This is a series I've had in my head for years, and I've finally gotten around to writing a summary for the introduction story.
The writing might not be good, but it's the story that I'm curious to know what you think of. There are two version. The first one is very dark. When I read it to my mother, she said it was very intense and thought there was too much negativity around. So I wrote a second draft that's a little less dark. Of course, these are not the final versions. There will be changes to this story soon.
Warning: lengthy.
Draft#1 (Dark version)
Draft#2 (Less dark version)
And no, this does not take up one chapter. Way too long for that. I think this would take up about 6-8 chapters.