Alright, I made this over Winter Break.
It's like… well check it out.
It has a few good parts in it, and I was trying out different things. Although the last 8 seconds are amazing. 
Anyway, please tell me what you liked, hated, loved, etc… about it, and what I can do to improve on it.
Thank you all for your time.
`````Lobster Pot-Sticker~``
The talking parts with Spandam, whitey, and "Brought to you by Bandai" voice really hurt the overall effect.
@Roz:
The talking parts with Spandam, whitey, and "Brought to you by Bandai" voice really hurt the overall effect.
Whitey? Do you mean "Lord Orochimaru"??
That was… awesome...
Wait.
Why was Orochimaru in this?
It was pretty good, but the talking parts hurt it.
To clarify, I didn't mind Lucchi and Luffy's voices in there.
I thought it was alright. I got some laughs, but Orochimaru seemed really out of place.
Originally Posted by Nightwing
Stay focused, cause right now you have a decision to make. Are you a man perpetually looking back at what he’s lost, or a man looking forward, to what he might become?
That was, umm, random.
Too random.
You got a good idea here, but you need to capitivate on it more. It didn't seem to flow together.
Haha, I really enjoyed that, you have a great idea going. However, I agree that it could be organized a bit better, but then again its your first one. Keep it up, I will be watching the next ones for sure.
I didn't like it.
The scenes kept changing.
One minute their in Enies Lobby, the next their somewhere in Ninja land.
Could improve.
I loved it!!:w00t:
Keep it up, man!
