Here you can put you fan-art with new member for Luffy's crew.
New Crew Member?
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Nice design! She seems like a really interesting character. :3
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Honestly, I'd pick Brook over him. No offense, 'cause I like your's (looks kinda like Nanashi XD), but just because Brook is amazing.
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Brooke is probably 10 or 15 episodes away from the anime. He just appeared very recently in the manga, but the fans are LOVING him.
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Brook rules! Brook for musician!
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I'm gonna be honest, it isn't that great…sorry.
It is a interesting design, but I feel it'll be better for your own creation rather than something suppose to be in the One Piece world. And the drawing skills itself aren't that great, I'm not trying to discourage you.
Practice more, no one is that great from the start..even I'm an awful artist still and I've been drawing for years.
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I'm going to agree with buuhan. Your art is not that great, Its okay, but its not amazing…. Yet.
I'm terrible with trying to help people in improve. so I'll just say what everyone else says, Practice.
About it being a fan character for One piece, I dont really care. I mean I'm hoping that you've got other characters that are based of your own world and story.
A word of Advice, from artist to the other; dont get angry about people telling you that your art isn't great. If your going to be an artist, you will probably hear it for the rest of your life, even if your famous. You'll going to need to accept that comment from people.
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Nothing wrong with the character, other than being kind of cliche, but, why for One Piece? You should create your own story instead.
Plus, the Strawhats don't need another swordsperson. -
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My criticism has nothing to do with the style of the drawing. Just the concept of the character and the attempt to have it fit in with an existing story. People should always draw in their own style. I dislike it when people try to make something look generically manga.
I like your paintings though, they're very good.
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Ohhh ok, ok but this is only my fanfiction. You don't have to worry about it. If you like it we can talk, if you don't - well If I were You I would don't mind, and just go to different place(in forum of course) .
I've explained many things in my earliest posts- about dreams, personality, etc. And I'll do real manga soon
. Then You'll see - In practise - about what I'm thinking of. 
