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      Marthx
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      Marthx
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      this is was a sort of rushed sketch…..ok it was rushed, well i need your opinon and yes i rushed both

      2+7=….......err i cannot answer this question as it is against my religious principles

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        The Cryokinetic
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        The Cryokinetic
        spiral

        There both really pretty good. More so the first of the two. There's just something about the eyes of Luffy that don't sit well.

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          Marthx @The Cryokinetic
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          spiral
          Marthx
          spiral

          figures…hmmm i'll keep that in mind thanks a million dude

          2+7=….......err i cannot answer this question as it is against my religious principles

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            Kazu-kun
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            Kazu-kun
            spiral

            Okay I know I shouldn't say anything since I can't draw as good as this, but…

            For the first picture. You need to put more depth. The body of Kakashi (im going to assume this is kakashi) looks like a square. The legs also have no depth, they look as if they don't have knees

            For the second pic, the proportion of the hair looks a bit off. It should be raised a bit. For the eyes they're about to pop out, so you might not want to stress as much on the detail of the outline of the eyes. The neck also looks a little weird, then again Luffy's neck is sorta weird.

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              Cr4zy
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              I like the second one, but not the first one.

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                lorenzo
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                spiral
                lorenzo
                spiral

                How do u people do those things?

                https://www.facebook.com/gabvalencia…70636309791450

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                  Chaos Inferno19 @lorenzo
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                  Chaos Inferno19
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                  @lorenzo:

                  How do u people do those things?

                  Its called talent,

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