Thank everyone for the comments. And I appreciate your help, Hiroy.
Gotta redraw. I hate drawing the sea.
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I have an idea, but you need to be patient and it takes a while longer, but I would recommend trying to print out the text and glue it on the papers. Then you just copy the images and print. This will make the text blend in with the surroundings.
I tried to befriend with patience but it rejected me.
Is it really necessary though?
I might do it if I get an assistant, or a wife.
I am serious, but I have to cook and do laundry too.
Also, I recommend making your own font alphabet to this. When you're making such a "scruffy" style, the text needs to be more personal.
I would be be grateful if you can make one for me.:)
but it seems almost as empty as Bleach
That's surprisingly honest. If only Kubo got someone by his side to tell him that.
But you got the mood. That's how it supposed to be in that scene, where the character is feeling empty after the death of his beloved one.
I considered adding a few information in that page, but I was afraid they would ruin the empathizing effect.
I would be pissed though, if the artistic merit or effort in anything I do is anywhere near Bleach. I guess that is what I got for posting one page instead of a sequence.
Anyhow, this is time for experiment. I add some text that I intended to save for the next page. How does it feel?
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For the sake of experiment, I am going to post each page I draw. Anyone who want to read the comic for the sake of reading it, I recommend you not to open the spoiler tags and wait until the whole one shot is finished.
I'd definitely read it if you could keep this up every week or month?
I will try my best to finish 3 page each night.
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Or at least one page.
Though, I would warn you that the story is pretty depressing.
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Anyone who are interested in editing is entirely welcome to do so. I would be glad to have someone to help me in this field. Here is the original pic:
http://i.imgur.com/RZMt4.jpg