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      I've decided to write a fan play inspired in the musical Little Shop of Horrors. There is a little of progress at the moment, but there is still one problem which is about the role of Mr. Mushnick. I didn't find any character of OP that could fit in this role. If you guys want to give suggestions about the role or anything related with the whole story, please feel free to say.

      Anyway, here is my cast:
      Usopp as Seymour
      Kaya as Audrey (thanks Hyper Dingo for the suggestion)
      Arlong as Orin Schivello
      Luffy as Audrey II

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      Buggy as Mr. Mushnick (thanks Buuhan1 for the suggestion)

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        oooo sounds like an interesting read, I seen the show ages ago and it was….averagely good. Hopefully you'll be able to make it better ^_^

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          Was Mr. Mushnick the dude who Seymour axes up and feeds Audrey II? If so, Buggy, simply cause cutting him doesn't hurt him. XD

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            No, who is axed up by Seymour is Orin Schivello. Mr. Mushnick is the owner of the florist shop where the story happens.

            Yesterday, I tested Franky as Mushnick but the result was awkward =S Perhaps can Spandam work as Mushnick? Buggy sounds good, but he is already starring an antagonist in my Rocky Horror yuri version.

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              Well I'll watch it, but I haven't seen the original.

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                News:
                I decided to put Usopp as Mushnick. Also, I'm thinking in replace Wapol for Luffy.

                Here is a scrap of the first pages. I want a few comments about how it is going.

                ! Usopp (angrily)
                Chopper, you idiot! You’re destroying the inventory!
                ! Chopper
                I sorry Usopp-san, I didn’t mean it!
                ! Usopp
                If wasn’t be enough the lack of clients in this shop, that wouldn’t be our problem! We are close to bankrupt!
                ! Nami enters. She has a bruise in her eye.
                ! Chopper
                Hi Nami-chan!
                ! Usopp
                Oh hi, Nami.
                ! Nami
                Hi guys, how is going?
                ! Usopp
                No customers.
                ! Nami
                He, as if it was news.
                ! Chopper (noticing the bruise)
                Hey Nami, what is it? New make-up?
                ! Nami
                Ah, it’s nothing…
                ! Usopp
                Don’t tell me that you let that guy hurt you again…
                ! Nami
                It isn’t true! He actually protects me! Mind your own business!
                ! Usopp
                Business? I even don’t like plants! I only own this place because it’s a family heir!
                ! TIME FLIES
                Chopper, Usopp and Nami are standing, looking bored and annoyed.
                ! Nami (dull)
                Wow, it’s six o’ clock.
                ! Usopp (angrily)
                That’s it! Forget it about coming tomorrow!
                ! Nami
                You don’t mean…
                ! Usopp
                I’m enough Nami. I’m closing this place forever!
                ! Nami
                You can’t do that with us!
                ! Usopp
                Yes, I can!
                ! Chopper
                Wait Usopp-san! Don’t do that! I… I… have a surprise!
                ! Nami and Usopp look puzzled at Chopper.
                ! Usopp
                What are you talking about?
                ! Chopper
                Well, I have been working in strange and exotic plants that might attract a new kind of business.
                ! Usopp (cynically)
                Oh, brilliant Chopper! Just what I need more are more plants!
                ! Chopper
                No, you got wrong Usopp-san. This plant looks real exquisite.
                ! Chopper enters in the storage room and comes back holding a small Venus Flytrap plant. The plant reminds oddly Luffy, and even wears a small version of his straw hat.
                ! Usopp (staring at the plant)
                What the hell is this?
                ! Chopper
                I researched in a botanic encyclopedia and it looks like a Venus Flytrap, but actually is nothing that has been seen or registered.
                ! Usopp
                I wouldn’t be surprised. Look how this thing is ugly!
                ! Chopper
                Anyway, I named it as Nami Jr.
                ! Nami (angrily)
                Did you give me name to this horrible thing?!
                ! Chopper
                I sorry Nami-chan! I didn’t mean it! I just tried to homage you!
                ! Nami
                Well, at least we should give a try.
                ! Nami takes Flytrap Luffy and put it the front of the window pane.
                ! Usopp
                How it would really work. Come on!
                ! The main door opens. A customer, Iceburg, enters.
                ! Iceburg
                Excuse me guys, but I couldn’t notice that strange and freaking ugly plant. What is it?
                ! Chopper
                It’s a Nami Jr.
                ! Nami
                STOP GIVING ME NAME TO THAT THING!
                ! Iceburg
                Nami Jr.? I never have seen like it before.
                ! Usopp
                And I’m sure no one has…
                ! Iceburg
                Where did you get it?
                ! Chopper
                Remember that total eclipse of the sun about a week ago?

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                  Arlong looks like plantfood to me, too.

                  I'm like Hisotensoku: Not here to preserve peace, nor to destroy it. I certainly can't move mountains. Mostly, I'm just full of hot air.- Meh

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                    oh noes! Scripted >.<

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                        I kinda like the script style version.

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                          I dunno, whenever I see script style, I usually just see a bunch of Robots standing there having a conversation, as in the lack of emotions, I can see a few spread out now and again in this fic, but thats all.

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                            Chopper Nami is kinda….awkward. Ussop Kaya could work. But its your idea do what you wish.

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                                    Sorry I had to re-post this chapter as I added one last thing in it. It concerns Kaya's feelings as well as a shadowing of Arlong.

                                    ACT I
                                    It was a regular day in Buggy’s Circus of Flowers. There were no customers or movement since the shop opened at seven in the morning, and the day was close to midday. Even the plants and the old walls made of wood seemed bored. The shop's appearance didn't help for call customers either. It was a short block, whose floor and shelfs were pretty crowded of dust. It had only two window panes and its exterior look was ugly and decadent.

                                    The shop’s owner, Buggy, remained in the balcony reading the newspaper, doing nothing special. The only living action in the shop was Usopp, who was arranging a case with flower pots. Suddenly, the case began to shake, and a few seconds later it fell into pieces destroying all the pots that were there.

                                    Buggy turned to the mess, “Usopp, you idiot! Look what are you doing to my inventory!”

                                    “I’m sorry Mr. Buggy, I didn’t mean it!” said Usopp, while his leg shook in fear, almost wetting in his pants.

                                    “Well, go get the broom and clean up this thing!” ordered Buggy.

                                    Usopp nodded his head and rushed to the storage room. Buggy returned to his newspaper. Then, the main door opened. It was Kaya, another employee of the shop.

                                    “Good morning, guys!” said Kaya.

                                    “Kaya! Is that hours of arrive at your work?” yelled Buggy.

                                    “I’m sorry Mr. Buggy, I was trapped… literally.” Kaya bowed her face. Buggy looked at her face and noticed a bruise near her eyes.

                                    “Kaya… was that your violent boyfriend again?” asked Buggy.

                                    “Please, ignore it.”

                                    “I know it’s none of my business, but I don’t want to lose my only employees.” said Buggy.

                                    Usopp came back, bringing a broom with him, “I got the broom, Mr. Buggy! I’m going to…” he then tripped in a piece of broken pot and fell, making the broom broke in two. Buggy put his hand on the face in shame. Usopp rose and saw Kaya looking at him.

                                    “Are you alright, Usopp?” she asked.

                                    “I-I’m fine, nothing to worry about!” said Usopp. He then noticed her bruise in the eye and asked, “Did you get hurt again?”

                                    “My life is a mess… I’ve lousy employees, a failed shop, dead plants! I haven’t even money to have a flashy dinner! Nothing seems to work with me!” moaned Buggy.

                                    “Don’t worry, Mr. Buggy, I’m sure your business is going to become better…” said Kaya.

                                    “No, no, no! That’s it! Don’t bother coming in tomorrow!”

                                    Usopp and Kaya stared at Buggy. “You don’t mean…”

                                    “YES! I’m going to close this place for real!” yelled Buggy.

                                    “You can’t do that to us! This is the only job I have found!” said Kaya.

                                    “Whatever. The place is closed. End of story.” said Buggy.

                                    Usopp really didn’t mind of change his job. However, he was a lot worried about Kaya. He looked at her with very pain. He could even notice the tiny tears appearing in her eyes. In that moment, he remembered something that could solve that problem, and so he said bravely: “Don’t worry, Kaya! I know how to save Mr. Buggy’s business!”

                                    Kaya looked at Usopp, “Really?”

                                    “Come on, you can’t even walk without destroy something.” grouched Buggy, “What kind of heroic idea would be coming from a head of yours?”

                                    “Well, I… have a plant, and she looks so exotic that could bring attention to some pedestrians!” said Usopp.

                                    “You are lying. And I don’t need more plants!” said Buggy.

                                    “Don’t be so pessimistic, Mr. Buggy! Did you know that people get wealthy and famous by exhibiting exotic plants? There are even world-wide contests to these plants!”

                                    Buggy raised his eyebrow. He now sounded very curious. “Are you serious?”

                                    “Yes! Think about Mr. Buggy’s Circus of Flowers becoming a title known in the whole world!”

                                    “That sounds a flashy idea. You can try Usopp, but if it fails, I swear I’m going to pulverize flashily!”

                                    “O-okay! I won’t disappoint you! Now wait here!”

                                    That being said, Usopp left the shop hurriedly and ran to his house. Buggy and Kaya remained in the shop, looking at each other. Kaya was cheerful, but Buggy felt angered and ready to smash the face of someone.

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                                    Some time later, Usopp arrived with a plant in his hands. The plant indeed had an odd look, but for Buggy it was far than that. It looked like a Venus Flytrap, but unlike the others that Buggy had have seen this one wore a small Straw Hat and had a stitch in her top. Even stranger, the plant seemed that was smiling.

                                    “What the heck is that?” commented Buggy, after a while of silent stare.

                                    “Well, I tried to find this in one of my encyclopedias, but I think it never had been registered before.” said Usopp.

                                    “I don’t doubt it. Look how this thing is freaking weird!” said Buggy.

                                    “Does it have a name?” asked Kaya.

                                    “Hmm, I named it… Kaya II.” said Usopp, blushing, “I expected to homage you, Kaya.”

                                    Kaya giggled, “Aww, that’s cute!”

                                    “Yeah, whatever.” said Buggy, looking disgusted, “So, what’s the plan?”

                                    Usopp approached the window pane and put the plant there.

                                    “That is stupid.” complained Buggy, “You don’t think people will notice this thing all of a sudden, do…”

                                    Suddenly, the main door opened. A man wearing businessman suit entered. Buggy’s chin fell.

                                    “Excuse me, but I couldn’t avoid looking this freak plant!” said the man.
                                    “Welcome sir, may we help you?” said Kaya, gently.

                                    “Yeah, I would like to know more about it.” the man stepped to look at Kaya II closer, “What is it name?”

                                    “It’s a Kaya II.”

                                    “I never have seen something like this before...”

                                    “No one has…” said Buggy cynically, in quiet voice.

                                    “Where did you get that?” asked the man.

                                    “Well, remember that eclipse that happened last week? I was walking in the street that day, and I passed by this mysterious weird woman. She is known to sell bizarre things to pedestrians, so I went to her to see if I could find something unusual, but she hadn’t any that day. I decided to go back home, when then the sky went all black, and I heard a strange sound… The sky returned to normal, and when I turned back, I saw this plant with the mysterious woman. I bought it and I planned to show to my boss, Mr. Buggy.”

                                    Buggy and the man at Usopp in disbelief, but Kaya looked amazed with that story.

                                    “Hmm, well, I didn’t get what you said, and I’m sure most of your story is a pile of lie.” said the man.

                                    “Hey, it’s true!” said Usopp.

                                    “Anyway, as I’m here, I want to buy some flowers. I’ll give 200 berries.”
                                    Buggy’s eyes bulged in surprise. Usopp and Kaya stared at the man, disbelieved.

                                    “200 berries?” said Usopp.

                                    “200 berries?” repeated Kaya.

                                    “200 BERRIES!” shouted Buggy.

                                    “Can you break 100 berries?” asked the man.

                                    “Oh… no.” said Buggy.

                                    “Okay then. I’ll take twice as many.” said the man.

                                    “Twice as many?” asked Usopp.

                                    “Twice as many!” said Buggy, “Kaya, get the flowers to this man!”

                                    “Alright!” Kaya stepped to the storage room, when the main door opened again. Two girls had entered.

                                    “Hi, we came to see that weird plant in your window.” said one of the girls.

                                    It was going to be a busy afternoon in Buggy’s Circus of Flowers that day.


                                    “I can’t believe we got 6500 Berries today!” said Buggy, staring at the amount of money inside the cash register. It was seven of night when the flow of customers had stopped. Usopp cleaned the place as Kaya looked around happily with the work they had had.

                                    “This is certainly a special moment!” she said.

                                    “Well, why don’t celebrate with a dinner tonight?” suggested Usopp.

                                    “Oh, I’m sorry, I have a date.” said Kaya.

                                    “With that barbarian?” said Buggy.

                                    “He’s just a bit tempered, Mr. Buggy. But he has a good job. Besides… he’s the only person I have got.” Kaya stepped to the door and turned to Usopp, “Good night, Usopp. Enjoy the dinner.”

                                    “Good night, Kaya.”

                                    And so, Kaya left to the dark cold night. Usopp turned to Buggy, who seemed a bit disappointed. “Can we go now?”

                                    Buggy glared at Usopp, “You aren’t going anywhere! You will stay here and take care of that plant! By the way, she needs some water. Look how she is dead.”

                                    Buggy was right. The leaves of Kaya II were brown and looked quite dead.

                                    “Well, I don’t know what to give this plant.” said Usopp, “I have watered her, put her in the sun and feed her with mineral supplements, but none of this seem to work!”

                                    “I don’t care what works, just nurse this plant back to health if you do care with your job!” said Buggy, “Good night!”

                                    Buggy slammed the door and went out. Usopp felt unhappy. His idea might have worked, but the day how the day ended wasn’t that great.

                                    “Man, you are a very stubborn plant.” said Usopp to Kaya II, “What do you really need, huh? I don’t know what else I can do for you.”

                                    Usopp took a pot holding a couple of roses and moved to the storage room, but in the moment he was arriving in the door he shrieked in pain and let the pot fell. Usopp looked at his hand. Blood came out from a small red spot in his finger.

                                    “Damn roses and their thorns!” grouched Usopp.

                                    Suddenly, Usopp heard a strange sound behind him. He turned back slowly, afraid that some burglar invaded the shop and would come to kill him, but for his surprise he saw Kaya II opening and closing her entrance repeatedly, like if she wanted to devour something.

                                    “What?” Usopp turned to Kaya II and approached her. The plant now made force to come closer him, especially of his wounded finger. Usopp rose his finger to her, and incredibly he saw a human-looking like tongue coming off and trying to lick the finger.

                                    “Blood!?” Usopp was terribly disturbed, “Do you WANT blood?”

                                    Strangely, Kaya II nodded, like it understood what Usopp said.

                                    “Okay… maybe a few drops.” Usopp put his finger over Kaya II and began to squeeze it. Blood fell in Kaya II, which licked all the drops with many pleasure. Usopp looked at it with disgust, but if it was for the good of the plant – and Kaya – he needed to do it.

                                    “That’s it. No more other or I’ll get anemia.” Usopp pulled out his finger and rushed to the make a dressing. Kaya II seemed really satisfied.


                                    It was almost midnight when Kaya left her ‘date’. She had a big bruise in the neck and in the left cheek, but she preferred to hide them from the pedestrians in the street. She was happy knowing about Usopp had saved the florist shop, but one side of her cried for she still be in a hideous relationship with a violent-tempered man, or better a fish-man.

                                    Dr. Arlong was the most famous dentist of the city. As a fish-man, he was an expert to identify and resolve any toothy problem. However, for being well-known and mostly of all a fish-man, Arlong was an arrogant pompous who delighted to humiliate his human patients. He said human teeth were inferiors because they didn’t born like fish. Arlong believed pain was reasonable to reach a better status, and therefore realized his surgeons with many cruelty and coldness. Many hated to be treated by Arlong, but as he was the best of the area they decided to remain quiet and endure the torture.

                                    Kaya met him a few years ago, when she used to work in a club located in the other side of the city. It wasn’t a job that she felt proud, so she tried to hide it from Buggy and Usopp as far she could. She liked him at first because of his job and strength, but after a couple of dates she regretted. But now then it was too late.

                                    Kaya had arrived in the building where she lived. She was about to enter when someone called her in the street. Kaya turned to whoever was and saw a beggar that usually hanged out there, almost every hour of the day and of the night

                                    “Girl, hey girl.” said the beggar with his hoarse voice, “Isn’t the trouble that you are in hazardous to your health?”

                                    “I know that.” said Kaya, embarrassed, “But I can’t leave him.”

                                    “Why not?”

                                    “He could get angry, and then…” Kaya sobbed, "Imagine what kind of things he could do with me if he found about that."

                                    “So get a guy who can protect you.” suggested the homeless man, “What about that boy with big nose in the place where do you work?”

                                    “Wow, you know many things about me!” said Kaya.

                                    “Well, I’m always here and I see things.”

                                    “Well, I don’t think Usopp deserves a low woman like me. He is a nice and decent guy… But thanks for the help.” Kaya opened the door and vanished from the beggar’s sight. But despite what she said to the man, Kaya did indeed feel things about Usopp. She had even dreams that wanted to fulfill along with him.

                                    “Geez, what a complex of inferiority!” grouched the beggar to himself.

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                                      Ah It looks loads better, excellently so, A lot of dialogue compared to the actual actions, but it works still. Looks good.

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                                        ACT II
                                        It had been two days since Kaya II was put in expose to public, and now it was the most commented subject in the entire town. Thanks to Usopp’s bloody sacrifice, the plant now was much bigger and fuller of life than before. Her leaves looked well colorful and notable. It had appeared a couple of vines in her stalk. Even the straw hat that was always in the top of plant seemed that grow up, matching with the size of her strange owner.

                                        However, good news couldn’t say the same for Usopp. He barely got a bad case of anemia and felt horribly tired. All his ten fingers were bandaged, although Kaya and Buggy didn’t know the reasons. Usopp made an excuse saying that was attacked by a rabid warm of bees while was walking in the park.

                                        “A rabid warm?” said Buggy, confused, “And did they pick only the fingers?”

                                        “Y-yes.” said Usopp.

                                        “Rabid warm… for ten fingers.” Buggy was disbelieved, but he accepted the version since it didn’t really anything to do with the business.

                                        That day, Kaya and Buggy were busy attending a torrent of clients while Usopp was in the cash register gathering the money. He didn’t have enough physical force to walk around and help the people.

                                        “Usopp! Quicker! Quicker!” yelled Buggy, while rushed to the storage room to get a bouquet of flowers.

                                        “Yeah… sure…” replied Usopp, sounding like a zombie.

                                        After attending a client, Kaya approached Usopp and said: “Are you really alright, Usopp? I think you should go home.”

                                        “Go home? Are you kidding?!” yelled Buggy.

                                        “Maybe…” said Usopp.

                                        “No way! I’ve let you in the duty of gathering the cash! Now don’t ask me for a break, Usopp!”

                                        A customer called to be attended. Buggy turned around and ran to help the customer. Kaya remained with Usopp, still worried about him.

                                        “I think Mr. Buggy is being too hard with you lately.”

                                        “No, he’s right. I keep forgetting things… Yesterday, I sent a bouquet of lilies to an ill man at the hospital instead narcissus.”

                                        “You should change your clothes, now that you’re a successful man.” said Kaya.

                                        “Hmm, I don’t know. I don’t have fashion sense.” said Usopp, “Couldn’t you help me with this?”

                                        “Sure!” replied Kaya.

                                        “Cool, what about tonight?” asked Usopp.

                                        Kaya’s face gloomed, “I can’t. Tonight I have a date.”

                                        “Oh not again…” groaned Usopp, “A date should delight you, not break you up like a stick.”

                                        “He’s a worker!” insisted Kaya.

                                        “Yeah, I would like to see what kind of worker is a shark man who wears a black jacket!” commented Buggy.

                                        –-------

                                        It was about eight of night. The shop was closed, but Usopp and Kaya were still there tiding up things. Buggy was out for an interview in a local TV station, talking about the phenomenal success of Kaya II. Usopp cleaned a shelf when a strong and noisy knock at the main door called his attention. Usopp looked at the door window, and for his horror and surprise he faced a huge being with dark blue skin, apparently strong and that resembled a saw-shark. He grinned evilly to Usopp and continued kept knocking at the door impatiently.

                                        “S-sorry, w-we are closed!” said Usopp to the shark man.

                                        Kaya approached Usopp to see what was happening and then noticed the creature. Her face paled in the same moment and she began to sweat.

                                        “It’s okay, Usopp… he’s my date.” she said.

                                        Usopp turned to Kaya, astonished, “He?”

                                        Kaya rushed to the door and opened it. The shark-man entered quickly and looked around the shop. He wore a black jacket, a white shirt and a pair of black trousers. He noticed Usopp shaking in fear and began to laugh maniacally.

                                        “Sha ha ha! Boy, you need some nitrous oxide!”

                                        The shark man gave his hand to Usopp, which Usopp hesitantly shook.
                                        “My name is Arlong, DDS. I think have seen you in the news. You’re the plant guy, right? Your name is… Usama.”

                                        “No, it’s…”

                                        “Hey, give me a chance! Is it… Usiris?” suggested Arlong.

                                        “It’s Usopp!” said Kaya, annoyed.

                                        The shark-man glared at Kaya, “Is someone talkin’ with you?”

                                        “Oh… excuse me.”

                                        “Excuse me WHAT?” roared Arlong.

                                        “Excuse me… doctor.” said Kaya, bowing her head.

                                        “That’s better.” Arlong smirked, “So… where is the plant?”

                                        “Right there.”

                                        Usopp pointed to Kaya II, which was near the window pane. Arlong approached it, looking very amazed.

                                        “Wow, that’s really nice! You know, if you are a fish-man, I could even congratulate you. But anyway, this plant isn’t human at all and you took care of it, so you deserve a prize!”

                                        “Yeah, maybe…” said Usopp, disgusted. He was starting to hate that guy.

                                        “You know, I always tell to this dimwit…” Arlong put his giant arm between Kaya, who looked at it with repulse, “that any kind of being can surpass humans. Humans are the weaklings of nature, and they deserve all kind of nasty things that happen to them.”

                                        “Hmm… that’s an interesting philosophic thinking.” babbled Usopp.

                                        “We are leaving now, buddy. Here is my card, if you have a root canal or something like that.”

                                        Arlong took off a small card from his trousers and gave to Usopp. It was black and had the address of the office written in a strong red font.

                                        “Come on blonde, let’s get out of here!” yelled Arlong to Kaya.

                                        “R-right away.” Kaya took her purse and jacket in the balcony and walked hurriedly. She gave one last glance at Usopp, and then went to the street.
                                        The neighborhood looked scary with the silent and the lack of light poles. Usopp could see a black motorcycle parked in the sidewalk. Arlong and Kaya rid in the motorcycle. As Arlong switched on the engine, the mobile gave a disturbing shriek so that Usopp had to cover his ears.

                                        “Got the handcuffs?” asked Arlong.

                                        “Yeah. They are here.” said Kaya, making a gesture to the purse.

                                        Arlong laughed once more and drove to the silent darkness of the night. Usopp entered in the shop, turned off the lights and closed the door. He walked to Kaya II, as if wanted to talk with someone.

                                        “You should see how he treats her. She needs a prince, not a sadist mutant fish like him. Sometimes, I can’t figure out what’s wrong with the world. Well, it’s kind of late. Good night.”

                                        The plant, as always did before Usopp go, opened her trap and pulled her tongue off, waiting for her supply of the day.

                                        “No… not today!” cried Usopp, “Let me heal for a few days, and then…”

                                        Suddenly, Usopp heard something that he never could imagine. It was a monstrous voice coming from inside of Kaya II, and what it said it was more unbelievable than itself:

                                        “Feed me!!!”

                                        Usopp froze. He stared at Kaya II, incredibly disturbed. He recommenced to shake nervously and his eyes bulged in terror.

                                        “Geez Kaya II, you can talk!” exclaimed Usopp

                                        “Of course I can talk!” said the plant again, “I have been trying to talk with you for days, but somehow my voice couldn’t be heard.”

                                        “Maybe because were you just a little Flytrap?”

                                        “Yeah, whatever. I don’t understand this stuff.”

                                        “Okay… So, do you want to eat today, Kaya II?” asked Usopp;

                                        “Yeah!!” yelled Kaya II, “And don’t call me Kaya! It’s girl’s name!”

                                        Usopp blinked, “What? So are you a boy?”

                                        “Definitely! In fact, I prefer you call me Luffy. And where is my food?! I’m starving!”

                                        “Calm down! Here is!”

                                        Usopp removed the bandages of his fingers and squeezed to the trap of Kaya II, or better, of Luffy. Only a few drops of blood came out.

                                        “More! More!” yelled Luffy.

                                        “Ugh… ugh! I can’t! If I give more than that, I’ll die!”

                                        “Oh, I’m sorry. Then in this case, give me a big piece of meat!”

                                        “That sounds much better.” said Usopp, relieved, “I will see if the market is still open…”

                                        “And it must be human meat!”

                                        Usopp gasped in terror.

                                        “WHAT? Where do I suppose that I will get it?!”

                                        “I suppose the butcher shop sells human meat as well.”

                                        “What the… What is wrong with this plant!?” thought Usopp.

                                        “Of course we don’t sell human meat, because it’s a crime to our society! See, to get human meat someone must be killed, therefore it is murder!”

                                        “Killing, huh? That sounds really bad… But I want my meat now!”

                                        “No! You will eat cow meat, Luffy!” protested Usopp.

                                        Luffy grunted angrily. Without warning, one of the vines rose and hit Usopp in the face.

                                        “OUCH! Why was that for?” cried Usopp, rubbing his cheek that was hurt by the vine.

                                        “I can move my body parts the way I can.” said Luffy, “Now, if you don’t want to receive other whip like that, bring my meat now!”

                                        “But how?! The only way to feed you is killing people, and I don’t want to do that!” grouched Usopp.

                                        “I can make it worthy.” said Luffy, “As long you feed me, I will get stronger, and so you will become more famous than before. You can have all the luxury and comfort that you all wanted!”

                                        “Yeah, you are right about this… but even so, I don’t want to go and slaughter people!” said Usopp.

                                        “Hmm, I know! You can find… a guy who DESERVES to become food.”

                                        “What are you saying?!” yelled Usopp.

                                        “Yes, it’s perfect!”

                                        “But… but…” stuttered Usopp, “I don’t know anyone who deserves to be chopped up and eaten by a plant!”

                                        “What about that shark-guy?” suggested Luffy.

                                        “W-w-what!?” squealed Usopp, “No! He would kill me!”

                                        “Hey! He is hurting that girl that you like, didn’t he? Why don’t you do something?”

                                        “No, it’s impossible! It’s out of… of…”

                                        Usopp began to feel dizzy. It was so many wicked ideas in his head that he couldn’t stand anymore. However, Luffy got a point about Arlong. If that was the only solution to rid him off of Kaya’s life, so it is, thought Usopp. But then there was the question of murder, which was so wrong like the person Arlong was. And there was still Luffy. And the shop. And his fame.

                                        Then, Usopp finally fainted.

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                                        “Wake up, idiot! This isn’t the way the big star of my shop should be!” yelled Buggy.

                                        Usopp moaned. He rose from the floor and realized he had slept in the shop. It was about morning, and the events of last night looked nothing but memories of a bad dream. Kaya II – or Luffy – was found in the same position as he was during the day.

                                        “Wow… sorry Mr. Buggy, I was cleaning stuff and maybe I had…”

                                        “It doesn’t matter. Now get up and fix everything before the customers. You will get double job today.” said Buggy.

                                        “Double… job?” said Usopp, puzzled.

                                        “Oh, I have to tell you.” Buggy’s voice became grim, “Kaya called me this morning and said she couldn’t come to work.”

                                        “Why?”

                                        “Well… it seems she fell from the stairs and hurt her neck, her left arm and her right leg.”

                                        A flame of fury passed through Usopp’s mind.

                                        “As far I concern, that’s not the real version, knowing that horrible guy that she dates. But anyway, that’s not my business.” said Buggy.

                                        “Yeah, that’s true.” muttered Usopp.

                                        “And what are you waiting for? Move on! We had a lot of work to do today!” ordered Buggy.

                                        Buggy rushed to the storage room. Usopp remained in the main room, pressing his hands and grinning of so much anger he felt. He turned to Luffy and whispered to the plant:

                                        “If I let him get away with, he’ll kill Kaya soon or later. Okay dude, you won. You’ll get your meal tonight.”

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                                          Wow, this is good! Better than Mirror Piece! …Maybe.
                                          But changing Nami to Kaya kinda makes Arlong pointless. I thought you'd switch him with Kuro or something.

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                                            Wow, this is good! Better than Mirror Piece! …Maybe.
                                            But changing Nami to Kaya kinda makes Arlong pointless. I thought you'd switch him with Kuro or something.

                                            Thanks! Yeah, I've think about Arlong's case when I decided to change Nami for Kaya, but then I thought a crack pairing like that wouldn't be bad at all.

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                                              Arlong's still abusive, no matter the hair colour of his victims.

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                                                  @Local-chan:

                                                  Ah It looks loads better, excellently so, A lot of dialogue compared to the actual actions, but it works still. Looks good.

                                                  I'm also thinking to come back to the old chapters, and change a few things and add more descriptions about the settings. Plus remove some unnecessary excerpts.

                                                  @IT'S A LION: Lol yeah, so true.

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                                                    dear GOD I wanna draw fan art of this story SO BADLY >_< I actually thought about a One Piece Little Shop of Horrors spoof before I knew someone already did it and OMFG I LOVE that it's Usopp and Kaya and that Luffy is the plant GOD I WANNA DRAW THAT SO BADLY LOL sounds great and I defiantely look forward to more if you're still working on it KuroNeko! ^^

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                                                      Thanks 😁 I will also look forward for your pics as well.

                                                      And yes, I'm still working. Just be patient, since I have more other bunch of stories to finish (I really need to organize myself >_<).

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                                                        This is one of my favorite plays of all time and I'd just like to say you've done a great job girl XD I will def draw fan art eventually….....Coralsnake I love your sig BTW That ussop/choppa is hilarious! XD

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                                                          Little Shop of Horrors is my FAVORITE Musical movie of all time even if it's not the best compaired to so many… I still love it... HOW can you go wrong with a singing plant who even curses!?? LOL ><

                                                          and thanks Hyper Dingo for the compliment ;3; the Usopp and Chopper one is my little badge I wear to cons LOL er well two cons... I made it not too long ago LOL >< CRAP maybe it was only one con OO; I drew a few friends t heir own little one piece badge so then I just put the pictures in my sig heh >< I wanna do more but I don't have many friends x_x;

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                                                            This is one of my favorite plays of all time and I'd just like to say you've done a great job girl XD I will def draw fan art eventually….....

                                                            I don't know if you are refering to me or CoralSnake, but I'm a boy XD

                                                            But thanks for the comment 😄 I want to see your fan-art too.

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