro wasn't entirely unscathed, either. They both stared at each other for a while, waiting to see who would strike next.

It was Zoro. He sheathed the Kitetsu III, and took Kuina's sword out of his mouth. Now he was holding two swords; a black one and a white one. He took an offensive stance, his aura taking the form of the yin/yang symbol; perferctly fitting for his two swords. Suddenly, he sent the yin/yang symbol out towards Mihawk, who blocked it with a large, purple beam, which broke through the symbol and headed towards Zoro. Quickly, he put away his swords and brought out Kietsu III, and used it to destroy Mihawk's beam. He then attempted to use Lion's Song, but Mihawk, amazingly, blocked it.

Now, there was only a small part of the deck left to fight on. The swordsmen faced each other, both exhausted, with the blood streaming out of their wounds faster, due to their rapidly beating hearts.

"Well, then…Zoro...", Mihawk said, "let us...finish this...now."

"Yeah…", Zoro replied, "Let's!"

Zoro then drew all his swords, holding two out in a bent-L shape, while Mihawk brought his sword up in a ready position.

"Santoryuu...Ougi!", Zoro started. It was happening all over again; Mihawk knew what he was going to do; Zoro knew what Mihawk was going to do, and, just like last time, Zoro had two choices; best in the world, or death.

But something was different this time. Zoro felt that, at last, the moment had finally come to win. He was ready, and he wasn't going to fail this time. He started to spin his swords, wind blowing all around him, and focused on his dream, which he had spent so long training to achieve, and now it was finally going to come true...or would it?

Both Mihawk and Zoro charged at each other, their spirits too much for many of the observers to handle. Zoro thought about his loss against Mihawk. "Three..." He then thought about his promise to Kuina. "Thousand..." Lastly, and most of all, he thought about the rest of his crew, and all of the adventures they had shared. Now, Mihawk and Zoro were about to exchange blows. They got closer and closer until finally, Zoro finished the attack name with a thunderous yell;

"Worlds!!!!!!"

There was an enormous flash, visible from all around the world, and the observers knew no more…

To Be Concluded…?

I'll post the next part soon!

[jmbjr]

Damn…I completely forgot about this thread! Sorry for the people who were waiting (if there were any...). I'll the next part as soon as I can. Sorry!

Also, I decidided to do a little more with this, so the next part will not be the last!

[Mr. All Sunday]

Number one rule of writing in my eyes:

Show, don't tell.

[jmbjr]

@Mr.:

Number one rule of writing in my eyes:

Show, don't tell.

Yeah, I haven't really spent a lot of time on these. Oh well, I'll take more time on them, starting….......now!

Part 4: Not Over Yet?!

Back on the Thousand Sunny, the crew were thinking about the battle, since, unfortunately, they couldn't really see Zoro's fight, only small details here and there, since they moved so fast and from so far away. Nami, Chopper, Robin and Usopp were worried, but Luffy, Sanji, Brooke, and Franky were just bored.

"Man, I can't even see how the fight's going," Luffy complained.
"I hear you," said Franky. "Things are just boring if we're waiting here, doing nothing!"
"I want to see it too," moaned Brooke. "But then again, I have no eyes! YOHOHO-",
"You've already used that joke several times!", yelled Sanji.
"What is wrong with you guys? While you're sitting here complaining, Zoro's risking his life to fulfill his dream! Doesn't that mean anything to you?", said Nami, shocked at the way they were acting.
Luffy sighed. "But we already know he'll win! He promised me! But we at least want to see the fight!"
"I think I agree with Luffy," replied Robin.
"Robin!"
"Think about it. Have we ever seen Zoro lose to a swordsman other than Mihawk, which many of us didn't even witness? I think he can do it this time."
"But…"
"I agree with them."
"Not you too, Chopper!"
"Well, even if Zoro wins, he's not coming out of there without any injuries, and I am the doctor, aren't I?"
"Well, you've convinced me!", said Usopp.
"But...but...oh, fine, you've made your point.
Luffy laughed. "So then, lets head back!"
"Alright!", the crew (except Nami) replied, and started to sail back towards the ruined ship.
Nami went up to Robin.
"Don't they realize that they're just going to put the ship in danger?", she asked.
Robin shrugged. "Nothing we can do now but hope that things turn out okay.

Zoro and Mihawk looked out at the unconsious people who had come to watch. What those people wouldn't know is that Zoro and Mihawk never reached each other; they stopped in front of each other to emit the flash, which would undoubtedly knock out any viewers nearby. The flash was a lot bigger than expected, though, and the only reason the rest of the Strawhats didn't see it was merely because they blinked right at the right moment.

"Well, I think we put on a good show for them," Zoro said, satisfied.
"Indeed. Still, you put alot of energy into that attack. I'm very impressed," replied Mihawk. "But now, we fight for real."
Zoro grinned. "About time!"

There was no longer an area big enough to finish the battle. The battlefield was now a chain of islands made of wood and debris. The only thing that they could fight on for more than a few seconds was a large piece of the mast, which would be difficult to balance on.

Then, of all things, it began to rain. It was as if God himself (whether Zoro believed in him or not) had decided to make things more interesting. Visibility was now low, and the few places left to stand on would be very slippery. Thunder flashed, and the fight resumed.

Zoro and Mihawk each swung their swords rapidly, unleashing thousands upon thousands of cannon-based attacks at each other. If anyone around them was awake, they would have thought of it as more of a war than a duel.

Zoro's dragon-shaped attacks seemed to actually fight by themselves against Mihawk's large hawk-shaped attacks, really enhancing the pure intensity between them. What was once a huge storm cloud above them was becoming hundreds of small ones. It was like Whitebeard and Shanks clashing, but on a larger scale; though the cuts in the heavens didn't look quite as impressive, there were a lot more than just one. Of course, Whitebeard and Shanks have the potential to do this, but, well, they haven't really done it yet, making the spectacle more impressive, as even Enel, up in space, could see something strange going on with the clouds on Earth.

The attacks became more and more agressive, and Zoro and Mihawk weren't even next to each other. They were constantly jumping to different areas, and the places to go to were getting fewer and fewer. Suddenly, Mihawk swung his sword in a huge arc, sending a large, wave-like attack at Zoro. Zoro quickly dodged it, and looked back to see where it was going; straight towards the Thousand Sunny, which was sailing right towards them. Mihawk and Zoro stopped their attacks, but there was no way to stop the wave of energy heading for the ship.

"NOOO!!!", Franky shouted, and jumped towards the wave. "I WON'T LET THIS SHIP BE DESTROYED!!!!"
"Franky, wait!", Luffy shouted, but it was too late. The wave hit Franky and shattered, saving the ship. Franky, with a huge cut across his chest, fell into the ocean.

Sanji quickly dove into the water and brought Franky onto the ship. Chopper rushed over to help.

"Oh, no! He's not breathing!" Chopper yelled, horrified. Luffy rushed over as well.

"Franky! Wake up! Wake up!", he yelled, but there was no response. The only thing the crew (and Mihawk) could do was stare in horror.

"FRANKY!!!!!!!!!!!"

To be continued…

Not as much fighting in this one, but I hope it's still good.

[BlackMamba]

Its Awsome Dude Keep It Up Post Part 5

[jmbjr]

@BlackMamba:

Its Awsome Dude Keep It Up Post Part 5

Glad you like it, but I haven't really been in the mood to write much more. The ideas I have in mind will either be interesting or lame, depending on how I write it, and I don't think it will turn out as well unless I'm totally dedicated to writing it, which I'm just not right now. I might get to it eventually, though.