Ummm some parts of that translation is wrong?
Borrowing from where megakazul left off, I edited/continued:
p1-
Moria: Start! (The zombifying procedure)
Usopp: Wha-what is this… a gi-giant's corpse? Giants aren't this big!!
Chopper: oh...!! oh...!! (weeping noises)
Nami: Chopper, don't make a sound! Restrain yourself!
p2-
Moria: Honestly!! Straw Hat Luffy's shadow!! I'm your new master!
Luffy: ...
Usopp: ...!
Moria: Starting from now you will be reborn from this stiff corpse... I bestow you a voice and flesh! However, you must forget all your nakama ties, becoming an absolutely loyal soldier!!
Luffy nods.
Moria: evil laughter It's a deal!! (literally: the contract has been extablished)
p3-
Hogback: You ought to give Cindy a contract so that she can forget her past too. That way, we can finally eat on plates again.
Cindry: Sooner or later, I'll crush those plates on your kneecaps.
Hogback: Holy mother!! Oh Cindry, your threat is so frickin scary!!
Absalom: The way Cindry treats Hogback is so amazing (strong/powerful, ack can't find the right word X_X)
Chopper: !...the shadow!!
Moria: Come...Wake up now!!
...From your 500 years of slumber!
p4-
sound effects
Nami: ah...Luffy's shadow...
Moria's evil laughter
p5-
more sfx
Absalom: It's in!!
p6-
sfx
Nami: No! You can't scream!
p7-
HOLY MOTHER!! (XD)
Moria: What the hell's going on?
Nami and co: The corpse moved!!
Perona: Oi Bearsy! You were hiding the pirates!!
Usopp: Crap...they've found us!
Nami: We couldn't help screaming!!
Chopper: The monster's eyes opened!!
p8-
Absalom: That's my bride, how did she end up here?!!
Zombies: It's those pirates! Get them!!
sfx plus moria's laughter
!!? The giant esaily broke the chains!!
p9-
Hogback: Excellent!! This is simply art!! This threatening feeling is overwhelming!! This monster lives up to its name!!
Luffy monster: Meaaaaatt!!!! Will...die...of... hunger!!!
p10-:
Luffy monster: Sanji! Munchtime!
?: Sanji? Who's that?
Absalom: Where are the pirates?
zombies: They left!! That's the wind from under their shoes!!(meaning they run damn fast XD)
Absalom: Don't think of running!!
Usopp: huff What's happening....what's happening?! Just now...
Chopper: huffhuff Luffy's shadow was put in and it started moving. So this is what zombies are like. Dr. Hogback's so called resurrection...!
Nami: That fat guy must have the power of the devil fruit!
p11-:
Nami: The first cry, "Meat", that personality is still Luffy's. huff
Nami: Thinking this way, that penguin we met in the corridor like Sanji...
Usopp: Yes! You're saying, that's Sanji's shadow!
Chopper: And the one who beat us was Brook's shadow
Chopper: All these strange things have only one logical explanation
Nami: Chopper? huff
Chopper: This is an uproar! It's demeaning human life! What human aspiration, what resurrection!
Chopper: There's no intention to save lives!
Nami recalls Chopper saying: Hogback is a great person! I respect him!
Usopp: We don't have any time to feel hurt by those matters! Our nakama are being turned into sacrifices for those zombies!
p12-:
Usopp: Understand? They need us to save them!
Nami: Hurry! Go find Luffy's body!
Chopper: They said, "thrown on the ship", it should be Sunny then.
Chopper: If this happened to Zoro and Sanji too, they should be together!!
Nami: Those troublemakers..
Usopp: Really cause worry!
p13-:
grunting and exclamations
Nami: Usopp! Chopper!
Usopp/Chopper: It hurts! Let go!
?: He's...really strong!
Absalom: Rushing to say goodbye?
p14-:
Usopp: huff Holy Mother!! (keeping in line with megakazul =P) If I can't even protect this woman, there's nothing I, Usopp, have that's worth living for!!
Chopper: Whaa!! Usopp's weapon is!!
Usopp: some attack (It's some 6 stars that are lined together. named after a poisonous cobra with a triangular head. maybe its a poison attack?)
Chopper: Disappearing again?
Nami: Ah! Me too !!?
p15-:
Chopper: Where did they go? Nami!! Can't...some other overpowering smell is drowning out hers!!
Nami: Help! Usopp! Cho...!!
Usopp: Hey! Nami! What happened! Where are you? huff Answer me! huff
Absalom: Zombies...I leave the rest to you... Capture them and send them to Moria!!
Usopp: ...Where's he saying that from?
Usopp: Whaa!!
p16-:
Usopp: What? An armoured zombie?!
Usopp: Upstairs or downstairs, the zombies are everywhere!
Chopper: We can't be captured!! Our shadows will be taken!
Zombies: Ah! Its' the pirates!!
Zombies: Hand over your shadows...
Chopper: Waa! Oil painting zombies are coming too!!
Zombie: Hehehe...
Usopp: Dammit!! Despicable!! You're invincible yet you gang up on one person! We can't be taken!!
Chopper: Dammit!! Let go!! Go to hell!!
Zombies: Just hand over your shadows!! Ahahahahahaha!!
Zombie: Waaaaaaaa!!
Franky: Oi oi!! Get your hands off my little brothers!!
Chopper: Ahhh....
p17-:
Zombie A: Hey!!! That's!!!
Zombie B: What?? Our comrade just got cleansed!!
Zombie C: Who are they! This isn't good!!
Chopper: Ahh!
Chopper: Big brother!!
Usopp: Robin!!!
Franky: Split up? Missing a person (referring to Nami)...Usopp,
Robin: Chopper, are you hurt?
Credits to megakazul too.
Okay, several comments:
Seeing how Usopp's a big fan of giants, 900 must be humongous. Seems that Usopp/Chopper and Franky treat each other as brothers. Chopper is disappointed in Hogback, and Usopp seems a lot less cowardly now.