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    • Gizmo
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      I remember when somebody wrote an english adaption of Kokoro no Chizu, so I tried for Hikari E, since I wanted to see if an english adaption was doable.

      I'm no I'm not a good translator but Kaizoku Fansubs really helped me get lyrics for this song so, I'm gonna post them here to see how they are. Thanks to Kaizoku Fansubs for helping with lyrics though

      I am 98% sure that this matches up with the song, but people can mention all my mistakes or what not so here we go-

      ~remember when I started to begin my search
      A blast of water came this way
      To the everlasting world I see today
      With an overflowing passion in my chest
      I’m ready for an adventure
      Seeking the light that can’t be kept at bay
      When the summer sun shined bright the heart told me to sail towards the light
      “Fly away glum blue sea”
      The door to the new world has opened It’s up to me to follow the new path
      “Fly away glum blue sky”
      Swaying through between the waves I know I can escape despair
      For the horizon right on the other side
      Yea yea yea yea
      Is where I’m goin
      remember when I started to begin my search
      A blast of water came this way
      To the everlasting world I see today
      With an overflowing passion in my chest
      I’m ready for an adventure
      Seeking the light that can’t be kept at bay~

      I worked hard on this, and i know the final line in the chorus is really weak, but i think this is a pretty good adaptation. Feedback would be appreciated.

      Originally Posted by Nightwing

      Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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        Just listened to the song, and it matches up pretty well; good job.
        Just one thing, isn't the song saying "Fly away glum blue sea/sky?" 😆

        AMVs|Myspace|DA|LJ: OP Icons

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        • BeansDooma
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          The was me who made the Kokoro no Chizu adaption. I'll have to see if that's till on m computer when I get home from school…

          hnngrnrgh

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          • Gizmo
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            @Fleur:

            Just listened to the song, and it matches up pretty well; good job.
            Just one thing, isn't the song saying "Fly away glum blue sea/sky?" 😆

            XD yea you're right.

            Originally Posted by Nightwing

            Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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            • l2agnarok
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              This makes searching a whole lot easier XD. Well I loved this adaption so much, I wanted to try to sing it. I edited a little bit of the lyrics though, and maybe I sing bad…Then again no one loves the sound of their voice. Anyway, may I have permission to use the lyrics and give credit?

              – One Piece Grand Line Bout M.U.G.E.N

              -- One Piece Funimation Songs

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              • Gizmo
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                Sure no problem. What are you gonna use the lyrics for though, l2agnarok?

                Originally Posted by Nightwing

                Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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                • l2agnarok
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                  Gonna try to sing it…Though I may fail horribly, then again,who knows? XD

                  – One Piece Grand Line Bout M.U.G.E.N

                  -- One Piece Funimation Songs

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                  • Gizmo
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                    Go for it. Are you gonna sing it in public though? If so then good luck

                    Originally Posted by Nightwing

                    Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?

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                      "Gum blue sky" makes me think of Gum Gum…..and of Luffy in the 4Kids doob.....

                      The lyrics on Tangerine Farm don't list the backup....and I don't have time to check the song, but from my memories it was "clear" or "sweet". Then again, my memory fails me….

                      Other than that, I like it. I wanna hear a recording....or I'd go one myself, though I suck.

                      Originally Posted by beat_fu

                      OH, THAT COVER IS REALLY FRICKIN YELLOW THOUGH. WE GET IT, THEY CAN ONLY GO OUT AT NIGHT, THE MOON, BLAH BLAH MUSIC OF THE NIGHT BLAH BLAH BLAH GIMME SOMETHING WITH LESS PEE PEE COLOR.

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                      • l2agnarok
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                        Go for it, Soonest I can do it is like…what?...Next week? Latest in like 2 weeks. Probably in the next two weeks though.

                        – One Piece Grand Line Bout M.U.G.E.N

                        -- One Piece Funimation Songs

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                          the stuff before the "fly away"s seems a little weird, but I think it was just me reading it. ^_^ heh, I do this kind of stuff occasionally too. XD I did one for Cardcaptor Sakura (the japanese first opening). hmmm…. looks at other one piece openings, inspired now. I totally love A to Z, so that'll probably be first. Mwahahah, beware teh K-chan's English lyrics. >) In the future. o.o Busy now. >>;;

                          ALLEZ CUISINE!!

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